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Underrail => Bugs => Topic started by: Styg on December 22, 2012, 04:11:04 pm

Title: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on December 22, 2012, 04:11:04 pm
In this thread you can report spelling and grammar errors that you encounter (dialogs, item descriptions, etc). I'll update this post to note which ones I corrected, so please check it out before posting an already reported one. Forget it, can't be bothered to keep a list, so feel free to double post.

Thanks for the suggestion, Spinewire. ;)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Grintch on December 31, 2012, 03:19:25 am
After finding Mordre at the lake and asking him his name, he says: "I'd tell you that, but they I'd have to kill you. Just call me Mordre". I think the old joke is supposed to be: but "then" I'd have to kill you.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Soli on January 05, 2013, 08:31:00 pm
This may have already been pointed out, if so I apologize, just thought I'd mention it anyways.  I am currently playing as a female character and there have been few cases where other characters will say 'his' instead of 'hers' when referring to me.  I'm sorry I can't remember exactly where it occurred, but I know it happened at least twice in my play-through so far.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on January 05, 2013, 10:40:36 pm
This may have already been pointed out, if so I apologize, just thought I'd mention it anyways.  I am currently playing as a female character and there have been few cases where other characters will say 'his' instead of 'hers' when referring to me.  I'm sorry I can't remember exactly where it occurred, but I know it happened at least twice in my play-through so far.

I know where one of the occurrences is at least.

If you run into it again please let me know who were you talking to.

thanks.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ADH_DJ on January 15, 2013, 08:33:37 pm
Poison Caltrops -

 At the end of the items descriptiom its says 'There Caltrops have also been poisoned with Burrower poison'.

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 04:37:28 am
The email from Tanner welcoming me to the stations says "I welcome you into our folds". I think it should say I welcome you into our fold.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 04:40:21 am
Also in the tool-tip for "Controlled Zones" the 3rd point says "If members of certain factions discovery traps or explosives planted by you...". Its should be "discover", not "discovery".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 04:45:25 am
I'm getting pedantic now...but the tool-tip for "Burst" would sound better if it was changed from

"Rapidly fires five bullets at reduced precision. This attack also has chance to miss the primary target and hit other characters in the line of fire instead"

to

"Rapidly fires five bullets with reduced precision. This attack also has a chance to miss the primary target, possibly hitting other characters in the line of fire instead"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 04:49:49 am
Stealth tool-tip.

"To successfully hide from someone they need to keep out of their sight for a while"

change to

"To successfully hide from someone you need to keep out of their sight for a while"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 04:52:03 am
Jack Quicksilver in the Cantina...

"Haven't seen you are here before."

Change to

"Haven't seen you around here before."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 04:58:20 am
Hadrian Tanner:
"Your welcoming party will have to wait though, I'm afraid, as there are some pressing matters keeping lot of us occupied at the moment."

Change to

"Your welcoming party will have to wait though, I'm afraid, as there are some pressing matters keeping a lot of us occupied at the moment."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 05:02:37 am
Dr Pasquale:
"You see, test results show that you have certain amount of psionic potential."

Tricky one this is...

Either

"You see, test results show that you have a certain amount of psionic potential."

or

"You see, test results show that you have certain amounts of psionic potential."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 05:05:28 am
Pasquale again...and this one is really nit-picking...


He says "such as influencing minds of others" instead of "such as influencing the minds of others"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 05:07:51 am
Pasquale:

"Research indicates that it's relatively recent genetic mutation."

Change to

"Research indicates that it's a relatively recent genetic mutation."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 05:11:30 am
Pasquale:

"Roche argued that even if you combine all of the genetic processors at the world in this time..."

change to

"Roche argued that even if you combine all of the genetic processors in the world at this time..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 05:22:19 am
Ezra:

"As he turns around to face you immediately notice there is something off with this man."

change to

"As he turns around to face you, you immediately notice there is something off with this man."

or

"As he turns around you immediately notice there is something off with this man."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on March 16, 2013, 05:29:23 am
Old Jonas:

"They were build by Omega station..."

change to

"They were built by Omega station..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on March 19, 2013, 04:56:39 am
Cloaking Device crafting recipe requires Energy Code instead of Energy Core
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on March 20, 2013, 01:31:32 am
Fixed all above. Thanks a lot guys for taking the time to post this.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on March 20, 2013, 03:23:55 am
Dockmaster Silas:

"He lives in a shack just north of the tavern, right new to Len's shop."

change to

"He lives in a shack just north of the tavern, right next to Len's shop."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on March 23, 2013, 03:29:06 am
Cerebral Trauma feat:
Increases the based damage of your Neural Overload...
-> base

Hypothermia feat:
Your cryokinesis and cyrostasis psi abilities...
-> cryostasis

Interloper feat:
Lowers the stealth movements speed penalty...
-> movement

Psychosis feat:
Increases critical chance of all psi abilities by 15% but also increases their psi point cost by 10%.
-> 15%, but

Sharpshooter feat:
Increases your pistols, crossbows and snipers critical damage bonus when fully focused by 50%.
-> Increases your critical damage bonus with pistols, crossbows and sniper rifles by 50% when fully focused.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on March 23, 2013, 04:52:00 am
Old Jonas dialogue:

People around these parts call them 'tunnelers' because they are known to dig wide sprawling tunnels throughout the underground, connecting remote places of the Underrial.
-> Underrail

Superstitious don't like people saying that word though; they say it can draw their attention to you.
-> Superstitious people don't like saying that

2. You mean like: faceless, faceless, faceless*
This line seems unfinished? Or is the * just supposed to be a question mark?

1. So you've me some personally?
-> met
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: LazyMonk on March 25, 2013, 12:37:00 am
When talking to Second Lieutenant Garren, the player has the following dialogue line:
(reporting the threat to the embassy)

"This guy named Abram that hands out at the tavern..."

Should be instead:

"This guy named Abram that hangs out at the tavern..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: mebahell on March 26, 2013, 12:09:46 am
Cave hopper meat:
"can be consumed" is repeated 2 times in the description.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: posfan12 on March 26, 2013, 06:50:17 am
Old Jonas

- Now that's a critter you just want to steer clear off.
+ Now that's a critter you just want to steer clear of.

- Scientists call them Azure-something, because of their blue stripes, but the rest of us just calls them psi beetles or psi bugs for obvious reasons -  they can sling all kinds of psionics at you.
+ Scientists call them Azure-something, because of their blue stripes, but the rest of us just call them psi beetles or psi bugs for obvious reasons -  they can sling all kinds of psionics at you.

- If you run into two of them, you better start retreating while you can. At least they are not that fast, so you should be able to.
+ If you run into two of them, you better start retreating while you can. At least they are not that fast, so you should be able to evade them.

- From my experience it's the smaller groups or individual tunnelers that you should be most vary of. Larger groups generally leave other Underrail folk alone as long as they don't bother them.
+ From my experience it's the smaller groups or individual tunnelers that you should be most weary of. Larger groups generally leave other Underrail folk alone as long as they aren't bothered.

- Some also call them 'the Faceless' because they believe that under their huge masks they have no face. Superstitious don't like people saying that word though; they say it can draw their attention to you.
+ Some people also call them 'The Faceless Ones' because they believe that under their huge masks they have no face. Superstitious folk don't like people saying that word though; they say it can draw their attention to you.

- If you absolutely must fight them, try to get close and personal. That's when they are not comfortable with exposing their massive brains so they can sling psionics and will either try to gain some distance or will just bite you; and their bite is far less dangerous than their psionics.
+ Lots of problems in this sentence.

- You see, the weird thing is, not only do they hit you harder when they are in a group, they also start throwing crazier and crazier stuff your way the more of them joins the fight.
+ You see, the weird thing is, not only do they hit you harder when they are in a group, they also start throwing crazier and crazier stuff your way the more of them join the fight.



There are a lot of grammar errors that I didn't point out in the above. But my grammar is not much better, so I can't suggest alternatives.  :-[
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on March 28, 2013, 06:07:38 pm
Fixed the stuff above.

Didn't change "The Faceless" to "The Faceless Ones", though. I think the former is more fitting.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: posfan12 on March 31, 2013, 12:02:35 am
Oops. I suggested "wearily" in my last post, but that should really be "warily". They're two different words apparently.

[edit]

Also:

Some also call them 'the Faceless' because they believe that under their huge masks they have no face. Superstitious don't like people saying that word though; they say it can draw their attention to you.

I'm not sure if "they have no face" should really be "they have no faces". Might need to consult an English expert.

Also might want to change "they say it can draw their attention to you" to "they believe saying it can draw their attention to you". Again, not 100% sure.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 08:18:37 pm
Engineering.

Harold : After that you should be able to reactivate all the outposts. I'm afraid you'll have to do that manually though.  You see, each of them has a switch that cuts off the power in a case of a hazard.

should be : cuts off the power in case of a hazard.

get rid of the 'a'

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 08:32:12 pm
Opening sequence:

Vera Hale: Almost everyone is working shifts up there now that administration level is stabilized.

maybe try: now that 'the' administration level is stabilized.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 08:47:07 pm
Cantina

Arlene: You've met Arlene during your testing period.

'You met'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 09:29:26 pm
Medical

Pasquale: Furthermore, Roche points out that the areas of the brain where the activity takes place were never even properly charted, let alone decoded.

I'd get rid of 'even'

Pasquale: There are ways to do this by extended meditation, but this can take years.  We have more efficient method nowadays.

'We have more efficient methods nowadays.'

Pasquale: Quinton is well versed in Metathermics, which is the area of psionic development that deals with instigating rapid temperature changes and chemical reactions.  He used to be one of Biotech researchers working on new applications of psionics.

'He used to be one of 'the' Biotech researchers'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 10:00:37 pm
First Mission.

Hadrian Tanner:  I think there are total of five outposts plus the one with the generator.

'I think there are 'a' total of five'

Engineering.

Ezra: He speaks with calm and even voice.

'He speaks with 'a' calm and even voice.'

After mind control. Description says.  'You find yourself on a small isle in a middle of lake with no recollection of how you got here.'

Should be more like ' You find yourself on a small isle in the middle of a lake with no recollection of how you got here.'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 10:43:39 pm
Quinton:  Well, I never really had appropriate place to keep the rathounds,

'Well, I never really had 'an' appropriate place to keep the rathounds,'

Quinton: I have prepared the final version of concoction and filled a set of crossbow bolts with it.

'I have prepared the final version of 'the' concoction....'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 10:48:31 pm
Big Bret: You'll going to love it here then.

'You're going to love it here then.'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 11:04:34 pm
Vera Hale: Certainly. United Stations, also called Union by some, is a confederacy of stations in north and central Underrail.  it's an attempt to unify the entirety of Underrail so that we could all work together towards a better future of the human race.

'towards a better future 'for' the human race.

Vera Hale: We currently have good trading relations with the union and I personally think it would be a good idea to be among the first to join it here in the south.  We are arguably the most powerful faction in these parts so we could position ourselves advantageously in their organization and also retain high degree of independence.

'in their organization and also retain 'a' high degree of independence.'

Vera Hale:  But let me ask you what is your opinion on the matter?  Would you like to see your station become a member of the United Stations?
option 2. response: 'I'm not sure. I'm reserving judgment until I learn out more about all this.'

remove 'out'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 17, 2013, 11:33:19 pm
Roman: We're not sure.  it might be that the tunnel just caved in couple of places.......

'We're not sure.  It might be that the tunnel just caved in 'in a' couple of places.

Bisson: Hello, friend.  I don't believe we met. Name's Bisson.

'Hello, friend.  I don't believe 'we've' met.  Name's Bisson.'

Bisson: It's when you focus your mind to create a telekinetic ball and launch it at your target.  Impact is often so strong that if you hit a living target with it you'll likely to daze it for a short while.

'if you hit a living target with it 'you're' likely to daze if for a short while. or 'if you hit a living target with it you'll likely daze it for a short while.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 18, 2013, 02:00:57 pm
End of First Mission.

Hadrian Tanner: Also, Gorsky has lead an expedition
 into the nearby GMS compound and he requested you specifically join them there.  Go the station platform exit and talk to Essie.

'Go 'to' the station platform and exit and talk to Essie.'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Oldbolt on April 18, 2013, 02:19:49 pm
Hopper collection Mission

South Gate Sentry: If you haven't already, be sure to talk to Old Jonas at the Crossroads.  He knows more about the creatures lurking the caves than anyone.

'He knows more about  the creatures lurking 'in' the caves than anyone.'

Would it be easier if I collected a list or shall I just keep posting as I find spelling/grammar errors?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Utgartha on April 23, 2013, 04:35:42 am
I hope this hasn't already been done, but when you talk to the old man Jonas at the crossroads he has many spelling errors in his speech.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: nezran on June 03, 2013, 01:51:50 am
I found two errors:

The first has been mentioned, but I think both suggestions are wrong:

Old Jonas
"From my experience it's the smaller groups or individual tunnelers that you should be vary of.
The word should be "wary."

The second:

Quinton
"If you preform one little task for me"
The word should be "perform."

That's what I have so far. I just got into the caves. Something about this game really clicks with me. I like all the design decisions. This is so cool.



Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 28, 2013, 05:53:43 am
Oh boy. Stumbled upon a huge trove of typos while copypasting information en masse to the wiki.

Blueprint descriptions in the crafting menu have some issues and many component descriptions have (copy-pasted) typos.


Blueprint incendiary bolt:
missing crafting menu description?

Blueprint goggles:
Goggles have to main component: the pair of lenses that provide various advantages
Goggles have two main components: the pair of lenses that provides various advantages

ALL gun frames:
This frame used to create <name> type <gun type>.
This frame is used to create <name> type <gun type>.

Mutant Acid Gland:
With the right skills powerful acid can be extract from it.
With the right skills powerful acid can be extracted from it.

Goggles Frame:
This is a frame for advance tactical goggles.
This is a frame for advanced tactical goggles.


I think the component descriptions had more typos, but I can't find them anymore... the human brain has too good auto-correct features!
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 28, 2013, 01:02:52 pm
Got one more.

Aluminized Cloth
This material can somewhat reflects the high radiant loads produces by fire
This material can somewhat reflect the high radiant loads produced by fire
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 28, 2013, 01:05:58 pm
Burrower Poison Gland
This is a poison gland of a burrower. With the right skills powerful toxin can be extract from it.
This is a poison gland of a burrower. With the right skills powerful toxin can be extracted from it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 28, 2013, 02:06:17 pm
SMG Frame: Jackrabbit
This frame used to create Jaguar type submachine gun. It supports only 5mm barrels.
This frame is used to create Jackrabbit type submachine gun. It supports only 5mm barrels.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 28, 2013, 02:12:39 pm
Serrated Tungsten Steel Blade
It's a nasty looking serrated steel blade that can be mounted on a metal armor suit to inflict bleeding wounds.
It's a nasty looking serrated tungsten steel blade that can be mounted on a metal armor suit to inflict bleeding wounds.

Probably. The current description works as well, but is not different from Serrated Steel Blade.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 02, 2013, 06:31:52 pm
Kareem dialogue for the blue eel fishing quest:

1. Agreed. Give him ten blue eels.

Should be five.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 02, 2013, 06:43:09 pm
Floating combat text for Uncanny Dodge ability says "Special Tactics" :D
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 03, 2013, 12:35:03 pm
The mysterious pillars on Silent Isle:
though you are unsure whether they actual produce sound or if it's just all in your head.
though you are unsure whether they actually produce sound or if it's just all in your head.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 03, 2013, 12:47:04 pm
Mysterious Disk item description:
The surface is course
The surface is coarse
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 03, 2013, 12:58:02 pm
These just keep popping up :D

Sniper Rifle Frame: Harbinger
This frame used to create Corsair type sniper rifle.
This frame is used to create Harbinger type sniper rifle.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 09, 2013, 02:16:48 pm
Putrefied Rathound Tissue item description:
Partially decompose rathound tissue sample.
Partially decomposed rathound tissue sample.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 09, 2013, 10:01:04 pm
Throwing Net
Effective only against target's with low strength.
Effective only against targets with low strength.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on August 10, 2013, 12:01:19 am
Fixed everything up to this point. I need to hire a writer.  :-[
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 11, 2013, 02:28:52 pm
Caltrops (and probably poisoned ones as well)
(if targets has no movement points, it loses action points instead)
(if target has no movement points, it loses action points instead)


Don't be discouraged, your creative writing is good. These are all just little careless errors and typos.
It can't be that bad since no one even noticed these before, even though a lot of people - myself included - have read all this stuff many times while playing. ;)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 12, 2013, 11:34:46 pm
Gorsky after the GMS mission, if asked for the key and persuasion check fails:
I can't have those critters getting out and about.You are not getting this key card. Not get out of here!
I can't have those critters getting out and about.(SPACE)You are not getting this key card. Now get out of here!

Tanner briefing you for the drill parts mission:
I won't ask how you got it.But if you can't find it, I want every coin back.
I won't ask how you got it.(SPACE)But if you can't find it, I want every coin back.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 13, 2013, 10:37:03 pm
Mining explosive
This remotely activated explosive charge should be able to a cave in of the Old Junkyard gate if placed at the right spot.
This remotely activated explosive charge should be able to cause a cave-in of the Old Junkyard gate if placed at the right spot.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 31, 2013, 01:22:07 pm
First batch of my Quality Assurance results from 0.1.9.0. ;)

- Almost everything related to the new explosive says T.N.T Charge. Should be either "T.N.T." or "TNT".
- Blueprint: Psionic Headband item description: Contains instructions on how to create a psionci headband.
- The new lenses have skill requirements of Mechanics 0 and Electronics 1. Should those (especially mechanics 0) be visible or are the values bugged?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on September 14, 2013, 10:48:21 pm
Fixed all. Thanks. :)

And whoopsy the new lenses weren't being generated with quality. :P
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: a bear named spigot on September 25, 2013, 07:52:58 am
Rathound Leather Boots from bringing Old Jonas back his watch,

the feint stench of this filthy creature remains.
the faint stench of the filthy creature remains.

Old Citizen through the trap door in the GMS compound refers to the player as 'he' when PC is female. When the raiders take you to their boss, they say 'his name is...'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on September 25, 2013, 05:24:41 pm
Rathound Leather Boots from bringing Old Jonas back his watch,

the feint stench of this filthy creature remains.
the faint stench of the filthy creature remains.

Old Citizen through the trap door in the GMS compound refers to the player as 'he' when PC is female. When the raiders take you to their boss, they say 'his name is...'

Fixed. The existing rathound leather items will still have the typo though.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: LazyMonk on September 25, 2013, 10:18:33 pm
Captain Broderick about the Silent Isle:
I don't know if it's hunted or what,
I don't know if it's haunted or what,
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: SagaDC on September 28, 2013, 12:17:01 pm
Not quite a spelling or grammar error, but still a typo. The item 'Sniper Rifle Frame: Harbinger' has the following description: 'This frame is used to create Corsair type sniper rifle.'

It references the wrong type of Sniper Rifle. And I suppose it should be slightly tweaked to say something like 'This frame is used to create a Harbinger type sniper rifle' or 'This frame is used to create Harbinger type sniper rifles'.

Very minor, but I figured it was worth mentioning.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: SagaDC on September 28, 2013, 01:43:09 pm
One of Wyatt Pear's lines is: "Stayed here even when everyone else fled or gone insane from mutations."

It should probably be: "Stayed here even when everyone else fled or went insane from mutations."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on September 28, 2013, 06:39:53 pm
Not quite a spelling or grammar error, but still a typo. The item 'Sniper Rifle Frame: Harbinger' has the following description: 'This frame is used to create Corsair type sniper rifle.'

It references the wrong type of Sniper Rifle. And I suppose it should be slightly tweaked to say something like 'This frame is used to create a Harbinger type sniper rifle' or 'This frame is used to create Harbinger type sniper rifles'.
I thought this was already fixed, but looks like it's not :o

SMG frames also have the same problem, at least Steel Cat description refers to Jaguar and Jackrabbit refers to Jaguar.
Assault rifle and pistol frames seem to be ok.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: micksy on September 29, 2013, 02:47:06 am
Hadrian Tanner says "It's a town off the grid, built around, and from, an old junkyard. It's a dangerous place ran by two rival gangs."

Maybe change "ran" to "run".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Rothgar on October 01, 2013, 03:41:34 pm
Old Jonas, after accepting the junkyard drill quest

"Off to do some junk digging, eh? Just go to the far side of Mushroom Cove and take the tunnels north. If you don't mauled by rathounds or mind-blasted by psi beetles, eventually you'll reach the junkyard."

If you don't get mauled by rathounds... is how it should be worded.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on October 02, 2013, 05:37:58 pm
Pummel feat & ability:
a special attack with a sledgehammer that deals weapon 50% damage and does not ignore damage threshold, but puts the living targets off balance for 2 turns if it lands.
a special attack with a sledgehammer that deals 50% weapon damage and does not ignore damage threshold, but puts living targets off balance for 2 turns if it lands.

Bone Breaker feat:
This effect lasts 3 turns and stacks up 2 times. Only works on targets that actually have ribs.
This effect lasts 3 turns and stacks up to 2 times. Only works on targets that actually have ribs.

Crippling Strike feat & ability:
unarmed or knife attack that deals 125% damage and reduces the targets strength by 2 if it penetrates armor.
unarmed or knife attack that deals 125% damage and reduces the target's strength by 2 if it penetrates armor.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Cush on October 20, 2013, 12:24:56 pm
Quote
Hadrian Tanner

Tanner hold (holds) both of his hands up to ease the tension, before turning to you. What do you think, PlayerName?

1. I think I'll leave the politics up to you guys.

2. etc

Quote
Mysterious Pillars

As time passes you lose the perception of the world around you. You can no longer hear the water dripping from the cave ceiling or the insects skittering amount (amongst) the mushrooms. etc

Quote
Jenny

This woman doesn't appear (appears) to be delirious from blood loss and more importantly - poison. If she doesn't receive an antidote soon, she will surely die. Cliif... is that you?

1. Administer the antidote and help her outside.
2. Leave her be.

Quote
Old Jonas

You can find him in the under-passage of the Lower Underrail not far from SGS. Just head out north past our station and take one of the stairs down. Look for his shop is down there. etc

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on October 21, 2013, 04:20:41 pm
Insulated metal armors:
Below the protective plates is is an insulated vest.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: agris on November 14, 2013, 12:26:54 am
'treshold' -> 'threshold'

(http://i.imgur.com/oQTUUGS.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on January 12, 2014, 10:25:04 am
Fixed everything above. Some changes to item descriptions and the like will only apply to new items, though.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on January 22, 2014, 01:59:08 am
Lake Poppy

This is a seed of the lake poppy plant. It can be used to create a tasty nut roll, but due to its scarcity it's more commonly in medical purposes as a skilled horticulturist can extract morphine from it.
-> This is a seed of the lake poppy plant. It can be used to create a tasty nut roll, but due to its scarcity it's more commonly used in medical purposes as a skilled horticulturist can extract morphine from it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on January 22, 2014, 02:40:00 pm
Shroomhead

You're subconscious is tuned into the fungal surroundings so well that you recover 15 psi points when picking up mindshrooms.
-> Your subconscious is tuned into the fungal surroundings so well that you recover 15 psi points when picking up mindshrooms.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on January 22, 2014, 11:32:39 pm
Pig leather uses description from rathound leather :D

Fancy Rathound Ear
This rathound was sporting a small gold earing for some reason
-> This rathound was sporting a small gold earring for some reason

Persicope Part
-> Periscope Part
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on January 24, 2014, 04:12:54 pm
rail crossing doc dialogue

It's really messy. Max lost so much blood, almost thought he wouldn't make it.<missing space>Morphine and bandages are scarce, so I can't afford to sell you any right now.



edit - holding cell key
This is the key that unlocks the holding cell in Buzzrer's shop.
-> This is the key that unlocks the holding cell in Buzzer's shop.



edit2 - napalm c
This powerful military grade incendiary substance. Handle with extreme care.
-> This is powerful military grade incendiary substance. Handle with extreme care.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on January 26, 2014, 08:53:28 pm
Quote from: Hadrian Tanner

Tanner hold (holds) both of his hands up to ease the tension, before turning to you. What do you think, PlayerName?

1. I think I'll leave the politics up to you guys.

2. etc

Quote from: Mysterious Pillars
As time passes you lose the perception of the world around you. You can no longer hear the water dripping from the cave ceiling or the insects skittering amount (amongst) the mushrooms. etc

Quote from: Jenny
This woman doesn't appear (appears) to be delirious from blood loss and more importantly - poison. If she doesn't receive an antidote soon, she will surely die. Cliff... is that you?

1. Administer the antidote and help her outside.
2. Leave her be.

Quote from: Old Jonas
You can find him in the under-passage of the Lower Underrail not far from SGS. Just head out north past our station and take one of the stairs down. Look for his shop is down there. etc

From those, at least Jenny's dialogue hasn't been fixed, you might want to doublecheck the others as well.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on January 29, 2014, 01:12:34 am
This time it's hard war and servers inside masks. :P


combat log for Hardware Bug says Hardwar bug

and faceless mask fragment:
The inner workings of mask have been destroyed or removed so it's impossible to tell if there's some non-obvious purpose the mask servers.
-> The inner workings of mask have been destroyed or removed so it's impossible to tell if there's some non-obvious purpose the mask serves.

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: RonniDeWorm on February 08, 2014, 03:43:37 pm
Vera Hale: (when you ask her about core city)

"It's a city to the north that spans both levels of underrail. It servers as both a gateway to the Upper Underrail and to the United Stations territories to the north "

servers --> serves

--> ... a gateway to both the Upper Underrail  and the United Stations territories to the north
(now it looks like it serves as something other than a gateway, but you don't mention the other thing)

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Prophet on February 26, 2014, 11:23:05 pm
I've found a lot of typos / grammar errors and I'm going to post here all I've found (sorry, if someone else posted some of those before, but I'm assuming that if someone did, Styg would have fixed this by now).

SGS, Arlene: "I heard it's much worse up north. Something about a Union's frieghter crashing and getting buried on a side rail near The Core. Man, I can already imagine..." - despite playing as a female character, she refers to my character as 'man'.

Tranquilizing Bolt description: "When fired from a crossbow this bolt that purposely limited amount of damage..." - "crossbow, this bolt does purposely limited amount of damage..."

Antithermic Rathound Leather Overcoat description: "Its surface material can somewhat reflects the high radiant..." - "can somewhat reflect the high radiant..."

SGS, Quinton: "If you meet one, be careful. It will spit tick hard spines at you..." - should be 'thick hard', I think (tick is an insect and I don't think you meant that burrower is shooting hard insects, right? : D

SGS, Old Jonas: "Oh if you are heading there, could you do me a favor. I was scavenging..." - "Oh, if you are heading there, could you do me a favor? I was scavenging..."

SGS, Old Jonas: "lass, don't think there's much to do..." - "Lass, don't think..." (capitalization)

SGS, Old Jonas: "It's covered with...ugh, you're right - best that I don't know." - I think there should be one space after '...' - "It's covered with... ugh, you're right..."

SGS, Tanner: "Good work, Player. We can now start the restoration process. Here are your credits.
1. Excellent. So what's next on the agenda." -  "So what's next on the agenda?"

Celeritas River, Mordre: "How about a health hypo." - "How about a health hypo?"

That's all I have for now, but I'll post more, if I see any.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Prophet on March 14, 2014, 03:13:40 pm
SGS, Big Bret (after finishing his task): "Eventually, yes. But until then I need to keep track of them, and it's easier if their given names." - "if they are given names."

GMS, Gorsky: "We're trying to bo break into that vault over there, but it's not going too well.
1. What's so important about that vault." - "1. What's so important about that vault?"

SGS, Tanner (explaining about Junkyard, last line): "Essie or Jonas can give you instructions how to get there." - "Essie or Jonas can give you instructions on how to get there."

SGS, Vera Hale (questioning her about trade documents): "Tanner mentioned you need some documents delivered to an embassy in Junkyard?" - "Tanner mentioned you need some documents delivered to an embassy in Junkyard."

Package delivery quest - one of the bandit says "Quicky, kill him" even if you're character is female.

Junkyard, Kareem: "It's also called 'Depot A' It's closed off section of the Junkyard were some sort of an accident..." - "It's closed off section of the Junkyard where some sort of an accident..."

Junkyard, Vince: "You'll pay like everyone else. Besides, what's a couple of charons for you SGS folk." - "Besides, what's a couple of charons for you SGS folk?"

Junkyard, Katherine: "Well rabid mutated dogs for one, that much I know myself." - "Well, rabid mutated dogs for one, that much I know myself."

Junkyard, Silas (asking him about Black Eels): "Tell me about the Black Eels? Are you the head honcho?" - "Tell me about the Black Eels. Are you the head honcho?"

Junkyard, Silas: "So you up for this?
2. Besides this, how many more favors I need to do you before I've get to the wormhole?" - I think this should be more like: "Besides this, how many more favors I need to do you before I'll get access to the wormhole?"

Oh, and there's a weird bug in the ladder encounter in GMS (raiders and the old man). In that particular dialog it is impossible to choose any answer with keyboard shortcuts - you can only use mouse to do so.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on April 08, 2014, 11:01:02 am
Fixed all of the above. Keep in mind that some of the text will not be updated in the ongoing games (generated items, local items such as keys, etc).

Oh, and there's a weird bug in the ladder encounter in GMS (raiders and the old man). In that particular dialog it is impossible to choose any answer with keyboard shortcuts - you can only use mouse to do so.

This seems to occur sometimes regardless of the dialog in question. I'll look into it at some point.

Keep it coming. Only YOU can prevent the butchering of the English language.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Aralvar on April 15, 2014, 07:36:58 pm
What I've noticed so far, sorry if these have already been mentioned:

Talking to Grover "off hook" should be "off the hook".

Sledgehammer description should start with "A sledgehammer" or "The sledgehammer" not "sledgehammer".

Ship captain "save your story for barrel fire" should be "save your story for a barrel fire"

Three thugs outside of Junkyard, says "Bandit enters combat." should be "Thug enters combat."

Pig hide has rathound hide description.

I'll post more when I find them.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Jazhara7 on April 21, 2014, 07:55:06 pm
Doc in Foundry, when being asked about the mine creatures.

"Getting pierced, clawed, torn to peaces[...]"

Should be "pieces"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Prophet on April 23, 2014, 08:30:47 pm
New version out so I started another playthrough, noting every error or other kind of spelling bug on my way through the game.

Character Creation / Level Up, Guns Skill description: "Also, the higher your skill level, the more advance weapons you can wield effectively." - "the more advanced weapons you can wield..."

Character Creation / Level Up, Methathermics Skill description: "Ability of mind to..." - "Ability of the mind to..."

Stealth Mode ability description: "To successfully hide from someone, they need to keep out of their sight for a while." - "To successfully hide from someone, you need to keep out of their sight for a while."

Game options, Interface tab - there is a column of 'Scrolling Combat Text' and one of these reads: "Resists And" - I guess there is the rest of this text, but we just can't see it, as it's too long for that column.

SGS, Gorsky (target practice quest): "You use the console to set the target distance, right." - don't know about the exact intention, but this should either be: "to set the target distance, right?", or more likely: "to set the right target distance".

Scope description: "It can be mounted crossbows and rifles to increase the weapon's precision." - "It can be mounted on crossbows..."

Shock Bolt description: "Use: Shoots this bolt striking the target" - while not exactly a typo, all other special bolts start with "Use: Shoots this bolt from a crossbow..." Kind of a matter of consistency : P

Smart Lens description: "This lens can interact..." - "Those lens can interact..."

SGS, Ezra: after coming back to him while he 'teleported' you on the island, he says "Only what you wanted. Consider that first lesson free of charge." and there seems to be an extra (or two) new lines after that, as the dialog options are way too lower than usual.

Magnesium Powder description: "Magnesium powder is high flammable..." - "Magnesium powder is highly flammable..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Racki Dumatre on April 26, 2014, 04:14:44 pm
SGS, Pasquale - When asking him about the Faceless invasion, he says "it's exiting"  should be "exciting".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on April 29, 2014, 06:30:13 pm
Vera Hale on joining United States:
"what is your opinion on the matter"
"what is your opinion on this matter" ?

Old Jonas:
"been crawling through them tunnels"
"been crawling through the tunnels" ?

Grover after not killing him:
"Doing good, man?" if PC is a woman
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: LightningMonk on April 30, 2014, 04:00:33 am
The corpses that appear in the mines near The Beast are named "Faseless Corpse" rather than Faceless.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Eliasfrost on May 18, 2014, 02:39:07 pm
When talking to Clifton he says "Greetings, I'm Clitfon--" instead of Clifton. *giggle*

When talking to Harold about the battery system, you are given the option to bargain for a higher pay. But the options says [Barter] when it should be [Mercantile] for a skill check.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 02, 2014, 12:59:48 pm
expose weakness feat:
You can preform a special melee attack
-> You can perform a special melee attack
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 02, 2014, 04:46:16 pm
uncanny dodge:
dodge the next 3 regular or special melee attack
-> dodge the next 3 regular or special melee attacks
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 10, 2014, 10:04:30 pm
balaclava blueprint description:
headfear -> headwear or headgear

advanced health hypo description:
It's much more effective then a regular health hypo.
-> It's much more effective than a regular health hypo.

Medium Frequency Shield Modulator:
This modulator can be used when crafting energy shield emitters that have a decent deflecting capabilities across all impact speeds.
-> This modulator can be used when crafting energy shield emitters that have decent deflecting capabilities across all impact speeds.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 13, 2014, 07:03:53 am
At the Junkyard, right outside the United Stations Embassy I'm talking to Second Lieutenant Garren and when I select the option, "4. You don't have any jurisdiction over this place, right?" He replies with:

"The Junkyard is not part of the Protectorate, no. But be advised that the embassy is sovereign territory of the Protectorate and that I'm allowed and required to act to prevent and/or counteract any action that might endanger it or its staff regardless or jurisdictional boundaries."

The bolded 'or' should be an 'of'.

-

balaclava blueprint description:
headfear -> headwear or headgear

Headfear :D It makes sense because Balaclavas boost intimidate.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 14, 2014, 02:38:17 am
H&K MP5

"It's an old world 9mm sub-machine gun. It's reliable and precise even during prolong bursts."

Bolded 'prolong' should be 'prolonged'.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 14, 2014, 04:18:23 pm
When talking to Pasquale, post-Armadillo Drill finding, I selected the option, "What are your thoughts on the Faceless invasion?"

He responded with:

"I must say it's an exiting turn of events. We know so little about the Faceless and how their society works. Rumor has it that they have highly developed psionic abilities and that they communicate through telepathy."

Bolded 'exiting' should be 'exciting'.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 15, 2014, 03:19:08 am
Found an obvious one:

Put a Crawler Stinger and an Ampule in Extract Humour and you get "Cave Ear Poison".

It has the correct item description and appearance, but it's just called Cave Ear Poison.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 16, 2014, 01:19:37 am
Sports Almanac

"It's an old magazine from the future. Too bad last sport result listed here took place couple hundred years ago."

This one actually raised a question or two from me:

What does the first sentence mean? An old magazine from the future?

Second sentence should probably be, "Too bad the last sport result listed here took place a couple hundred years ago."

This is also the first thing I've seen that set some kind of time frame, I had no idea that hundreds of years had necessarily passed.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 17, 2014, 05:24:03 am
Notes:
A young man named Newton was sent by Big Bret to catch cave hoppers in the Mushroom cove, but he hasn't returned yet. See what taking him so long
-> A young man named Newton was sent by Big Bret to catch cave hoppers in the Mushroom cove, but he hasn't returned yet. See what's taking him so long


Extract humour blueprint:
A number of bodily fluids, such as blood, toxins, and acid, can extracted be from organs of various creatures.
-> A number of bodily fluids, such as blood, toxins, and acid, can be extracted from organs of various creatures.


Shield emitter blueprint:
The type modulator will determine
-> The modulator type will determine
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 17, 2014, 03:48:47 pm
Not a typo per se, but Optoelectric nuclear battery blueprint has "Cannot be recharged in combat" text/attribute for some reason ???


Burrower carapace:
Burrower carapace is though and relatively light.
-> Burrower carapace is tough and relatively light.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 17, 2014, 04:18:16 pm
Not a typo per se, but Optoelectric nuclear battery blueprint has "Cannot be recharged in combat" text/attribute for some reason ???

Oh, yeah, I noticed that as well- I was so unsure what to think of it I didn't even end up posting it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 17, 2014, 04:44:06 pm
Notes, rathound king quest:
A misterious man who calls himself the Rathound King
-> A mysterious man who calls himself the Rathound King
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 19, 2014, 01:47:41 pm
A bunch of dialog typos incoming.


SGS, Tanner:
I've dealt with the Rail Crossing's problem?
-> I've dealt with Rail Crossing's problem.


Junkyard Embassy, Athanas:
I need to talk to someone about a train that was supposed to arive to Rail Crossing?
-> I need to talk to someone about a train that was supposed to arrive to Rail Crossing.


Rail Crossing, Captain Herve:
They aslo impolitely told me to wait until they deal with it and then they'll inform you about what happens next. Eventualy...
-> They also impolitely told me to wait until they deal with it and then they'll inform you about what happens next. Eventually...


Rail Crossing, Doc:
Is it that noticable? Oh yes, I am worried. You see, someone's been stealing<two spaces>medical supplies
Is it that noticeable? Oh yes, I am worried. You see, someone's been stealing medical supplies

Have you checked for a hidden enterance or something, maybe that's how the thief gets in?
-> Have you checked for a hidden entrance or something, maybe that's how the thief gets in?


Rail Crossing, Dude:
It's name was Shoe Devourer
-> Its name was Shoe Devourer

Maybe it's shut the hell up and, like, mind your own bussiness.
-> Maybe it's shut the hell up and, like, mind your own business.

Cave hoppers, man, they are pretty darn sofisticated. Did you know they've got cemetaries.
-> Cave hoppers, man, they are pretty darn sophisticated. Did you know they've got cemeteries?

Yeah, although, after that they ressurect int cave dwelling spirits that breathe acid.
-> Yeah, although, after that they resurrect into cave dwelling spirits that breathe acid.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 19, 2014, 07:19:43 pm
Jackhammer description:
This large electro-mehanical hammer is usually used to break up rock, pavement, and concrete.
-> This large electro-mechanical hammer is usually used to break up rock, pavement, and concrete.

Fertility figurine description:
A metal figuring of a fat woman with no feet.
-> A metal figurine of a fat woman with no feet.

kill the beast quest notes:
Find a way to stop the big creature that, along with it's smaller cousins, threatens Foundry.
-> Find a way to stop the big creature that, along with its smaller cousins, threatens Foundry.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 20, 2014, 03:13:29 am
Rail Crossing, Dude:
It's name was Shoe Devourer
-> Its name was Shoe Devourer

Weird quirk of the language, "its" doesn't have an apostrophe for the possessive form. "It's" is for "It is".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 20, 2014, 12:37:06 pm
Dumping yet another set of typos before they get buried too deep in my screenshot folder.
Funny how I don't even notice all these before I start working on the wiki :P


Notes:
Faceless in the caves west of Foundry want you to help them locate a myserious object that was stolen from them. You should inquire with the Foundry merchants.
-> Faceless in the caves west of Foundry want you to help them locate a mysterious object that was stolen from them. You should inquire with the Foundry merchants.


Hanging Rat bar, Trader dialog:
Now, what you ya want<2 spaces>Ugly Joe?
-> Now, what you ya want, Ugly Joe?


Rail Crossing, Dude dialog:
after it absorbed a baloon that looked like a train.
-> after it absorbed a balloon that looked like a train.


SGS, Ezra dialog:
It's psi wave intensity is very high.
-> Its psi wave intensity is very high.

In short, if the creature desires a rock shell, it will fuse itself with a rock and make it a part of it's body.
-> In short, if the creature desires a rock shell, it will fuse itself with a rock and make it a part of its body.

Mechanical forces are counteracted by the large amount of hardened minerals in it's shell, while the chromium makes it resistant to heat.
-> Mechanical forces are counteracted by the large amount of hardened minerals in its shell, while the chromium makes it resistant to heat.


Foundry, Mayor dialog:
He briefly exchanges looks with a man standing next to him..Yes, I see where this is headed.
-> He briefly exchanges looks with a man standing next to him. Yes, I see where this is headed.


Foundry, Bernand dialog
I'm sure yer find some jackhammers<2 spaces>lying around in the mine.


Foundry, West dialog:
1. What've you got?.
-> remove the period

2. [Barter] I can only give you 400 charons.
-> 2. [Mercantile] I can only give you 400 charons.

I was interested in what he had therre.
-> I was interested in what he had there.


Foundry, Saban dialog:
It appears very old, with much harsher shell than the smaller ones and also had many scars on it's body.
-> It appears very old, with much harsher shell than the smaller ones and also had many scars on its body.

One of it's size is tought, let alone more.
-> One of its size is tough, let alone more.


Foundry, Marcos dialog:
Well, I personaly never saw one of those things, but the troops that did told me they have a shell made completely out of rock.
-> Well, I personally never saw one of those things, but the troops that did told me they have a shell made completely out of rock.

Maybe the rockies<newline>eat those larvae, I don't know.


Foundry, Olivia dialog:
After several minutes of stiring, heat it up to 50 degrees centigrade.
-> After several minutes of stirring, heat it up to 50 degrees centigrade.


Foundry, Evelyn dialog:
2. A drink? Are you sure this isn't<2 spaces>a misunderstanding?

Also, the ventilation shaft leading to Evelyn's home from Foundry bunker says "It's too steep to climb back up." even if you never arrived using it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 20, 2014, 04:15:30 pm
You guys really need a spellchecker in your SDK. :P


Foundry, Chief dialog:
Foundry will maintain it's position as the dominant force in the region.
-> Foundry will maintain its position as the dominant force in the region.


Foundry, Mayor floating text:
You've been paid for your services, so I belive we don't have anything urgent to discuss at the moment
-> You've been paid for your services, so I believe we don't have anything urgent to discuss at the moment


Foundry, mayor dialog (after killing the beast):
Let's hear one big aplause for our beloved Chief Banner!
-> Let's hear one big applause for our beloved Chief Banner!


Foundry, Barkeeper dialog:
Partialy because they spent more time here, but also because they were worried about the future.
-> Partially because they spent more time here, but also because they were worried about the future.


Foundry, Leonie dialog:
I mean, those who survive living in Foundry for a while, evenutally get used to the security.
-> I mean, those who survive living in Foundry for a while, eventually get used to the security.

And honestly, I really love what I do, it least I'm not risking a rock falling on my head in the mine or something like that.
-> And honestly, I really love what I do, at least I'm not risking a rock falling on my head in the mine or something like that.


Jacek dialog:
That's perfect. Hugo has some really good friends I see. :Laughs.: Now beat it, both of you!
-> That's perfect. Hugo has some really good friends I see. Laughs. Now beat it, both of you!


The Bandit near Jacek has his name as "bandit" in dialog, "Bandit" otherwise.

Also, at some conversation with Dude the speaker changes from Dude to player's name in red.


And a sidenote - what the hell is up with the investigator investigating Evelyn's case? :D
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 20, 2014, 06:27:32 pm
Area name for South Railroad Outpost is South Raildroad Outpost
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 21, 2014, 03:51:09 am
1) Katherine, a merchant at the Junkyard:

"Good luck finding it. That junk's old.

I've only ever saw one Armadillo and it was stripped down to the bone."

Second line should be:

"I've only ever seen one Armadillo and it was stripped down to the bone."

-

2) Same person (Katherine), same conversation:

"Well you can try the bigger junk merchants at the docks and the Depot B. If that fails, there might be one somewhere in Depot A, but I'm pretty sure it's not worth risking your neck."

Comma should be added after the first word:

"Well, you can try the bigger junk merchants at the docks and the Depot B. If that fails, there might be one somewhere in Depot A, but I'm pretty sure it's not worth risking your neck." 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 21, 2014, 06:38:34 am
Foundry, Chief dialog:
I can't believe Evelyn was commiting such violent murders.
-> I can't believe Evelyn was committing such violent murders.


SGS, Ezra dialog:
This is an improvised device that I'm making out of thing I have at hand.
-> This is an improvised device that I'm making out of things I have at hand.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 21, 2014, 05:57:55 pm
Foundry, Kevin dialog:
We can handle our own problems, there was never a need for an outsider to interfere. Remeber that.
-> We can handle our own problems, there was never a need for an outsider to interfere. Remember that.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 23, 2014, 10:33:06 am
Foundry, Chief dialog:
Right, I don't know how familiar you are with the Ironheads, a large gang that is active in this parts.
Right, I don't know how familiar you are with the Ironheads, a large gang that is active in these parts.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 24, 2014, 07:05:41 am
Junkyard, Grover:

"Treasa... everyone thinks she's poor, but that's not true... She's got this energy core thing with her, she showed me once... it's got to be worth at least couple hundred charons..."

Correction:

"Treasa... everyone thinks she's poor, but that's not true... She's got this energy core thing with her, she showed me once... it's got to be worth at least a couple hundred charons..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on June 25, 2014, 06:36:08 pm
Camp Hathor, Edgar:

"If you run into him by any chance, you better run for your life, because he has no mercy and I think no one man or woman can kill him alone. He's the master of covering his tracks, he's strong, poisons his weapons, sets hard to spot traps... you name it! He's killed many of us, and I don't think he'll stop."

Okay, I have to say this is a bit of a hard one- so I'm only going to make the correction I'm pretty confident of. I'm unsure of the commas but I'm not exactly sure what would be correct in this instance. I think hard to spot might require hyphens connecting the words, "hard-to-spot" but once again I'm not certain.

"If you run into him by any chance, you better run for your life, because he has no mercy and I think no one man or woman can kill him alone. He's a master of covering his tracks, he's strong, poisons his weapons, sets hard to spot traps... you name it! He's killed many of us, and I don't think he'll stop."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on June 29, 2014, 10:06:25 pm
Gorsky in the meeting before junkyard gang war:
I've came to SGS to be a free man.
-> I came to SGS to be a free man.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Jazhara7 on July 02, 2014, 12:16:27 pm
Old Jonas:
"been crawling through them tunnels"
"been crawling through the tunnels" ?


I think in the case of Old Jonas this could be slang. Also, I think the correction would look better, if it is corrected, as:

"been crawling through these tunnels"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on July 08, 2014, 11:40:48 pm
Dude:

"Maybe it's shut the hell up and, like, mind your own bussiness."

Correction:


"Maybe it's shut the hell up and, like, mind your own business."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 07, 2014, 08:30:27 am
I assume "Imapla" SMG is supposed to be "Impala".

Monsoon & Cyclon crossbows lack description.

Electroshock Pistol onhit effect description:
It can hit the same target multiple, but needs at least two targets to jump between.
-> It can hit the same target multiple times, but needs at least two targets to jump between.


Jon the beautiful dialog:
I've been living in Core city for quite some time now and have learned many of it's secrets.
-> I've been living in Core city for quite some time now and have learned many of its secrets.

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on August 07, 2014, 09:43:31 am
Fixed all for the next hotfix.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 08, 2014, 01:42:47 pm
Black Vitreous:
seems to posses certain characteristics of a psi catalyst.
-> seems to possess certain characteristics of a psi catalyst.


and a bunch of dialogs....

Ljubostanka:
My husband, the love of my life,<two spaces>Stjepanicije, cheated on me with some, some Svetlana girl!<no space>So


Guzomir:
we protect each other, Before we all go to sleep,
-> we protect each other. Before we all go to sleep,


Babar:
The Arena is<two spaces>a place


Lanista:
And some other<two spaces>unimportant stuff.

you can't just appply to the Gauntlet.
-> you can't just apply to the Gauntlet.

I'm completely bamboozled!<no space>That was amazing!


Garry:
You caught the eye of the crowd extremly fast
-> You caught the eye of the crowd extremely fast

And pretty rare.<no space>Are you by any chance

Remeber that.
->Remember that.


Derica:
Junk!<no space>Sighs.


Harriete:
He hasn't shown up ever<two spaces>since you punched him in the nose.


JKK Receptionist:
the converastion ends.
-> the conversation ends.

Miss Vivian Young. You'll find right near the entrance
-> Miss Vivian Young. You'll find her right near the entrance


Gorsky in Core City:
we robbed together, killed together and spend time together
-> we robbed together,  killed together and spent time together

and then they stormed<two spaces>our position

even bloody blown<two spaces>to pieces

until a grenade flew in throught he window
->until a grenade flew in through the window

the gang and<two spaces>the survivors split.

We will<two spaces>go test it out when the time is right.


Sneaky:
allowed to have "soliders" in the Core City
-> allowed to have "soldiers" in the Core City

they bore right out<two spaces>of the cliff


Mykola:
1. The tuneller is safe.
-> 1. The tunneler is safe.


Andrea:
the final strech
-> the final stretch

I probabli mentioned it.
-> I probably mentioned it.


Seriously guys, you need a spellchecker :P or you could at least fix things like double spaces by running the dialog files through a simple regexp :(
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on August 09, 2014, 05:25:25 am
Archibald Knight
"They only reason they are all living right now is that we have bigger problems right now"
"The only reason they are still alive is that we have bigger problems right now"

Tanner
"There's a *church of Tchort* is located in the the Upper Underrail. they must have taken it there"
"There's a *church of Tchort* located in the Upper Underrail. They must have taken it there"


At some point Garry tells me i'm a gladiatior, but i'm only a prime challenger.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 09, 2014, 09:43:08 pm
a keycard found in Research Facility has 2 references to Coretec rather than Coretech


Liutenant Stratford should be Lieutenant


Hadrian Tanner:
1. I've tracked the cube thing to a Coretech research facility in Core City, but Tchorist snatched if before I could get to it.
-> 1. I've tracked the cube thing to a Coretech research facility in Core City, but Tchortists snatched if before I could get to it.


Computer Console in Reseach Facility level 3:
This laboratory does not currently posses the equipment
-> This laboratory does not currently possess the equipment

since various researches and xenoarcheologists
-> since various researchers and xenoarcheologists


Gunnar Edstrom:
and possibly a further<two spaces>explanation

If Coretech aquired something powerful...
-> If Coretech acquired something powerful...


Harlan:
You will be payed for each individual job accomplished.
-> You will be paid for each individual job accomplished.


Percival:
we discovered that what was previously thought was "junk" DNA<two spaces>actually contained a genetic code

We hold lectures about Thort here in Core City.
-> We hold lectures about Tchort here in Core City.

and puting your trust in us
-> and putting your trust in us

it can be<two spaces>difficult

for this being is... prescious to us.
-> for this being is... precious to us.

To get to<two spaces>these answers,


Vivian:
but<two spaces>JKK plays an important role

Vivian, via radio:
Drats! The elevator is not working! I can't<two spaces>make from here.

"Maintenace Room" and south-southeast is the  "Security Room."
-> "Maintenance Room" and south-southeast is the "Security Room".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: shaf on August 09, 2014, 10:37:37 pm
Core City, Coretech Building
Harlan
Harlan responds to the call, carefully listening to the voice on the other side. The mre he listens the mor he is worried.
It should be:
Harlan responds to the call, carefully listening to the voice on the other side. The more he listens the more worried he gets.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 10, 2014, 06:11:22 am
Enrage psi mentor description has "Enarge" instead of Enrage.

ICPD quest note has "stoaling" instead of stealing.

Shielded Bladeling Eye description:
Bladeling's eye is shielded by though glossy black plate. It is uncertain what purpose of this plate is, but the eye vitreous humor that separates the plate and the eye seems to posses certain characteristics of a psi catalyst.
-> Bladeling's eye is shielded by tough glossy black plate. It is uncertain what purpose of this plate is, but the eye vitreous humor that separates the plate and the eye seems to possess certain characteristics of a psi catalyst.

Lt Stratford:
You definitelly deserve this.
-> You definitely deserve this.

Archibald Knight:
3. Can you tell me<two spaces>how oligarchy came to be?

The mighty Biocorp had it's own problems
-> The mighty Biocorp had its own problems

1. Cornell confesed.
-> 1. Cornell confessed.

1. Won't this affect your relationship with Coretech.
-> 1. Won't this affect your relationship with Coretech?

Harlan:
He's been gone for a coupe of days,
-> He's been gone for a couple of days,

He dissapeared at the time the device was stolen.
-> He disappeared at the time the device was stolen.

Rupert Simmons:
Use this keycard to unlock the door and this pass you must ware at all times so that the security bots don't rip you to shreds.
-> Use this keycard to unlock the door and this pass you must wear at all times so that the security bots don't rip you to shreds.

Agent Henderson:
This appears to be a well planed attack.
-> This appears to be a well planned attack.

Sneaky:
We just got here, so we need to get some men and gear here.We'll lay low for a while. the Zone Rats need some rest.
-> We just got here, so we need to get some men and gear here. We'll lay low for a while. The Zone Rats need some rest.

Gorsky:
You<two spaces>gits haven't changed one bit.

Jon the Beautiful:
What are you wainting for,
-> What are you waiting for,
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 11, 2014, 01:03:54 pm
Praetorian Officer, floating text:
Stupid Coretech! :Laughs.

Harlan says "techonology" instead of "technology" at some point

Jon the beautiful says "dissapointed" instead of "disappointed" at some point
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 16, 2014, 01:28:08 pm
energy pistol blueprint:
Energy weapons are generally less devastating than firearms, but they are more precise and can easy pierce most armor types.
-> Energy weapons are generally less devastating than firearms, but they are more precise and can easily pierce most armor types.

Percival's lecture:
I am fully ware
-> I am fully aware

Duff dialog:
Why are you interrupting me while I'm wathing the Areana, huh?
-> Why are you interrupting me while I'm watching the Areana, huh?

Norman's dialog has a couple of things that could be typos rather than advatongue?
presonaly -> personally
oligrachs -> oligarchs
The broadcast that dreadful Arena -> They broadcast that dreadful Arena

Harlan's dialog also had "dissapoint" instead of "disappoint" at some point.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on August 16, 2014, 07:29:19 pm
Doctor's belt
"Medicine consumation"
"Medicine consumption"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Jamoid on August 16, 2014, 08:10:18 pm
Just after Doctor Pasquale unlocks your psionic abilities he says "The inherit potential is there", which I assume should be "The inherent potential is there".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on August 23, 2014, 12:34:48 pm
Dirty Tom dialog:
Oh, do you know what's funny youngster?
-> Oh, do you know what's funny, youngster?
dissapeared -> disappeared
commited -> committed

Floating text, one of Core City commoners:
You should visit the Arena, if you haven't already.<missing space>Trust me, you won't regret it.

Rathound Room Key Card:
You found this key inside one of the rathound in the Gauntlet.
-> You found this key inside one of the rathounds in the Gauntlet.

Hardcore City Bar backdoor key. (Core City) probably shouldn't have that period.


edit:
One of Sergio's Bodyguards is BodyGuard.


edit2:
Scopes, when added to weapons:
It's aiming precision is increased -> Its aiming precision is increased

Lanista dialog:
<space>It's simple. You go in there and fight till death. (leading space at the start)
If on is really good, -> If one is really good,
Buthchers -> Butchers
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Munithe on August 29, 2014, 08:32:32 pm
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=307493983
Reckon*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: mwnn on October 10, 2014, 08:42:38 am
Two small dialog bugs I've noticed when talking with Dockmaster Silas @ Junkyard.

One just needs an extra space after the full stop.

For the other I'd suggest changing it to:

Quote
Besides this, how many more favors do I need to do before I'll get access to the wormhole?


Great game btw. From the Dev Log it looks to be getting better and better.

It's substantially improved over an older version I tried; it really does deserve all the praise it gets @ RPG Codex.

Love the oddity XP system, combat encounters feel fairer (no longer need that early grenade against the bandits etc), limited skill points forces specialization.

Not completely sold on the merchant limits but I can understand the rationale.

A few more skill points for crafting? Not much fun seeing all this cool stuff I can't craft - requirements are very strict; I can't even recycle objects without a hefty investment.

Folding Evasion/Dodge into one skill? (http://www.rpgcodex.net/forums/index.php?threads/underrail-formerly-known-as-timelapse-vertigo-early-access-now-available.69181/page-57#post-3531699) By the same logic - I suppose Pursuade/Intimidate could be folded into Speech?

Yet to try all the character types but I'm sure they'll all be very interesting/different. (Heavy) melee characters look to have an easier time  - not needing to invest in half as many stats/skills.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: mwnn on October 12, 2014, 10:15:56 am
Another small one with Quinton.

I'd suggest simply changing it to:
Quote
I've brought your tissue sample"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on November 15, 2014, 09:18:28 am
Expose Weakness ability description:

Preform a special melee attack
-> Perform a special melee attack
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on November 15, 2014, 09:58:18 am
Expose Weakness ability description:

Preform a special melee attack
-> Perform a special melee attack

I also see a grammar problem in description:
"Perform a special melee attack that deals normal damage and reduces target's mechanical resistance and threshold by 50% if it lands for 2 turns."

Should be:
"Perform a special melee attack that deals normal damage and, if it lands, reduces target's mechanical resistance and threshold by 50% for 2 turns."

or:
"Perform a special melee attack that deals normal damage and reduces target's mechanical resistance and threshold by 50% for 2 turns, if it lands."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on November 15, 2014, 10:10:53 am
Yeah, there's some awkward grammar here and there. I'll leave style suggestions to someone else, I just catch the obvious typos. :)

Locus of Control status effect:
Next thought control psi ability the charcter invokes will have an area of effect, but will end the effect.
-> Next thought control psi ability the character invokes will have an area of effect, but will end the effect.

Quinton's dialog:
Yes... yes, you do.<missing space>Shall we begin?

Boicye in core city arena:
My father also used to be a celaner

Mitchell in core city:
Meh, it <two spaces> all sounds the same anyway
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 13, 2014, 01:18:52 am
Incendiary grenades:
Everyone caught in the blast suffer X Heat damage and have 50% chance to catch of fire, suffering additionl 150% of the original damage over 3 turns.
-> Everyone caught in the blast suffers X heat damage and has 50% chance to catch fire, suffering additional 150% of the original damage over 3 turns.
Creatures standing in the fire suffer heat damage equal to 10%-25% of the target's maximal health
-> Creatures standing in the fire suffer heat damage equal to 10%-25% of their maximal health

Butchers Lucky Charm -> Butcher's Lucky Charm


And some dialog stuff...

Bate:
a. They are lead by a<two spaces>ruthless
many fall for<two spaces>the story of protection
we had to form a<two spaces>small group


Trenton:
especially do to the fact that our hidout
-> especially due to the fact that our hideout

Becket & Maura:
rubish -> rubbish (multiple occasions)

Maura
In a way,<two spaces>they did!
It's something I do all the time,<two spaces>but this time

Protectorate piece of trash cought me
-> Protectorate piece of trash caught me
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 15, 2014, 05:04:52 pm
items:
Gauntlet Runner Jumpsuit -> Gauntlet Runner Jumpsuit
Mortuary Keycard (South Gate Staation) -> Mortuary Keycard (South Gate Station)


Arena announcements:
Female characters are referred to as "him"

At some point there was "talking talking"

Both have demonstrated<two spaces>that they are absolute maniacs

Carnifex is making a comback
->Carnifex is making a comeback


Lanista:
I'm not going to give you some cliche speach
-> I'm not going to give you some cliche speech


Garry:
but he is really disguisting.
-> but he is really disgusting.


Lt. Stratford:
You are simply outperfoming a large number ouf our recruits.
-> You are simply outperfoming a large number of our recruits.

Don't foget, no matter how calm Core City might seem now
-> Don't forget, no matter how calm Core City might seem now


Praetorian Sniper guardian the bridge to cc-abandoned / black crawler camp:
I must advises you to stay on this side of the bridge
-> I must advise you to stay on this side of the bridge


Kupusije:
Hey,<two spaces>honey.


Zaman:
I'll chew through your soft skin and<two spaces>I'll gorge on your warm, bloody organs!


Dockmaster Silas:
First, take this key.<no space>Go to the slums


Bernand:
2. What can you tell me about<two spaces>Foundry?

Yeah,<two spaces>well, I suppose I could use some rest.


Delma:
generally stay close to armed personel
-> generally stay close to armed personnel


Trenton:
free of tyranical rule
-> free of tyrannical rule


Jaina floating dialog:
Protectorate did so many atrocities<two spaces>in North Underrail.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 17, 2014, 02:52:26 am
Notes:
Captain Blackwall at Epioni Lab
-> Captain Blackwall at Epione Lab

Enter the underpassage entrance near Rail Crossing and, once inside, go west and until come up to a door with an intercom.
-> Enter the underpassage entrance near Rail Crossing and, once inside, go west until you come up to a door with an intercom.



A bunch of items:
CAU armor:
Protectorate insignias, depicting a clenched spiky metal fists
-> Protectorate insignias, depicting a clenched spiky metal fist

Claws:
Your arms has been badly burnt
-> Your arm has been badly burnt

Office Keycard (Hephaestus Research):
This keycard was found in<no space>Hephaestus research

Patrick Pierce's Room Key:
This keycard is used to access the room that belongs to Patrcik Pierce.
-> This keycard is used to access the room that belongs to Patrick Pierce.



And a small selection of dialog stuff...
Rude Rob:
But damn it<two spaces>Ugly Jane


Gorsky in Core City:
We will go<two spaces>test it out

he blamed Pasqale
-> he blamed Pasquale


Sneaky:
3. Do you know<two spaces>a man called Jon the Beautiful?

the most diguisting toilet
-> the most disgusting toilet


Gene:
Sure, no problem [mate/love]. Just give let me have it and I'll take care of the rest
-> Sure, no problem [mate/love]. Just let me have it and I'll take care of the rest.
(buggy pc gender selector apparently?)


Harriete:
I like him, he's quiet.<two spaces>And an intellectual.


Ohad Xander:
the money will be transfered
-> the money will be transferred


Mysterious Lady (inviting you to join Free Drones):
an aggressive expansionist force that is hidding it's true intentions
-> an aggressive expansionist force that is hiding its true intentions


Laser:
he doesn't seem threatning.
-> he doesn't seem threatening.

Trenton:
demogratic -> democratic


Major Clifton:
Free Drones are just some poor<space>, lost souls


Case:
Southereners -> Southerners


Consul Oliver:
or, better yet,<two spaces>what you will be doing


Colonel Cathcart:
Only trained pilots can use Dread's effectively.
-> Only trained pilots can use Dreads effectively.

court-matrial them
-> court-martial them


Captain Blackwall:
As you can see here. An hear.
-> As you can see here. And hear.


Mareth:
they are hidding in some
-> they are hiding in some

ancient facility, long forgoten.
-> ancient facility, long forgotten.

extreminate them.
-> exterminate them.


Hephaestus Research gate:
The space was narrow, but you maed it through.
-> The space was narrow, but you made it through.


Jack Quicksilver:
You will be paid upon assignment completition.
-> You will be paid upon assignment completion.


Lenox:
they evenutally did.
-> they eventually did.


Mordre:
rubish -> rubbish


Pasquale:
I... that is disguisting...
-> I... that is disgusting...


Foundry commoners, floatin dialog:
I just heard about some craz woman
-> I just heard about some crazy woman


Kevin:
2. Why don't you arest that crazy dude?
-> 2. Why don't you arrest that crazy dude?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on December 17, 2014, 09:56:59 am
And a small selection of dialog stuff...

Small? :D

Anyway, fixed everything. Thank you very much!
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 17, 2014, 08:33:46 pm
And a small selection of dialog stuff...

Small? :D

Anyway, fixed everything. Thank you very much!

Well you know how it goes, it just keeps getting bigger when you're having fun ... wait.. that came out wrong...  :X

Ahem. Anyways, I went through most of my screenshots so far, but I still haven't even seen all the new content! I'll have one more list of minor bugs & typos coming once I figure out the super secret stuff.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 19, 2014, 05:07:11 am
Focused status description refers to female PCs as "him".

Praetorian security guards around Core City call promoted female PCs "sir".

Grenadier feat description refers to frag & HE grenades rather than standard grenades (including incendiary)

Goggles crafting description:
Goggles have two main component:
-> Goggles have two main components:

Abandoned Sniper Rifle (Foundry):
This sniper was found on one of the rooftops in Foundry.
-> This rifle was found on one of the rooftops in Foundry.



And as usual, some dialog stuff.
Milton:
nice doing bussines with ya.
-> nice doing business with ya.


Rathound King:
No, there isn't.<two spaces>No woman

Than, you shall be rewarded
-> Then, you shall be rewarded


Edgar:
I went<two spaces>past some caves filled with rathounds


Dude:
I forgot it's name, but it rocked!
-> I forgot its name, but it rocked!


Buzzer:
caring only about it's own interests!
-> caring only about its own interests!


Saban:
but much<two spaces>bigger

One of its size is tought, let alone more.
->One of its size is tough, let alone more.

"Count me in. I'll be there as soon as possible." comes from your character rather than Saban.


Archibald Knight:
Then they dissapeared.
-> Then they disappeared.

the device<no space>is actually

the artifact is potentialy
-> the artifact is potentially


Andrea:
Andrea stands there with here eyes closed
-> Andrea stands there with her eyes closed


Tanner:
but Tchorists snatched it
-> but Tchortists snatched it


Quinton:
larvae, like those of house fles. Without dissecting the creature I can't tell you more about it's anatomy.
-> larvae, like those of house fleas. Without dissecting the creature I can't tell you more about its anatomy.


Ezra:
it can be only perceived<two spaces>by the larger creatures.

2. How does the device you gave me exactly works?
-> 2. How does the device you gave me exactly work?


Mareth:
One of Biocorps disposal facilities.
-> One of Biocorp's disposal facilities.


Void:
"Corporal, do not disturb Void. Next time I won't stop him from hurting you." comes from Unknown rather than Mareth.


Dess:
3. That's not really my prefered topic
-> 3. That's not really my preferred topic
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 20, 2014, 05:19:18 am
This should be the last big bunch of stuff I have for this version.

Notes:
Sail with captain Broderick to the island where he believe the lost cargo washed up
-> Sail with captain Broderick to the island where he believes the lost cargo washed up

Locate a former Biocorp researcher Wit Nosek
-> Locate former Biocorp researcher Wit Nosek

'The Arc' project -> Ark


cc manor guards:
[#Sir, Ma'am]?


Foundry Chief:
That's it, yur friend
-> That's it, your friend


Abram:
amusement * as if he's
-> amusement, as if he's

group of anarchist...
-> group of anarchists...

who's main goal
-> whose main goal

exerciser -> exercise

Azif:
in the center * that's
-> in the center, that's


Twitch:
analize -> analyze
percieve -> perceive


Constantine:
Powerful psionics, while where at it
-> Powerful psionics, while we're at it

the trade of is
-> the trade-off is


Oculus consoles:
alligned -> aligned
potentialy -> potentially
since Hadrian join it -> joined it
attempts to trace his history<two spaces>have
maintenance of<two spaces>Arena
Gunnar move to Core City -> moved to
Bands roam the railways -> Bandits
integrated into United Station, -> United Stations
everyone within the organization agree -> agrees
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on December 27, 2014, 07:09:22 am
Ok, ok, I lied. I'm not done yet. You really need to get a spellchecker before Underrail is released. ;)

Anastasia:
we both earned a lot about each... khm... other's professions.
-> we both learned a lot about each... khm... other's professions.

Holloway:
dissapointed -> disappointed

Luka:
rubish -> rubbish

Cathcart:
somthing -> something
Hephestus -> Hephaestus
forgoten -> forgotten

Mareth
noticable -> noticeable

Gene:
This guy can access<two spaces>one of those

Foundry barkeeper:
themselves,<two spaces>trust me

Hugo:
payed -> paid
some money.<two spaces>And

West:
therre -> there

Nicolas:
2. How can you just start to hate someone after twenty years of marriage?<newline>
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on February 05, 2015, 01:17:28 am
Reposting some old typos in crafted items.

antithermic coats
the high radiant loads produces by fire. -> produced

scopes
It's aiming precision -> Its

night vision goggles
and a an image intensifier
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on March 28, 2015, 01:12:39 am
Let's get started with 0.1.14...

Incendiary Vial
a incendiary -> an incendiary

Storage 2 Key (Toxic Waste Processing Plant)
lable -> label

Broken Motion Detector
clearly isn't<two spaces>the case.




Captain Coltrane
That gunna ten coins. -> That gunna be ten coins.

Detritus
regeneate -> regenerate
But us<two spaces>zoners

Frowning Man
2. I'm, (playername) -> remove the comma

Daphne
imporant -> important

Tchortist Rassophore at the gate
all the having their hands placed on their chests
-> all them

Efreitor Denzil
figruine -> figurine

Praepostor Amelia
occasionaly -> occasionally

Provost Vladan
important<two spaces>in the

Mediant Samuel
adn -> and
potentialy -> potentially
unleated -> unrelated

Tchortist Pirophore (west wing guard)
Preservation.<no space>They

Beatrice
by<two spaces>my sister
Their mother, a gorgeous and equally - if not more caring, died form a broken heart. -> rework the entire sentence

Principal Investigator Georgis
ocurring -> occurring
Facelesss -> Faceless
successfuly -> successfully

Old Reject
we are not<two spaces>yet ready

Tchortist library terminal
attempts a coup;; Rassophore -> remove one semicolon
Biocorp final dissolution -> Biocorp's final dissolution
salvage what salvaged can be -> salvage what can be salvaged
Captain*s -> Captain's
follow me on this mission and, once those -> remove the comma
looses -> loses




Notes, Utility Station 7 quest
Mediant Samuel asked you to<two spaces>go to

Notes, Psycho quest
accidentaly -> accidentally
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on March 29, 2015, 07:08:39 am
Data Storage Key Card (HRO)
Yiou -> You

Blueprint: Infused Leather
Contains instructions on how to infused leather with fiber. -> infuse

Gas Mask
biohazzard -> biohazard


HRO computer console
:From what you can see -> From what you can see
withing -> within
state that the were able to -> they were

Rassophore Nevil
cross hairs -> crosshairs
sectionby -> section by
hidding -> hiding

PI Schteff
as well asthe opening -> as the
comming -> coming (multiple instances)
adn -> and

PI Georgis
1. There was a problem with XAL-011 -> XAL-001
I've found had some time off to pursue -> remove "found" and "off"
different<two spaces>and
Now ,playername -> move the comma

Octavia
smelled something bad<two spaces>at the

Median Samuel
we haven't had s strong foothold -> a strong
senty -> sentry
He gives you 400 stygian coins.<no space>Now that we understand each other

Episkopos Lydia
decide that<two spaces>you want

Eidein
How were you able to prove to people that it existed back when you first formed Institute of Tchort. -> replace . with ?
was to convince most -> was enough to convince most
She told me<two spaces>the principal
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on April 01, 2015, 06:38:12 pm
EMP mine & grenade blueprints (remove red, add green)
An EMP mine can be created by combining an electromagnetic dischargers with any high energy battery
EMP grenades are created by combining an electromagnetic dischargers with any high energy battery

Infused pig leather has the same description as regular pig leather

7.62mm MS rounds
burst forth on impact. -> bursts

.44 exp rounds
adjecent -> adjacent

5mm shock, 8.6mm inc, 9mm acid and .44 exp rounds:
missing "damage" from the on hit effect descriptions (eg. inflicts 10-20 acid to the target.)


Rassophore Nevil
what I *though* I knew -> thought

Random core city commoner
Who name's their son Edmund? -> names

Moe
a barrel fool of water -> full
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: LightningMonk on April 09, 2015, 02:34:22 am
Constantine

It is followed by a sound of something, probably a dead boy, hitting the wall as it tumbles down. Constantine just laughs.

->body

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on April 11, 2015, 06:26:56 am
Newton quest note:
See what taking him so long. -> what's


Arena commentator
we have our<two spaces>beloved Chemical Agent

Vivian
dissapeared -> disappeared

Rupert Simmons
everytone -> everyone
make things work!<no space>Laughs

Leonie
titainum's -> titanium's

Minister Percival
kinds of<two spaces>people
as<two spaces>"disguisting" -> disgusting
centruy -> century

Efreitor Denzil
I want to join the Institute<no space>and
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on April 18, 2015, 08:18:19 am
Deacon's Bodygard (npc name in rail crossing) -> Bodyguard

Last Stand effect
exipres -> expires

Six
I'm investigate -> investigating

JKK receptionist
converastion -> conversation

Doubletap
wheese -> wheeze
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on April 29, 2015, 09:11:39 pm
Hm. I thought I already had reported these.

Scope description on crafted items:
It's aiming precision is increased
-> Its

Pneumatic Reloader description on crafted items:
It's reloading speed is enhanced
-> Its

Expose Weakness attack tooltip (feat description is ok):
Preform a special melee attack
-> Perform
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Marcus on April 30, 2015, 12:39:10 pm
I'm solving Jack Quicksilver's Hercules quest:
When Pasquale tests the drug he says:
"act upon different OGRANS"
instead of "organs".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on May 10, 2015, 05:35:22 am
Night Vision Goggles
These goggles contain a pair of <type> lenses and a an image intensifier tube that provides night vision capability module.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Agitated on May 21, 2015, 05:15:38 am
(http://i.imgur.com/OftT6li.png)
Daniel Arda small typo, says the instead of they.



(http://i.imgur.com/ZymMcpN.png)

Bisson Says died in sleep. Died in his sleep or many other options available.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: a bear named spigot on July 19, 2015, 08:49:50 am
I picked up some Toxic Sludge just outside SGS, the description reads: "A canister of toxic sludge. You should definitively be carrying this around." Should be 'definitely'.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on July 20, 2015, 07:00:42 pm
In dialogue with Ezra i can say:
"a creature similar to what i desribed"
should be "described".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: a bear named spigot on July 22, 2015, 10:54:15 am
In the conversation with Ambassador Athanas where he offers you a spot in the Protectorate: "I have already contacted the consul and explained him the whole situation. He is expecting you arrival, charname.' Should be 'explained to him' and 'your'.

Mykola in Core City: "My was doing honest work, my business used to flourish." Aside from the typo the sentence is a bit off, perhaps "I was doing honest work and my business was flourishing."

Meeting Gorsky in Core City: "With Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make a presence when the time comes." Should be "With the Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make our presence felt/known when the time comes."

More Gorsky: "After you cleared (should be clear)the location, you must find a way to get the tunneler operational again. Look around the city and see if anyone got (should be has) the expertise, but be discreet about it."

All the dialogue with Gorsky and Sneaky here is a bit off, really.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 23, 2015, 12:16:23 pm
Bunch of Institute dialog stuff. Not sure if some of these were already posted.

One of the west wing entrance guards:
You like being here, is that what you're traying to say?
-> trying

Jerre Franz:
Medical examination adn treatment
-> and

Detritus:
1. You are<two spaces>very lucky to be alive.

Mediant Samuel:
Some defense bots were about to attack us, but I had managed to hack the console and prevent it.
-> Wrong tense, get of rid of the "had"

Eidein:
So, is everyone in the Insitute going to live as old as you?
-> Institute

there was hole in one of the wall, made by a tunneler
-> a hole, walls

But concrete evidence and knowledge that I had brought with me from Deep Caverns was to convince most.
-> was enough to


edit

Camp Hathor quest notes:
but he want's you to be the negotiator.
-> wants
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DeathByEntropy on November 06, 2015, 09:39:23 pm
As is:

Captain Blackwall: "The situation is as follows ... regular patrols around the perimiter..."

Needs to be "perimeter"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Mutator on December 14, 2015, 05:57:35 pm
Gangster that is near the tunneler, when we try to persuade him, says:" (...) Yo, Mud, Trashman, Gravel and you Little Garbage, we is moving out!"

It should be "we are" I think :)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: TĪ›PETRVE on December 14, 2015, 06:52:16 pm
 This seems intentional to me.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 18, 2015, 07:57:09 am
While investigating about the Acid Hunters

"now" instead of "know"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 18, 2015, 08:25:35 am
Asking Moe about "Barrel Soup"

"Yes, I heard me right." -> "Yes, you heard me right."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 18, 2015, 03:44:48 pm
v 1.0.0.0

Guys you wanna start a new thread for final game version or no?

Anyway here we go, new Intro section of the game, new spelling errors  :D

"Bots against fighting you" -> "Bots fighting against you"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 18, 2015, 04:10:02 pm
marked the spelling error, should be "right-click" instead.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 18, 2015, 04:17:22 pm
"might not be" - tutorial
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fry on December 20, 2015, 07:31:48 am
"Armor" is an irregular plural in English. It doesn't take an "s", so the plural of armor is just armor.

In the tutorial...

"Hey Vencel, what weapon should I use against bots?"

1. And what about armors?
Change to "what about armor"

"Well armors are good for ya..."
Change to "well armor is good for ya..."


Also, this is weird phrasing...

"Don't expect to be very mobile in a metal armor ... a leather armor".

No need for the article there.
Change to "Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 20, 2015, 08:07:55 am
"Armor" is an irregular plural in English. It doesn't take an "s", so the plural of armor is just armor.

In the tutorial...

"Hey Vencel, what weapon should I use against bots?"

1. And what about armors?
Change to "what about armor"

"Well armors are good for ya..."
Change to "well armor is good for ya..."


Also, this is weird phrasing...

"Don't expect to be very mobile in a metal armor ... a leather armor".

No need for the article there.
Change to "Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"

What is

"Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"

supposed to mean anyway? The last half of this sentence doesnt make any sense to me...

Shouldnt it be more something like this:

"Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor... unlike in leather armor" ?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fry on December 20, 2015, 10:18:59 am
What is

"Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"

supposed to mean anyway? The last half of this sentence doesnt make any sense to me...

Shouldnt it be more something like this:

"Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor... unlike in leather armor" ?

That's not the whole sentence, of course. I'm just including the portions that should be changed.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Solluth on December 21, 2015, 07:54:46 am
Gorsky, during the quest to open the old GMS vault. He says "Well, according to encrypted message we..." Where instead of should be either "An encrypted message we..." or "Encrypted messages we..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Solluth on December 21, 2015, 06:24:43 pm
When talking to Dockmaster Silas about side favors to get into the wormhole the second option reads "... How many favors I need you to do..." As the player is doing him said favors, it should be either "How many more favors do I need to do you?" Or "How many more favors do you need me to do for you?"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: danielzaiser91 on December 22, 2015, 05:09:49 pm
Cryokinetic Orb ability description repeats damage types twice ("cold cold and mechanical mechanical damage")
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on December 24, 2015, 03:43:19 pm
Captain Broderick: "It's not that just that I saw a guy" --> "It's not just that I saw a guy" (no double "that")

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=579495931 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=579495931)



Hadrian Tanner:

"Existence of such an organization" --> "The existence of such an organization" (needs an article to sound natural)
"While it's manifestation" --> possessive is "its" not "it's"
"know that is could have been" --> "it" not "is"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=579637925 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=579637925)


"This will, I predict, at one point... bring about interesting events" --> "at some point" is what a person would actually say when talking about the future

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580206888 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580206888)


"It used to served us well" --> either "It served us well" or "It used to serve us well," not both

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580337326 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580337326)


"But if you can't find it, I want the money coin back" --> "money" or "coin," not both

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580337342 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580337342)



Mordre: "It must have costed a lot." --> "It must have cost a lot" is the proper past participle

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580206901 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=580206901)



Edgar: "...blocking and underground river" --> "an" not "and"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818603 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818603)


"One day, he came before us and told us that someone who calls himself 'Rathound King' is invading our hunting grounds. At one point, Gideon has, according to his words, managed to even speak to this man, but it turned out he ain't nothing but a filthy savage, who had no interest in discussing anything with anyone"

This is just kind of a mess of conflicting verb tenses and weird phrasing. It's hard to understand and does not sound natural. Try this instead: "One day, he came before us and told us that someone [calling] himself 'Rathound King' [was] invading our hunting grounds. At one point, Gideon [said he had even managed] to speak to this man, but it turned out [the man/guy/"King"] [wasn't] nothing but a filthy savage, who had no interest in discussing anything with anyone."  ...Technically "wasn't nothing but a filthy savage" is not correct either but this preserves the slangy style of the original.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818620 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818620)


"That marks the start of our conflict. From then on, he's been attacking..." --> "Since then, he's been attacking"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818632 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818632)



Description of Burrower Carapace: "carapace is though" --> "tough"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818650 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=581818650)



Captain Herve: "We tried to blitz it back before they're set up but that ended badly." --> "We tried to blitz [them] back before [they'd] set up"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449569 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449569)



Dude: There is a missing space between "...it's tough." and "The immense..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449583 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449583)



Doc: "...removing her blood-stained surgical gloves and throws them in a garbage can." ---> "and throwing them"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449609 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449609)


There is a missing space between "lose him." and "Morphine"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449626 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582449626)




Major Clifton: "Their sole purpose is to oppose Protectorate and the unification of stations, calling it oppression and other ridiculous terms, while in fact they themselves are nothing but a violent gang that supposedly fights for freedom, yet if all who disagree with their world view are dubbed as brainwashed and, if possible, are brutally killed."

This is a run-on sentence which is difficult to understand. Try this: "Their sole purpose is to oppose Protectorate and the unification of stations, calling it oppression and other ridiculous terms. [They supposedly] fight for freedom, [but] in fact [they are] nothing but a violent gang. All who disagree with their world view are dubbed as brainwashed and, if possible, are brutally killed."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547236 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547236)



Ambassador Athanas: "They cling on to us like we're the bad guys..."

"Cling on to" doesn't make sense here. Try "They pretend we're the bad guys..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547255 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547255)



Halim: "...when my wife was ordering bracelet to be made." --> "was ordering [the] bracelet to be made."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547263 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547263)



Oskar: "I now about him." --> "know" not "now"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547278 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547278)



Derica: "The Praetorians keep us safe us." --> "The Praetorians keep us safe." Just one "us"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547292 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547292)



Tchortist Missionary by Hardcore Bar: There appear to be multiple spaces between "has the ability" and "to regenerate itself"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547309 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547309)



Harriete: "tell their wifes they love them" --> "tell their wives"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547322 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547322)



Jon the Beautiful: "'cause few sections of the tracks" --> 'cause [a] few sections"

"the left" --> "they left"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547335 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547335)



Sneaky: "they bore right out of the cliff" --> "they bored"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547348 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547348)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on December 25, 2015, 11:46:48 am
Ho ho ho, more spelling and grammar errors for all the good little boys and girls.


Halim: "but world is a dangerous place" --> "but [the] world is a dangerous place"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398135 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398135)



Derica: "Look, this one's looks like..." --> "Look, this [one] looks like..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398150 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398150)



Harriete/Harriette the bartender's wife in the Hardcore bar has her name spelled differently above her character model and in dialogue. (Two T's is the traditional spelling of the name.)

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398193 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398193)
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547322 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=582547322)



Oinko's pal: "Maybe I ate too much of soup." --> "Maybe I ate too much soup." or "Maybe I ate too much of [the] soup."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398226 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398226)

"Oinko sometimes speaks to me in sleep." --> "...in [his] sleep" or  "in [my] sleep"; it's not clear whose sleep is being referenced, and this is the kind of important detail that we need to know about Oinko.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398234 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398234)



Ljubostanka: "her rock-shattering stare seems as equally potent as..." --> "seems equally as potent as" (word reversal)

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398272 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398272)



Joseph Harlan: says "should he be compromised" even if player is female. Don't be sexist, Joseph.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398327 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398327)

missing capital W in "we"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398552 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398552)

"Now go. there is not time to lose!" --> "[T]here is [no] time to lose!"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398567 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398567)



Minister Percival: "in it's current state" --> "its"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398358 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398358)

"we have a long history...with those monsters, and were always opposing their foul ways." --> "have always opposed their foul ways."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398376 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398376)

"whenever environment it lives in greatly changes" --> "whenever [the] environment it lives in greatly changes"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398406 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398406)

"around 2% of total genome" --> around 2% of [the] total genome"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398417 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398417)

There is a missing space between "devolved." and "They do it"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398433 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398433)

"Something that has passed onto a worsed state." --> "passed [into] a [worse] state."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398446 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398446)



Prof. Norman: "I would've went insane" --> "I would've [gone] insane"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398462 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398462)



Zaman: "cracking of you bones" --> "[your] bones"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398470 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398470)



Luben: "run throught Drop Zone" --> "through"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398500 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398500)


"I'll dissapear" --> "disappear" one S two P's

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398516 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398516)



Tina: "Tina shows severeal hand signals" --> "several"
"You have know idea what they mean" --> "no" not "know"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398526 (http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398526)

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: melanhton on December 26, 2015, 11:25:08 pm
Vault Odis

Footlocker

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584749495
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584750556
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on December 27, 2015, 06:08:00 am
OH BOY it's more typos and errors!!!!!


Joseph Harlan: "I see. we could have..." --> "I see. [W]e could have..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=583398552



Motioner in the closed-door room: "I've spend years..." --> "I've [spent] years"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584035039



Sergio the Wizard: "It's obvious you're are not from..." --> "you're not" or "you are not," not both

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584035110

"You haveArena" --> missing space

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584035131

"On a second though..." --> "second [thought]"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584035153




Joel outside the Hanging Rat: "Careful not to fall of the edge" --> "[off] the edge"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584110986



Rude Rob: "I try to treat y'all equally and respectively..." I'm not actually sure what Rob's trying to say here, but "respectively" can't be right. Is he trying to say "I try to treat y'all equally respectfully"?

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584110986

"good bar nam" --> "name"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111054



Leonie: "Unfortunately, mine is at the moment" --> "Unfortunately, [the] mine is [closed] at the moment"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111064



Kevin: "the valiance of Foundry Guard..."  "Valiance" IS technically a word, but no one says it. The word people actually use is "valor."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111091



Bryan: "'Why did I come to this barren station? The air is horribly polluted... and there's absolutely no fun to be had here?'" The second sentence is not a question so it should not end in a question mark.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111112



Foundry commoner: "There ain't much Arena fans here" --> "[many] Arena fans"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111123



Estelle: "One of them even spoke one miner having his arm bitten clean off." --> "even spoke [of] one miner..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111154

"You shouldn't too." --> "You shouldn't [either.]"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584742094



Crazy Tchortist in Foundry: "Crawlers! Up There! Look!" --> "Up [t]here!"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111172



West: "I pitty those working in the mine" --> "pity"
"I'm thankful I'm not in ther boots." --> "[their] boots"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111213



Messer: "An advice" --> the word "advice" does not work this way; use either "Some advice" or "A piece of advice"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111226



Foundry Chief: "The chief's appearance is quite the opposite of mayor's" --> "of [the] mayor's"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111238

"Mine does not only feed the mouth of these people" --> "[The] mine does not only feed the [mouths] of these people"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111287

"Here's a smal reward" --> "small"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741684



Foundry Mayor: "Those creatures looked like something no one in Foundry had never seen or even heard of before" --> had [ever] seen"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111247

"it may look like it's smaller siblings" --> "its"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111260

"...order the mine closed.This issue..." --> missing space between "closed." and "This"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111271

"I believe we've went through everything" --> "we've [gone] through everything"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111302



Delma: "...into the low range.Good day..." --> missing space between "range." and "Good"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111319



Nicolas: "He seems lost in thought... As soon as he uttered those words, his eyes instantly became clear and focused, as if he sobered up in an instant. Tiny drops of sweat also appeared on his face, slowly growing larger and larger." --> This is a tense change from all the other NPC descriptions. To remain consistent it needs to be: "As soon as he [utters] those words, his eyes instantly [become] clear and focused, as if he [has] sobered up in an instant. Tiny drops of sweat also [appear] on his face"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584111352



Foundry bum: "walkin' around like your the boss of the place." --> "like [you're] the boss"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741660




Marcos: "The small ones, while not exactly friable..." "Friable" IS a word, but I have never heard anyone use it in conversation. "Fragile" would sound more natural.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741755



Saban: "numerous biting marks" --> "numerous [bite] marks"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741789

"Some of the guys did shoot them or step on few that hadn't have the time to find a hiding place." --> "Some of the guys did shoot them or step on [a] few that hadn't [had] the time..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741825

"This shield her is..." --> "here" not "her"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741852



Olivia: "...and then you cool it down with water there it is." --> either "you cool it down with water, [and] there it is." or "you cool it down with water. There it is."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=584741982

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: D8ms on December 28, 2015, 12:04:25 pm
Asking Gunnar Edstrom "Can you tell me how oligarchy came to be?"
Shouldn't it be "Can you tell me how THE oligarchy came to be?"

And in his response begins with
"That item, is it perhaps an unusually shaped device contained in a metal box?Oh, that story started even before I came to core City."
It seems that the first sentence shouldn't be there.

When you talk to Morgan about your house, during one of the dialogue chains he says
"Follow me, MisterPlayername" without a space between Mister and the playername
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: fallander on December 28, 2015, 02:05:33 pm
Hi! I've found little one. GMS expedition quest where the riders camp is (far east under warehouse) the last guy, after some time (when i've got rid of his teammates) start to yell: I needs some help.... I think it should be "i need" :)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on December 29, 2015, 11:00:34 pm
Are you ready for more???  :P


Scoped crossbow description: "It's aiming precision..." --> "Its"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=585898370



Explosive bullet crafting screen: "...and certain amount of hexogen." --> "and [a] certain amount of hexogen."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=585898457



Foundry Mayor: "You want to lure the creature inside metalworks" --> "inside [the] metalworks"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=585898471



Foundry Chief: "you've proven to me you are a woman of trust" ...He would more likely say "you are a woman [I can] trust."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=585898531

"who stared at the eyes of these creatures" --> "stared [into] the eyes of these creatures"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586023923

"A boss, so to say." --> "so to [speak]" is the expression
"the fellow might've as well been trying" --> "the fellow [might as well have] been trying" is what a person would say

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586023997

"we need only wait and see what happens with Ironheads." --> "...with [the] Ironheads."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586024110



Bernard: "Maybe you should drain the furnace and see if anything remained of that devil." ---> "if anything [remains] of that devil."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586023938



Bobby: "...with brave men and women of Foundry Guard." --> "with [the] brave men and women of [the] Foundry Guard."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586023987



Foundry: There is a constant tendency for people in Foundry to talk about "Foundry Guard." It sounds strange. It is more likely they would talk about "[the] Foundry Guard." This is too widespread to provide all relevant screenshots.



Dan: "while those prickly buggers were rampaged though the mine" --> "buggers rampaged through" or "buggers were rampaging through"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586853744



Gorge: There appears to be multiple spaces between "I heard you" and "got that tattoo"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586024184

"He was about to take another sip from the glass when your words struck him like one of the trains he operates." The verb tense here is inconsistent with other NPC descriptions; it needs to be: "He [is] about to take another sip from the glass when your words [strike] him..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586024195

"You hope that's what you wanted, sister." --> "[I} hope that's what you wanted"
"To give you an advice" --> "to give you [some] advice"
"Where were Bakers captured again?" --> "Where were [the] Bakers captured again?"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586024208



Vera: "a deserted camp, located in caves north of the Rail Crossing train station" --> "located in [the] caves" or "located in [some] caves" sounds more natural

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586528938



The Core City Arena announcer calls the player "he" even if she is female.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716070



Lanista: "as if he is wondering why aren't you leaving." --> "as if he is wondering why [you aren't] leaving."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716086

Says "during his first fight" even if the player is female.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716607

"don*t you dare pull out now when you*ve got the heads rolling" has asterisks * instead of apostrophes '

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716676



Garry: "I've got nothing to do with neither of them." The correct sentence structure would be "I've got nothing to do with [either] of them," but since we're talking about the oligarchs here and there are three of them, not two, I believe the sentence should actually read "I've got nothing to do with [any] of them."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716318

"Thing to not is that his tactics..." --> "[The] thing to [note] is that..." or "[The] thing to [know] is that..."
"you blood will quickly be filled with a lethal concoctions." --> either "with a lethal concoction" or "with lethal concoctions", not both

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716498



Rupert Simmons: Ughhh, does he really HAVE to call the player character "son" even when she's female? It makes him sound... derailed, frankly. You could use "little lady" to preserve the paternalistic style of address without making him sound like a complete idiot.

"If someone asks you where you going or what you're doing" --> "where [you're] going"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586716778

"That's is all I wanted to tell you" --> "That's all" or "That is all", not both

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586721226

"Can you tell me how oligarchy came to be?" --> "how [the] oligarchy came to be"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586721226

"unlock it's powers" --> "its"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586853726

"Talk to Harlan, he'll tell you what's it about." --> "what it's about"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854009



Hadrian Tanner: "What else could have goaded the Faceless to rise up such force" --> "to rise up [with] such force" OR "to [raise] up such force"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586853760

"They are probably looking for a certain characteristics" --> the "a" is not needed

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854148



Console in the hidden research facility: "It's color is bluish dark gray" --> "Its"
 "The artifact features a one to six unrecognized symbols on each of its many sides." The "a" before "one to six" is not needed.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586853936



Morgan: "Follow me, Miss[Playername]" missing a space between Miss and the name

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854034

"arranged to you liking" --> "your"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854053



Jyles: "He was a recluse man" --> either "he was a [reclusive] man" or just "he was a recluse"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854072

"A man could have had a nice chat with him, yet somehow, and this is strange, but you'd always end up..." Having both "yet" and "but" is redundant; I recommend you simply remove the "but"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854094

"I'd like to do purchase something" --> "I'd like to purchase something", no "do"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854111

Missing space between "browse through." and "Also"
"until basement and second floor are renovated" --> "until [the] basement"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=586854131
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: chimaera on December 31, 2015, 10:14:44 am
One dialogue with Lanista, after an arena match has the * symbol instead of the apostrophe:

"You're a gladiator now, the crowd loves you, and don*t you dare pull out now when you*ve got the heads rolling."

The dialogue with Gary before the arena fight has a double "that". Also, the second sentence is basically a repeat of the first and unnecessary:

"Well, I can't say much, other that that you're up against a difficult opponent. You're going up against one difficult opponent."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on December 31, 2015, 05:46:52 pm
GRAMMAR FOR THE GRAMMAR GOD, SPELLING FOR THE SPELLING THRONE



Arena announcer: Multiple spaces between "we have our" and "beloved Chemical Agent"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819544

"Will [gladiator name] become Invictus, or will join the one hundred and fifty six gladiators slain by Dread Lord?" --> "or will [he/she] join"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819763

"welcome to what is about to be one of greatest, most anticipated matches" --> "one of [the] greatest, most anticipated matches"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819871



Carnifex: "Moving around feels a bit difficult if one's head is not attached." --> "Moving around [is] a bit difficult" or "Moving around [seems] a bit difficult"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819893

 "And don't make me regret for coming back from retirement." --> the "for" is not needed

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819879

"Do not dissapoint me" --> "disappoint" one S two P's

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819902



Lanista: "You're becoming big player now" --> "becoming [a] big player"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819567

"If that wasn*t enough" has asterisk instead of apostrophe
"and send his to to the scrapyard." --> and send [him] to the scrapyard" or "and send his [robot/sentry/whatever] to the scrapyard", with only one "to"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819642



Garry: "I'm going to make sure I be as close as I can to the bloodbath" --> "I'm going to make sure I [am] as close as I can [be] to the bloodbath", or "I'm going to make sure I [get] as close as I can to the bloodbath". Oh Garry, you're so subtle.  ;)

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819788



Andrea: "It's growing popularity" --> "Its"
"due to the JKK making sure it's being broadcast" So, I don't know what the abbreviation "JKK" actually stands for, but no one else I have met in the game calls them "*the* JKK," so for consistency I would say drop the "the" here.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819577

"so neither the runners or the viewers don't know which room comes next." --> "so neither the runners [nor] the viewers [] know which room comes next." no "don't"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819625

I was not fast enough to get a screenshot, but on the coil spider level of the gauntlet the announcer says "arachophobia" instead of "arachnophobia". (Missing "N")



Travis: "How much are you asking for that mechanics workbench." --> This is a question, so it needs a question mark.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819934

"I got it from mechanic in Core City." --> "I got it from [a] mechanic in Core City."
missing space between "brand new." and "Short pause"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819946



West: "He stare becomes" --> "[His] stare becomes"
"There is a lot of expensive tools in that thing." --> "There [are] a lot of"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587819975

"but my back's a bit friable." No one would say "friable" about their back; try "fragile" or "temperamental" or "my back's liable to act up."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820001



Gorsky: "Tell me about Zone Rats." --> "about [the] Zone Rats." (sorry, no screenshot)

"I've spent quite a number of years in Core City before I came to SGS." --> "[I} spent quite a number of years"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820013

"weak bastads" --> "weak [bastards]"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820099

"an old service station, build right into the bloody cave." --> "[built] right into the bloody cave"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820107



Sneaky: "it probably means they are still stored altogether somewhere in the warehouse." --> "still stored [together] somewhere in the warehouse", or just "still stored somewhere in the warehouse"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820026

missing space between "and gear here." and "We'll lay low"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820154



Core City commoner: "You're ain't from around here?" --> "[You] ain't from around here?"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820065



Mykola: "Tunneler is ready to go." --> "[The] tunneler is ready to go."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820127



SGS Botanist: "A also take care of the mushrooms" --> "[I} also take care of the mushrooms"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=587820181



Jyles: "with a shielded plasma bot on it.." Double period.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325232

"I would like you to fix ground floor lights." --> "fix [the] ground floor lights."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325297



Zilla: "The instant you mentioned his name" --> "mention" present tense
"her fissured, charred to face" --> the "to" is not needed

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325338

"Do not let me repeat myself." --> "Do not [make] me repeat myself."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325367

Missing space between "VOLUNTARILY." and "They fight"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325430
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: klei on January 01, 2016, 08:34:38 am
Asking for a cigar from Mordre in the Mushroom Cove: "Go a spare one for me?". Go -> Got.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on January 02, 2016, 05:16:47 am
Grammar and spelling errors, special Protectorate edition.



Computer in... I forget which abandoned research station it is. Panacea? Anyway: "there are couple of unencrypted emails" --> "there are [a] couple of unencrypted emails"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325604


"due to recent turmoils within the organization" --> "due to recent [turmoil]"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325632



Jyles: He says "We offer standard shelves for one hundred charons a piece" but then you must pay 300 charons for two of them. So he should say they offer them for one hundred fifty charons a piece. Jyles is bad at math!

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588325834



Protectorate guard: "I must ask you to holster all visible weapons... and otherwise potentionialy dangerous equipment" --> "[potentially] dangerous equipment"
"Failure to do say" --> "Failure to do [so]"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588521849



Protectorate secretary: "It is an honor to be working for in the United Stations consulate" --> "for" or "in", not both

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522732



Consul Oliver: "The consul is looking at his portable computer as you were stepping into his office." --> "as you [step] into his office."
"He shakes your hand, smiles with an almost identical white smile as you've seen on Ambassador Athanas" --> "He shakes your hand, smiles [a white smile almost identical to the one you saw] on Ambassador Athanas"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588521870


"you know what's the situation there" --> "you know [what the situation is] there" sounds more natural

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588521929


"Ambassador informed me" --> "[The] Ambassador informed me"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588521982


"Ambassador told me" --> "[The] Ambassador told me"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522039


"He's been in charge since the Fort Apogee's deployment." --> "He's been in charge since [the Fort's] deployment" or "...since [Fort Apogee's] deployment"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522055


"this is the first time it had happened" --> "the first time it [has] happened"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522429


"You're an outsider, dear Corporal, or have been before the sergeant's squad renegaded" --> "or [you were when] the sergeant's squad [went renegade]"


http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522633




Colonel Cathcart: "Yes? Said the man behind the table with a heavy, booming voice" --> "Yes? [Says] the man behind the table"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522088


"I wanted to help the South Underrail" --> "I wanted to help South Underrail" (no "the")

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522134


He says "a junior officer always salutes his superior first" even when the player character is female.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522164


"It just happens to be that I have a mission for you." --> "It just [so] happens [] that I have..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522229


"the bad public opinion about the Protectorate" --> "the bad public opinion [of] the Protectorate"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522258


"Consul, unfortunately, often fails to realize..." --> "[The] Consul" or "Consul [Oliver]"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522280


"turn south and the first intersection" --> "[at] the first intersection"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522304



Case: "but then it often sound like" --> "but then it often [sounds] like"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522780



Anastasia: "deforming my throat with every inhale." --> "with every [inhalation]" or "with every [breath]"
"The damage to my focal folds" --> "[vocal] folds"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522823


"Consul is a competent..." --> "[The] Consul is a..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588522910



Luka: "...which makes it difficult to hear someone approaching. And yours has been..." --> "...difficult to hear [someone's approach.] And yours has been..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523017


"I'm sorry, I was focused on repairing the right leg stabilizers that I wasn't even aware..." --> "I was [so] focused"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523043


"I wasn't asked that question in a long time." --> "I [haven't been] asked..."
"I was living there when the riots and death were at its peak." --> "at [their] peak"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523104


"Let's give it a shot, I though!" --> "I [thought]!" missing T

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523283


"Colonel is different." --> "[The] Colonel is different."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523320



Captain Blackwall: "These occurrences repeated several times already" --> "These occurrences [have] repeated"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523393



Faceless Mask oddity text: "The inner workings of mask have been destroyed" --> "The inner working of [the] mask"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523415



Dirty Tom: "But as the things currently stand..." --> "But as things currently stand", no "the"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588523444
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on January 04, 2016, 07:59:46 pm
Special Protectorate war crimes edition!

~~contains potential spoilers~~



Mushroom Brew text: "You have no idea what's this made of" --> "You have no idea [what this is] made of"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694286




Moe: "I don't even know why did she choose that location" --> "why [she chose] that location"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780723




Jyles: "they are the only one's we've got" --> "ones" no apostrophe
"they are best buy." --> "they are [the] best buy."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780765




Rail Crossing bartender: "Haven't had much visitors since the Faceless showed" --> "Haven't had [many] visitors" or "Haven't had much [in the way of] visitors"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694762




Mitchell in Core City: "Or was it ,Manjula?" has the space before the comma instead of after it--but frankly, that comma isn't needed anyway.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694359




Col. Cathcart: "Well, Corporal, is was told this Southgater could prove to be an excelent ally" --> "[I} was told" "excellent" (needs two Ls)

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694376


"So I dediced to send an expedition to locate the facility and see if they can dig out something" --> "decided" (D and C switched) "see if they [could] dig out something"
"Tthe time is up" --> "The" (one T)

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694412


"We lost Epione Lab to Free Drones." --> "to [the] Free Drones."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780825


"numerous important informations" --> the word "information"doesn't work this way; use "numerous important [pieces of] information" or "[much] important information"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780882


"His informations were always incredibly accurate" --> "His [information was] always incredibly accurate"
"He warned us about their operations so that we could have acted in time, or generally leaking information regarding important figures" --> "He warned us... so that we [could act] in time, [and] generally [leaked] information..."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781082


"Free Drones are a kind of people who..." --> "are [the] kind of people"
"learned of a teenage girl who was suspected of being contacted by one of the Free Drones." --> "a teenage girl who [we suspected had been contacted] by one of the Free Drones."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781117




Fraser: "when you're dealing with people who aren't on the same level as you are." --> "the same level as you." no "are" needed

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694477


"But, you now this very well" --> "know"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694492


"and marvelous man he was." --> "and [a] marvelous man he was"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781371




Anastasia: "I think we both earned a lot about each... other's professions" --> "we both [learned] a lot"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781392


"A frown chisels itself into her forehead." --> Frowns do not go on the forehead.  :P  Try "A [sharp furrow] chisels itself into her forehead" or something like that.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781407




Renegade: "I was sent to Fort Apogee to negotiate" --> "I was sent [from] Fort Apogee"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694568




Holloway: "It didn't take too long for you to finally meet the sergeant" --> needs to be "doesn't" to be consistent with other present-tense NPC descriptions

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694587


"It's not one specific thing... It's a perpetuating problem I have had with the Protectorate" I think the word you're looking for here is "ongoing," not "perpetuating."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694609


"that's not what I signed for, damn it!" --> "not what I signed [up] for" or "signed [on] for"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694631


"I realized it probably wouldn't do a damn even if I did" --> "it wouldn't do a damn [thing] even if I did"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694650


"That is everything there is to it" --> "That is [all] there is to it"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694665




Brady: Missing space between "from a grave." and "They silently stand there"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780626




Consul Oliver: "it is essential that the two to understand each other well." the "to" is not needed

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780783


"I don't see why corporal shouldn't be present" --> "why [the] corporal"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780805


"it collapsed, killing everything in it." --> "killing [everyone] in it."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780859


"Consul Oliver for you, Captain!" --> "[That's] Consul Oliver [to] you, Captain!"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780948


"You find Consul infuriated" --> "You find [the] Consul infuriated"
"What surprises me the most is that Colonel did nothing to prevent it!" --> "that [the] Colonel"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781138




Mareth: "Their sinister masks reveal nothing to the eye, only to imagination." --> "only to [the] imagination"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780900


"the silence is broken by whom you presume is the leader of the group" --> "broken by [the one] you presume is the leader"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780927


"more than capable of avoiding those cybernetic muts" --> I think the word you want is "mutts", unless this is a shortened form of "mutant," I can't tell from the context.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780969


"If the HC and General Korn... say CAU in charge" --> "say CAU [is] in charge"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588780985


"we already know the location of their lair -- at least that's what that snitch was good for" --> this sounds rather strange. Try "at least that's something that snitch was good for" or "at least that snitch was good for something"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781004


"Colonel is silent." --> "[The] Colonel is silent."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781014


"People say that CAU, or chems, how we're often called, is a unit characterized with inhumaneness and brutality." --> "chems, [as] we're often called" "a unit characterized [by] [inhumanity] and brutality."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781175


"when mess like the one with Epione happens" --> "when [a] mess like the one with Epione"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781275


"She's young and very enthusiastic about her being a part of CAU" --> the "her" is not needed
"She is obedient and I've never had to doubt that she will second-guess any order or back away from anything." --> The sentence is contradictory; try "I've never had to [worry] that she will second-guess any order"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781293


"If the intel Colonel gave me, which came from the snitch that went silent before Epione was attacked, they are hiding in some passages" --> The "If" clause is never finished! Try something like: "The Colonel gave me the intel from that snitch who went silent before Epione was attacked. If it's correct, they are hiding in some passages"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781305


"we can't just can't stroll into their territory" has two "can't"s!

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781337




Dess: "How many lifes have you taken?" --> "lives"
"Don't fight the human nature" --> "Don't fight human nature", no "the"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781198


"So, we were to supposed to take out" --> remove the "to" before "supposed"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781219


"The young boy avenged his mother without a second though" --> "without a second [thought]" missing T

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588781231




Efreitor Denzil: "don't just stand there like frozen." --> "don't just stand there like [you're] frozen."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=588694320
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 11:59:51 am
I'm not playing on Steam so I don't have some nifty way of linking screenshots so I'll simply attach them.

In the tutorial with Vencel, you're taught about stealth:
Quote from: Underrail
to successfully hide from someone, they need to keep out of their sight for a while
Probably this is meant to say "you need to keep out of their sight".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:01:47 pm
Arlene's shot is a dialogue tree text error, even if it isn't a grammar / spelling error.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:04:45 pm
I now realise the reason text is being clipped in "Blueprints.jpg" is due to large font size not being supported everywhere. It seems to be pretty well supported though. This is one of the rare cases it isn't.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:07:54 pm
Definitely typos.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:12:17 pm
Buzzer's dialogue looks like it has been edited a number of times, and remnants of some vestigial placeholder has been left behind.

He definitely only describes one device, and the Faceless are looking for one device, so it seems odd he abruptly mentions "devices".

As for begging the question, more information can be found at http://begthequestion.info/ but rest assured that Buzzer most definitely is not begging the question as he claims.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:18:11 pm
Cliff's green boxtext changes tense at one point, switching from describing Cliff's current context, to what it used to be. Simply changing past tense "lay" to present tense "lie" would mean this would make sense. This is definitely a grammar error. More at http://web.ku.edu/~edit/lie.html
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:27:42 pm
Abram's bug emits emote text as you use it which says:
Quote from: Underrail
but you're seeing doing so.
This should be "seen".

Delma should say, "It's always the bad side of Foundry I see and deal with on a daily basis."

Is it intentional that the player discovers both a "secret door" and "Secret passage" (sic) for the one interaction point here? Is the capitalisation intentional?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:33:42 pm
I now realise the reason text is being overlapped in "Dragan and Barry.jpg" is due to large font size not being supported everywhere. It seems to be pretty well supported though. This is one of the rare cases it isn't.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:38:43 pm
I'm not sure what Dude is trying to say is like something else (eg, "you are like a pig") but his comparisons aren't defined in his text.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:40:06 pm
"Dude9.jpg" is missing an "r".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:42:20 pm
Edgar seems a bit tense.  :P
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:47:52 pm
Quote from: Underrail
what's the situation is
doubles up the "is".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 12:50:17 pm
I find Essie's directions are often over simplified and it tends to take me a lot more stumbling around before I find what I'm looking for.

Estelle's "One of them" is pretty awkward / unclear even if it's syntactically correct.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:02:12 pm
"Ezra1.jpg" isn't a spelling or grammar issue. "Travelling" is using the standard consonant doubling (just like "travelled") that is used in British English. On the other hand, "color" is the spelling used in the American dialect. It seems most of Underrail uses the American dialect, so it's inconsistent to encounter English English too.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:06:12 pm
In Depot A, Wyatt described Ezra delivering a biological agent. It may well be that Biocorp had many employees with Ezra's particular augmentations and Psi speciality, but nevertheless, the player character needs a dialogue option (unlocked by the conversation with Wyatt) to challenge Ezra on his (potential) involvement, even if Ezra just dismisses it or denies it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:15:01 pm
Homeless Guy is classic: we've all seen someone struggle to form a cogent insult who winds up publicising their own illiteracy or ineptitude instead.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:18:23 pm
Although Fredd corrects himself to "didn't", his initial word was "aint'" with the apostrophe in the wrong place.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:20:29 pm
People "call you that", and they can "refer to you like that", but they don't "call you like that".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:24:18 pm
The GMS Power Generator dialogue tree doesn't seem to respond correctly to certain commands.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:29:32 pm
The confusion between "its" (the possessive pronoun) and "it's" (the contraction of "it is" or "it has") is pretty common. The thing to remember is that other possessive pronouns (yours, hers, ours, theirs) have no apostrophe of possession, just like "its".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:35:02 pm
Superplurals such as "dreamses" from Star War The Backstroke Of The West, or "yous" ("thee" is the singular / informal, and "you" is the plural / formal form) are often laughing at themselves, but this "creatures's" can't make up its mind whether it's singular or plural.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:39:58 pm
"a new nuclei" is like saying "this criteria" or "this media".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:42:32 pm
I like it that you can ask Harold to explain the battery workings again - just in case you didn't get enough the first time! (There's still a typo on that screenshot though.)

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:46:06 pm
Quote from: Underrail
A weapon can also be unloaded, which is done by ... to unload it.
One of these references to unloading is redundant.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:51:00 pm
Although "that tactical vest might be the most appropriate", it might not. It doesn't really make sense to follow it with "but" anything.

The confusion between "its" (the possessive pronoun) and "it's" (the contraction of "it is" or "it has") is pretty common. The thing to remember is that other possessive pronouns (yours, hers, ours, theirs) have no apostrophe of possession, just like "its".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:55:49 pm
Kareem's isn't a grammar or spelling error, but it does seem strange that what colour this specific person is makes any difference or is at all relevant. It has never been significant for any of the other NPCs I've encountered. Very strange.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 01:58:41 pm
Double spaces aren't a grammar or spelling error, but they're still part of the dialogue string table.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:01:56 pm
Did Newton mean to say, "umm"?

I know Nicolas is portrayed as a drunk, but if this dialogue is intentionally incomprehensible, maybe it should be a bit more apparent that it's deliberate by introducing a few *hic* sounds or something.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:10:26 pm
Old Jonas is missing important words in some of his dialogue that obscures meaning.

Olivia's dialogue also contains a run-on sentence that needs to be broken up into actual sentences, just like in "OldJonas2.jpg"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:15:39 pm
Some odd hybrid tense there from Pasquale.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:16:52 pm
Pasquale's Psi Empathy feat training dialogue usually links "taking" the pill and "swallowing" it within the same response. However, at one point, you can "take" the pill without swallowing it, with just the instruction to swallow it. This makes it sound like the pill is now an item in the inventory - as if you can take the pill from him now and decide whether to swallow it any time in the future.

Since taking and swallowing are presented as conceptually distinct actions, it might be good to remove the dialogue entry where they are treated independently.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:19:58 pm
In the GMS compound basement level 3, just after being teleported from the ladder room into the Leader's presence and just before the Leader kills most of his own troops by lobbing a grenade at his own feet in a crowded canteen, one of the Raiders has nothing to say.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:23:15 pm
"might as well have came from" is certainly an unusual grammar error.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:27:05 pm
In the dialogue with Saban, asking him about his bitten shield causes:

"you should've went" is certainly an unusual grammar error.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:29:44 pm
It might be legitimate to have two tooltips for the stairs, but this doesn't usually happen.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:36:20 pm
The PipBoy should say "The target audience ... seems to be young, blond men ..." because "blond" (with no "e") is for males and "blonde" is for females.

Vencel elsewhere knows the difference between "affect" and "effect" but here he slips up.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 06, 2016, 02:40:26 pm
Vince has some dialogue options quoting the toll as 5 charons. One is "then" charons (ie 10). But even when the player replies with 5, Vince responds contradicting that the price is actually 5 charons.

It's unclear whether Wyatt's text is meant to be white, spoken "Look at these ruins!" or green, contextual "He looks at these ruins."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: idoru2099 on January 06, 2016, 05:08:07 pm
Syntax error: http://imgur.com/FtY2AFA
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Toast on January 19, 2016, 12:07:39 am
Spelling and grammar mistakes are evolution. Evolution is spelling and grammar mistakes. Loot is life.


contains potential ~~SPOILERS~~



Daphne: "...appears lost in thought, her gaze fixated at some distant spot" --> "her gaze [fixed on] some distant spot"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607191


"But first, allow me to introduce myself first." --> remove one of the "first"s!

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607204


"Why are you here what can you tell me about this place?" --> "Why are you here [and] what can you..."
"What can you tell me about Tchortists?" --> "about [the] Tchortists?"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607222


"this Insitute of Tchort" --> "Institute" is missing a T

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607235




Cale: "I am the only one who truly mastered the art of being in a state..." ---> "who [has] truly mastered"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607249


"What do you know about Tchortists?" --> "What do you know about [the] Tchortists?"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607265




Maurice? Fella in the corner outside the Tchort Institute: "I though you said something" --> "thought" missing a T

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607277




What: "makes him look like he just about to vomit." --> "like he [is] just about to vomit"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607303




Detritus: "...doesn't smell nearly as life-threating as it looks" --> "life-[threatening]" missing "en"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607322


"Heard of drop zone?" --> everyone else in the game capitalizes "Drop Zone" so I assume it should be capitalized here too

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607335


"You arelucky to be alive" --> space needed

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607349




Efreitor Denzil: "We are... full, so to say." --> "so to [speak]" is the expression

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607365


"Their motives, patterns of though or anything about them" --> "patterns of [thought]" missing T

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607381


"Just as he wanted to leave, he turns back to you again." --> needs to be in present tense to be consistent with other NPC descriptions. Also "wanted" is a bit awkward here; did you mean "went"? In that case it would be "Just as he [goes] to leave, he turns back"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607473




Preposterous Hippopotamus Praeposter Amelia: "Some things are unique to Institute of Tchort" --> "to [the] Institute of Tchort"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607488


Dialogue choice says "I am a man of the moment" even if player character is female.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607505


"Institute of Tchort is an institution dedicated to study and celebration of Tchort" --> "[The] Institute of Tchort... to [the] study" Just to explain why I keep mentioning this, it would be very unusual for a native English speaker to refer to a place called Institute of X without adding "the."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607517


"the mysterious cube Tchortist stole" --> "Tchortists" plural

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607546


"She inserts the needle into your flesh, and while you feel only a little sting, the feeling of uneasiness due to the whole atmosphere." --> This is not a complete sentence. I'm hesitant to suggest a fix because I don't know what you intended to say. Maybe this? "She inserts the needle into your flesh, and while you feel only a little sting, [there is a] feeling of uneasiness due to the whole atmosphere."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607558


"While we are at the subject of the library" --> "While we are [on] the subject of the library"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607586


"The west wing had been in ruins long before the existence of Institute of Tchort" --> "The west wing [was] in ruins long before the existence of [the] Institute of Tchort"
"When a large earthquake of year twenty-four struck" --> if she is talking about a specific well-known earthquake, she would say "[the] earthquake of year twenty-four"
"a discussion took place whether to restore the west wing" --> "a discussion took place [about] whether to restore"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607597


"In year sixty-seven, more than forty years after west wing had been demolished" --> "after [the] west wing"
"It was slow and methodical due to west wing's size" --> "due to [the] west wing's size"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607622


"what creature was capable of manage something like that." --> "capable of [managing] something like that."

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607622




Jerre Franz: "as well the rise of violent sports" --> "as well [as] the rise of violent sports"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607645


"the body of knowledge the Tchortist possess" --> "Tchortists" plural

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607660




Lazy Lal: "Don't get this the wrong way" --> "Don't [take] this the wrong way" is the expression

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607696




Eidein: "We rarely get to witness such valiant effort from those who were yet to become a part of our institution." --> "from those who [have] yet to become"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607721




Provost Vladan: Refers to the PC as "him" even when PC is female. In the same sentence, "which of course does not give him to right to, as you say, barge in" --> "[the] right to" not "to right to"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607744




Episkopos Lydia: "what job does an episkopos perform?... Episkopos oversees and manages all three departments" --> "[An] episkopos oversees..."
"I have been on this position" --> "I have been [in] this position"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607759




Tchortist in cafeteria: "Did you know that Monsignor Gustav was sitting on that same table over there when he choked to death." --> "...was sitting [at] that same table over there when he choked to death[?]" (While it is certainly possible to sit *on* a table, I'm pretty sure that's not what you meant here.)

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607771




Buzzer: "worse than the phelgm I cough up" --> "phlegm"

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607416


"always look to history when ever you are in doubt" --> "[whenever] you are in doubt"
"I ask you?Of course" --> missing space

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=589607435
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: FlorianGh on January 24, 2016, 06:36:31 pm
there needs to be a space between "in" and "any" on the 3rd paragraph.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on January 27, 2016, 06:25:12 pm
Both Jack and Azif use phrase "most optimal" in their dialogues. This is tautology.
They surely are obsessed with perfection :)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: ShadowRun on January 28, 2016, 03:14:57 am
"most optimal" in their dialogues. This is tautology.
Very rarely, I read people in real life who have mistakenly written "most all". A claim could apply to:
but hybridising two of these to say "most all" is meaningless. "All" surpasses "most".

So "most optimal" would be better written as one of:
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: klei on January 31, 2016, 12:18:26 pm
Jon the Beautiful: "The have... what's it called... Oh, " --> "They have... what's it called... Oh, "
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: fimbri on February 07, 2016, 05:51:37 pm
Speaking to Geezer Ford "Did Hopper Jim beat some kind of record of yours by catching that red eel?"

"It ain't about the weight, if that's whatcha thinking, it about principle" -> "It ain't about the weight, if that's whatcha thinking, it's about principle"

Also, not sure, but shouldn't that read ...it's about the principle...? (italicized to highlight)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Taggart on February 22, 2016, 01:36:07 pm
Speaking to Will in Fort Apogee:

though = thought

"3. I though I said goodbye, Will"

v1.0.1.4

Attached: snip of the dialog box
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: eLPuSHeR on February 26, 2016, 06:59:36 pm
Where it says "agains", it shoud be "against"

(http://i.imgur.com/p42JRgj.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Taggart on February 26, 2016, 10:21:31 pm
Tchort U, PI Georgis; his introductory blurb could use a couple small changes:

Scratch the word "of". Not needed.

Correct "relief" to the proper "relieve".

Running v1.0.1.4

see attached..
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: eLPuSHeR on February 28, 2016, 11:08:58 am
Just right at the beggining. When you enter caves for the first time to reactivate the generator:

Old Jonas asks you to retrieve his lost wristwatch. The journal entry for this quest reads:

"Find the Old Jonas watch..."

That "the" article could be suppressed I think. -> "Find Old Jonas watch..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Sanger on February 28, 2016, 11:22:00 pm
Option to climb boxes to gain entrance into Talloski Manor - activator says "Cimb up" rather than "Climb up".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Taggart on February 29, 2016, 06:22:24 am
Sophie in Hardcore Bar:

"She drifts off into deep though and remains..."

though = thought

v1.0.1.4


attached - dialog snip
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Taggart on March 02, 2016, 08:22:16 pm
Twitch in Oculus:

PC to Twitch:

2) I might some surveillance help.

Missing word 'need'.

Should be:

2) I might need some surveillance help.

v1.0.1.4

ref attached
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: eLPuSHeR on March 22, 2016, 09:14:00 pm
Brutallity -> Brutality

(http://i.imgur.com/xwNMGge.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Taggart on April 01, 2016, 04:36:47 am
glimps should be glimpse in Oculus Mainframe dialog

Ref attached

v1.0.1.4
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Ninjaxenomorph on April 04, 2016, 04:03:51 am
I didn't think to record them anywhere, but the 'Gas the Drones' Protectorate quest has a lot of spelling errors. First one I noticed was Mareth misspelling 'Corporal' as 'Corpoal', and several with Will' dialogue thereafter.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: player1 on April 04, 2016, 05:49:28 am
Hmm... Could we extract dialogue string files in some readable format and run them through spell checker?
Title: DC Caerus Residential Helting Log 244982
Post by: Taggart on April 11, 2016, 10:31:24 pm
".., on one is likely to get pulled for mutagen work"

Should be:

".., no one is likely to get pulled for mutagen work"

v1.0.1.4

Ref. attached
Title: Dr Helding vs Dr Helting (SPOILERS)
Post by: Taggart on April 12, 2016, 05:28:46 pm
In S. Parkinson's Log 43214330, T. Borovitch refers to Dr. Helting as Dr Helding.

Seems like an obvious typo - however, I recognize that perhaps the NPC Borovitch made that typo, and not the devs.

But just in case, I report it here..   :)

v1.0.1.4

Ref. attached
Title: Deep Cavern - King from above
Post by: Taggart on April 13, 2016, 09:24:16 am
I was expecting to run into the Rathound King in the Deep Caverns :)

Anyways, some grammar here:

word: 'discrespected' should be 'disrespected'

missing word: '.. so for that he must demonstrate what happens the mighty Rathound King gets discrespected[sic]'

'.. so for that he must demonstrate what happens when the mighty Rathound King gets discrespected[sic]'

v1.0.1.4

ref attached
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: posfan12 on April 16, 2016, 05:49:10 am
"Do you want to become a councilor..."

should be

"Do you want to become a councillor..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: YawaUR on July 04, 2016, 05:53:49 pm
I've seen it twice now (and I don't remember where sadly), but "ya'll" is incorrect. It's "y'all".

E:
I've just defeated Stygian Exorcist and then spoken to Garry. He states "Well, I can't say much other than you're up against a difficult opponent. You're going up against one difficult opponent. Not everyone can become the Invictus, you know. [etc]".

Clearly he's very eager to tell me I might be in trouble against Dread Lord.  :P

Come to think of it, I recall NPCs saying invictus but it should really be capitalised due to it being a title, no? I also don't remember where, though most likely around/in the Arena.

E2:
At the Oculus base, hack the console for level 2 access. Access Biocorp files then Old Biocorp.
There appears to be an error which states "Somewhere between hundred fifty-two hundred years ago a revolt [...]".
Having seen a few NPCs tell me Biocorp fell apart some hundreds of years ago, I have a feeling this meant "somewhere between a hundred (and) fifty-two to a hundred years ago" in which case it should be a little clearer.

Once again at the Oculus console, this time access Protectorate Biocorp. It states "Core City is an independent city mostly focus on violent sport entertainment and trade, though local Coretech organization did inherit some of the Biocorp facilities and projects".
I think it'd look nicer as "Core City is an independent city mostly focused on violent sport entertainment and trade, though a local organization by the name of Coretech did inherit some of the Biocorp facilities and projects".

Rupert Simmons under Personal Files. "Rupert was a high ranking Biocorp technocrats before joining Core City rebellion".
I feel this should say "Rupert was a high ranking Biocorp technocrat before joining the Core City rebellion".

Gunnar Edstrom under Personal Files. "Unknown" is misspelt.

Speaking to Phyllis in Oculus, ask her about the Oculus and on the final bit of text that starts with "Ignoring the deadly drop", "any" is repeated twice.

Speaking to Sophie in the Hardcore Bar, "cocktail" is misspelt when speaking about her being alone at the bar.
"Thought" is misspelt when asking her about herself.
Actually, speaking of the Talloskis, is Maxim supposed to deny I'm the Invictus (when I actually am)? I mean, he does watch the fights after all. Plus his dad invited me over, apparently.

E3:
When Georgis gives you the quest to retrieve the protein data, if you already collected it and state this to him, he says "I'll send this right through to my assistants.And this is for you, brother". A space is required before 'and'.
Also when asking him about what the protein data is, he states "Protein design it, by definition, [...]", I believe that should be an 'is'.

When informing Schteff of Pavel's death, a space is required in the sentence "I am responsible for Pavel's death... as well asthe opening of the west wing...".

When informing Rista of the behemoth (as such) and pick the 3rd option to fully explain what went on at Forsaken Island, in the paragraph that starts "So that's what been going on!", there's several errors. Firstly in that sentence alone, then further down it states "Interesting, it really is, but is is an evidence that [...]".

When meeting Eidein in his office for the first time (just prior to the tremors), he states "Welcome back to my office" despite I have never been there before, unless I am mistaken.

Again while speaking to Eidein, this time about his age, the paragraph beginning with "My age is a testament", 'would' is misspelt.

E4:
Perhaps the wiki is wrong but it is telling me the place where the Faceless reside in DC is called "Talos Outpost" but when you're at Arke Powergrid and can allocate power, it is spelt "Tallos".

In Arke Powergrid, when you access the central room (where the red face is), turn off the power at the bottom-right then enter the door to the north. "Taught" is misspelt twice on the security console.

When speaking to Iris, the sentence that starts as "No! No!", a space is required between "NOTstatic".

E5:
When speaking to Six in the elevator, after he bids you to ask questions, choose option 5. The final segment states "I could not explain this things to you", it should be 'these things'.

The ending sequence, I sided with the Black Eels and had the Protectorate move in. During this particular scene, "ambitious" is misspelt.

V1.0.1.10
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Phoenix7786 on July 05, 2016, 02:10:15 am
Forgive me if these have been posted already, but I am taking great lengths to avoid further spoilers.

1. & 2. When asking Tanner about United Stations he replies "This will, at some point, when certain strong figure is no longer in place, bring about interesting events." You might want to use an em dash or two in there and not an army of commas. This is because em dashes are used for emphasis or interruption. In this situation, Tanner is emphasizing that a certain figure is blocking that. That aside, there is also what I'm quite sure is a missing letter "a" between "when" and "certain". I know in countries where English is not the native language, articles like "a" "an" and "the" tend to disappear. However, it appears great lengths have been made to show Tanner as an educated man and that's why I believe this is a typo and not a character error.

3. When asking Tanner about the Protectorate, he replies: "I could tell you a lot, but the important thing for you to know is it's primarily a military organization run by general Melek." In this case you will want to capitalize general in General Melek's name since it's referring to a specific individual. That's why you see people as Mr. <name>, or Dr. <name>, or President Obama.

4. & 5. When asking Tanner about Omega station, he says "They were a neighboring station, but, unfortunately, some hotheads, primarily on their side, decided  that a coexistence wasn't possible." Once again there are a lot of commas but those can be overlooked since Tanner is pausing. However you'll want another em dash between primarily and side. Tanner is emphasizing in this case that it was Omega who provoked the conflict so you'd want an em dash. In this same speech, there's an extra space between "decided" and "that".

6. Sledgehammer tool-tip probably could use an "a" or "the" in its description.

7. When speaking with the Raider Leader at the GMS compound after passing the required Persuade or Intimidation to be brought to him, there's a line of dialogue that's just empty black space.

8. When speaking to Tanner about his policy of neutrality, he jumps between saying "Protectorate" and "the Protectorate". Given that dialogue quirks could be done intentionally, I'm not sure if he meant to say that or if that was just faulty parallelism on your part when writing the game's text. Lord knows I've done it plenty of times until someone proof-reading my writing points it out.

9. Tool-tip for the adrenal gland reads: "A skilled biologist could extract small amount of adrenaline from this gland." I am fairly certain that there should be "a" between "extract" and "small".

10. Retrieve Kohlmeier's knife quest. When asking about his past and how the knife factors in, he tells you it helped him through tough times. After that, the player replies: 1. "Look, can I help you out somehow? Do you need any foor or something?" I am pretty sure you meant to have us say "food" and not "foor".

11. If you gripe to Tanner about having work already, he replies: "but we need all hands on deck.First, you can have your weapon back." Notice there is no space between "deck." and "First,".

12. If you whine to Big Brett that the tests were hard and you could've used a day off, he'll reply" "Well, I recon they usually would." In this case, you meant to have Bret say "reckon" and not "recon".

13. When speaking to Harold about his battery quest, the player says "curcuit" instead of "circuit".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on July 26, 2016, 09:05:29 am
Just dropping by to say that we are actually fixing all these typos/errors. :) Thank you all for taking the time to post them. We don't mind if something has already been posted, so no need to apologize for anything; sometimes we miss a thing or two (it is a large thread after all, and the posts can sometimes get long too), so it's never bad to bring that to our attention. Again, thanks and keep it coming.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: 95Margo on September 01, 2016, 03:39:23 pm
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Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Phoenix7786 on October 01, 2016, 06:41:04 am
Another typo: When speaking to Wyatt during a certain quest acquire something Tanner asks you to bring back (want to avoid spoilers for those reading) towards the end of his story, Wyatt says "Behind the counter there were those energy cell that I acquired". Notice he says "cell" instead of "cells" since he acquired more than one.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on November 05, 2016, 01:51:30 pm
Inside bloody mobile computer there's
"Have Al Faber killed"
instead of
"Have Al Fabet killed"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on March 11, 2017, 04:23:58 pm
When you talk with West about Strange Device Faceless are looking for.

"I don't what it does"

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: TheAverageGortsby on June 05, 2017, 12:05:25 pm
Doctor's Pouch:  "You can continently" presumably should be "You can conveniently" and in the effects section, "consumation" should probably be "consumption"

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 02, 2017, 10:33:30 pm
Dialog with Mayor in Foundry.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 02, 2017, 11:08:36 pm
I previous line West told "less then five hundred", here he talk about 4 hundred.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 03, 2017, 12:44:49 am
Pic.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 03, 2017, 01:33:09 am
Space is lost, or lost in space, whatever.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 05, 2017, 12:26:22 pm
Question mark?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 05, 2017, 12:28:58 pm
Bur-but?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 05, 2017, 12:39:15 pm
"Need really need" - one of two is excessive, or something like the hyphen or the dash was lost.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 05, 2017, 12:44:44 pm
The point at the end of the sentence missing.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 05, 2017, 03:20:11 pm
Looks like there should be lowercase letter?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on September 27, 2017, 09:23:57 pm
"Once we find him".
Peasanut might be not a typo, it is a Norman-gentleman after all.  :D
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on September 27, 2017, 09:27:53 pm
First one might be my Engrussish or awkward construction, just in case.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crowley on October 13, 2017, 09:06:12 pm
The description for the AKX says it is "A reliable old world assault rifle with of modest appearance." I would suggest changing that to "...assault rifle of modest appearance". It would also be grammatically correct to say it is "with a modest appearance", but I personally prefer the former.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crowley on October 21, 2017, 09:51:50 pm
I think I noticed a spelling error at the Gauntlet in the loudspeaker message you get at the exit from the burrower level. I think it was something like "not to the next level" where it was probably meant to be "on to the next level". Sorry to be so vague. The message went away before I could make notes or take a screenshot, and I didn't think to reload the autosave. And I don't have the patience to go through the Gauntlet multiple times until the random number generator falls into my favour.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crowley on October 23, 2017, 02:04:21 am
When asking Eidein about Tchort after you have been invited into his office, he describes it as "a being worthy of fineste, beautiful, magnificent descriptions". I believe that should be "finest". "Finesse" wouldn't make sense in this context.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on October 23, 2017, 07:40:31 am
I think I noticed a spelling error at the Gauntlet in the loudspeaker message you get at the exit from the burrower level. I think it was something like "not to the next level" where it was probably meant to be "on to the next level". Sorry to be so vague. The message went away before I could make notes or take a screenshot, and I didn't think to reload the autosave. And I don't have the patience to go through the Gauntlet multiple times until the random number generator falls into my favour.

Found it. Fixed that and all other reported spelling/typos.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crowley on November 01, 2017, 08:42:43 pm
The description to the Mind Cracker sledgehammer says it is filled with "gloving liquid" when it should be "glowing".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Unmobable on November 08, 2017, 09:30:56 pm
Foundry, Ingram's wife quest. I don't know if it's intended because of some slang maybe but she uses the word 'bacause' instead of 'because'.

I started talking to her, refused to take a drink with her and came back later to do so. Meanwhile i went downstairs and activated the turrets and the energy floor to handle her when i was naked.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on December 12, 2017, 09:22:43 am
It's some hardcore English language construction I don't understand, or superfluous "next".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on December 12, 2017, 10:50:54 am
!
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on December 12, 2017, 12:37:06 pm
When the pointer is.

Also, in talk with Lenox at SGS, if you tell that it is Bisson, he answer "Why would SHE do something like that?"
I think Bisson is a man.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: destroyor on December 18, 2017, 12:12:45 am
https://i.imgur.com/jonyYNF.png

... but then your earn discerns several pairs of boots ...

I think it should be "ear"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Altos on December 18, 2017, 04:40:45 am
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1235240950

Pretty sure that is supposed to be Tanner talking.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on December 21, 2017, 07:58:48 pm
!
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on January 06, 2018, 07:13:49 pm
!
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tahoefox on January 07, 2018, 08:40:41 am
Missing a space when talking to Archibald Knight.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on January 13, 2018, 04:46:48 pm
Something clearly wrong here.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on January 14, 2018, 12:55:07 am
There is something wrong here too.

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tahoefox on January 14, 2018, 09:52:34 pm
Should be "you to" at the cursor.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tahoefox on January 17, 2018, 11:21:49 pm
Should be "for" not "from"

Also, shouldn't it be "the Tchortists" instead of just "Tchortists"?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: n21lv on January 22, 2018, 06:13:34 pm
Sprint description is a bit confusing. I would reword it.
Instead of "Only effective out of stealth" (which made me think it works only if you activate it while in Stealth and use for a quick ninja-style close'n'personal attack),
it should say "Only effective while not in stealth".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WakingComa on April 01, 2018, 02:37:47 am
See attachment

Ending conversation with Trenton after Free Drone quest line finished.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WakingComa on April 01, 2018, 02:38:25 am
see attachment

Conversation with Lt Stratford after passing Merc check for additional inventory.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tygrende on September 29, 2018, 09:37:44 pm
Missing comma after "You see".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Phyroks on November 06, 2018, 01:30:57 am
JKK Ola

This does not seem to be correct, not that im expert on the matter.  :-\

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 15, 2018, 06:42:09 am
(http://i68.tinypic.com/15s30w9.png)

Should be "anyone", I think.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: sthalik on December 29, 2018, 06:59:57 am
(http://underrail.com/forums/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=241.0;attach=2887;image)
Alas Sophie, we hardly knew ye.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 29, 2018, 09:53:05 am
(http://i65.tinypic.com/2co0cwg.png)

In the first one, I'd go with "I know how it may sound" or "I know what it sounds like".  Not a biggie.

In the second one, "their" should be "they".

In the third one, "though" should be "thought".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 31, 2018, 03:38:41 pm
(http://i68.tinypic.com/httcmh.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on January 21, 2019, 02:38:33 pm
(http://i68.tinypic.com/1zz243d.png)

in oculus; tried not to spoil
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 10, 2019, 05:34:32 pm
Juggernaut has two g's. 

(http://i66.tinypic.com/2821fyb.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 11, 2019, 05:38:16 pm
(http://i66.tinypic.com/2s8oks7.png)

"I wasn't aware of where"
"One single bit of information" or "One single fact"
"as can be possible"

I would actually break up that sentence with a few commas: 
"One single bit of information was necessary for me to realize that an object, that advanced, existing in Core City at the time of the Faceless invasion, was as far from a coincidence as can be possible."
I might even say "that technologically advanced" just for clarity.

2nd pic
"had been left largely intact"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 11, 2019, 05:44:31 pm
Jumping back to the mysterious lady five posts ago, I realize the 2nd paragraph could use some further correction.

"The only good thing is that everyone knows they dwell in the passages, which makes them a good hiding place from the protectorate."  Added a comma and changed "makes it a good" to "makes them a good".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 15, 2019, 10:35:35 pm
(http://i66.tinypic.com/2cf401t.png)

"gonna need someone"
"help us get" (I would assume; not exactly sure where that sentence was going)

(http://i65.tinypic.com/1118pr4.png)

"or are you"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 16, 2019, 01:27:21 am
(http://i63.tinypic.com/20afj89.png)

Should be "thread", I think.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 18, 2019, 07:06:54 pm
Threats?  Not sure it's wrong, but seems like an odd thing to say.  I would have thought "treads", like tank treads. 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 21, 2019, 01:14:40 am
If this is sarcasm, nevermind, but if it's not, it should be "You should definitely not".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tahoefox on June 21, 2019, 05:31:27 pm
Redundant "are" in difficulty descriptions. Both Hard and Dominating are worded this way.

Edit: Reading it again, I think it's supposed to say "Items that are sold by the player are valued at 50%."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on June 25, 2019, 09:41:41 pm
Redundant "are" in difficulty descriptions. Both Hard and Dominating are worded this way.

Edit: Reading it again, I think it's supposed to say "Items that are sold by the player are valued at 50%."
Fixed for the next update.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 27, 2019, 09:25:19 pm
organizationS
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 29, 2019, 07:41:16 pm
(http://i65.tinypic.com/2461jyd.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 29, 2019, 08:37:50 pm
(http://i65.tinypic.com/f2jv2b.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tygrende on June 29, 2019, 09:22:09 pm
incursions are as
is*, as it describes the singular "purpose". Also, missing comma after said "is".

We don't know what the purpose of these incursions is, as they are clearly not trying to flood their troops into the city.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 30, 2019, 09:07:32 pm
(http://i66.tinypic.com/35lrtvp.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 30, 2019, 10:30:41 pm
(http://i68.tinypic.com/20k1uur.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tygrende on June 30, 2019, 11:24:44 pm
I think anytime someone says "Institute of Tchort" they should be saying "The Institute of Tchort".
Not necessarily, both forms can be correct as long as they are being used consistently. There are many exceptions where you do not need to use "the", an obvious example being countries (and even then there's expections to the exceptions, like the US). The are many actual real life institutes and universities whose names are not preceded by "the". Articles are a big can of worms. 

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on June 30, 2019, 11:53:48 pm
I think anytime someone says "Institute of Tchort" they should be saying "The Institute of Tchort".
Not necessarily, both forms can be correct as long as they are being used consistently. There are many exceptions where you do not need to use "the", an obvious example being countries (and even then there's expections to the exceptions, like the US). The are many actual real life institutes and universities whose names are not preceded by "the". Articles are a big can of worms.

I figured it might be a different countries kind of thing, but I wasn't sure.  Nobody says it that way where I live. 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 01, 2019, 05:01:31 am
(http://i67.tinypic.com/29x7vye.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 05, 2019, 07:15:57 pm
(http://i63.tinypic.com/6pylua.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 06, 2019, 10:39:53 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/MEAwWVj.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 07, 2019, 09:11:51 am
During the Kill the Beast victory speech, I saw a few from the mayor and chief banner but couldn't get screenshots.

"one big applause" should be "one big round of applause"
"stared at the eyes" should be "stared in the eyes"
and "assisting the foundry guard slay" may be grammatically correct, I'm not sure, but it sounds wrong; I'd go with "helping the foundry guard slay"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 09, 2019, 04:06:59 am
(https://i.imgur.com/VwYWQ3Q.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 09, 2019, 05:46:27 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/DyAUHT0.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 09, 2019, 05:56:17 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/OcQJ8zS.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 13, 2019, 09:47:45 am
(http://i64.tinypic.com/2hx8ylf.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on July 16, 2019, 08:05:45 pm
Guzomir.

Also, exposition in green text happens as many times as you speak with him.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on July 19, 2019, 12:03:24 pm
Alright, guys, I think I fixed all of them.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on July 19, 2019, 01:29:30 pm
Talk with Quinton about eeeh... those little bladling's larvae.
Shouldn't it be "creature", "not creatures"?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tygrende on July 21, 2019, 09:37:01 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/r72aisQ.png)
I think "That was enough to kill him" would be better. He is already dead after all.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: epeli on July 23, 2019, 07:59:12 pm
The trading category for bullets and shells is still called "bullets".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Styg on July 24, 2019, 07:32:11 am
The trading category for bullets and shells is still called "bullets".
Fixed for the next update.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 24, 2019, 05:10:23 pm
(http://i68.tinypic.com/259ixoo.png)
"nonfunctional"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 26, 2019, 01:19:50 am
When doc savage is suffering withdrawal from the cigar you gave him, he says something like "it was pure bliss the first time I draw smoke from it" or something; it should be "drew"

This is right after you say "Looks like you need another cigar"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 26, 2019, 01:25:59 am
(http://i66.tinypic.com/1j7t6t.png)

"id" should be "ID"; I never see it uncapitalized
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 27, 2019, 01:22:05 am
(http://i66.tinypic.com/11aid5s.png)
"four"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 27, 2019, 01:47:00 am
When you have seeger tell you about the virtual reality stuff, at one point he says you "step into at" instead of "step into it"; I don't have a save to go back for it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 27, 2019, 04:19:39 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/RgmIAZn.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: taviow on July 31, 2019, 01:51:29 am
GMS Compound - Gorsky:

(https://i.imgur.com/uS57Iuv.png)

"I have no interest in..."

SGS - Ethan:

(https://i.imgur.com/mmF8vOc.png)

It will cost you one hundred...

SGS - Console outside of morgue:

(https://i.imgur.com/D50RkXH.png)

Quinton retrieved a large dose...
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 02, 2019, 06:01:39 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/WYWYpNY.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Shredded Cheddar on August 03, 2019, 03:17:03 pm
 Mislead is actually the correct spelling Harperfan7
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tygrende on August 04, 2019, 08:31:21 pm
Mislead is actually the correct spelling Harperfan7
It is not, as the past participle (which should have been used in that context) of "mislead" is "misled".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Tygrende on August 04, 2019, 08:31:57 pm
It is rumored*

(https://i.imgur.com/vCE6ngW.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 09, 2019, 09:33:44 pm
Garry says master exploder wears a fire-resistant suit, which, while technically still true, is kind of misleading since he wears an explosive-proof suit now.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 12, 2019, 01:13:52 am
(https://i.imgur.com/tmALrHm.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 13, 2019, 05:13:13 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/W2fMIk4.png)

should just be "weapon humanity"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 23, 2019, 12:31:29 am
(https://i.imgur.com/RkbImw8.png)
"the knife"

(https://i.imgur.com/g3EjshS.png)
"needles"
when touching a certain black object
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 25, 2019, 06:16:24 am
(https://i.imgur.com/bvsIycL.png)
"explain to him"

(https://i.imgur.com/nklohQR.png)
"somewhere in the"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 29, 2019, 04:06:34 am
(https://i.imgur.com/RY4UYmm.png)



Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 13, 2019, 02:03:47 am
talking to six in DC about the torch, he repeats himself at one point "...purpose of this particular of this particular instrument..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 14, 2019, 04:27:12 am
Faceless commander says the tchortist base is to the east; its west. 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on September 16, 2019, 11:04:36 am
Fixed 'em all. ;)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: lod on September 18, 2019, 05:34:33 am
In the item description for Sniper Rifle Frame:Harbinger, it says "used to create a Harbringer". There seems to be an extra r in there.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: LordRetBrick on September 22, 2019, 09:51:29 am
When you get to the military base with Dude you get the option of saying "The things i hear from you have stopped sounding strange a long ago" instead of like a long time ago or long ago.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: destroyor on September 22, 2019, 02:26:12 pm
Minor mistake for Vlatko's dialogue in his minor in Core City:

I... I raised those kids. I still see them as that - kids. Now, they don't need me, me and my wife, as much anymore. Expect when they need money. ::He laughs.:: Although, Maxim earns his own money, but since he works for me, so, again, I'm the one giving him the coin.

should be "except" when they need money
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 23, 2019, 03:37:18 am
(https://i.imgur.com/1mKP4cN.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: destroyor on October 13, 2019, 08:30:07 pm
*Her
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on November 16, 2019, 04:32:22 am
When you join the pirates, if you ask Grim where to start on the ruins, he says the mutie refuge and that it's "east" of the expedition camp; it's west. 

If you talk to Donnie about port crag, at one point he says "Anyways, we use Port Ceto as an extension of Port Ceto". 

Katya, if you ask her about the monolith, starts talking about will.  She says "Only with it will can you..."

Razor, if you ask him who is better with blades between him and D'flinga, at one point he says "Ain' on one slicker than me"

Edgar in camp hathor, if you ask how he became leader, says Gideon the previous leader died while "hunting Crawler." 

Rathound king, if you try to intimidate him when you first talk to him, your line ends with "you got another think coming."

(https://i.imgur.com/HVIinDT.png)
"a truce", or "made peace"

Tanner, after returning from the rail crossing quests, when you tell him you helped rail crossing, he asks why the faceless attacked, the first response option has you telling him what buzzer said about the object the acid hunters have "device currently in hands of"; should be "in the hands of".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on November 30, 2019, 04:26:45 am
Azif, when you first enter oculus
"This is Oculus, the eye of underrail, yes.  All important information find their way here sooner or later."
should be "information finds it's way"

Abrams
"Free drones movement has been around for a long up north"
a long time up north

Abrams, about the faceless
"...perpetuate tell tales"
should be "tall tales" I think

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 05, 2019, 08:06:27 am
Captain Grimm when you ask him about his creepy statue: "I find that it when I am in certain moods", unnecessary "it"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 08, 2019, 06:31:01 am
Razor, when he finally tells you what happened to his eye, in the paragraph that starts with "It was immediately obvious that the cap'n was a jettin' swordsman", at some point says "legitimatelly" which should be "legitimately"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: destroyor on December 15, 2019, 06:48:43 pm
Iris' dialogue should probably be reword to something like:

You thought it (the famine) was due to bad management from the apex technocrats, as well as to other recent environmental and geopolitical changes. Your predictions for the future of Biocorp and Underrail were negative in general, this only further attributing to it.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 18, 2019, 05:16:32 pm
Pirates questline, when you bring Grim the acorn and go see the professor, not long into the conversation Grimm says:
"I admit, I was surprised, if a bit disappointed by it after you've told me."
should be "after all you've" I think

Also, shortly after this he tells D'flinga to leave, and he does in the dialogue, but he's still there on the screen during the conversation.

Later on, he says:
"As my...armies grew, so could I was given a chance to employ the other skills I was taught."
I'm not sure what he's trying to say there, but something is wrong. 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on December 23, 2019, 01:19:21 am
(https://i.imgur.com/2ODYyHa.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on January 12, 2020, 01:15:06 am
(https://i.imgur.com/sakgwju.png)
rendezvous
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on January 17, 2020, 09:27:57 am
Fixed everything. Keep 'em coming.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: darkelf on February 10, 2020, 04:51:21 am
(https://i.imgur.com/sakgwju.png)

Also in this post - nowhere to be seen
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: boi on March 10, 2020, 01:35:19 am
In the early quest with the mystery body in the medical ward the body was a man's, but one of the doctor's lines of dialogue referred to it as "her".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on March 25, 2020, 07:27:29 am
Jetski turbo; the description states "Instantly consume 50 vehicle eneregy"

"energy"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on April 19, 2020, 08:02:26 pm
Talking to the rathound king, the intimidate check at the beginning still says "you have another think coming".  Unless it's a joke I don't get, it should be "thing"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on April 27, 2020, 09:27:19 pm
If you talk to Leonie at Foundry and ask her what she sells, at the end of the paragraph she says "the selection is large, so take your pick.  Take, not break.  Local lingo."

Is she supposed to say "..., so break your pick.  Take, not break." ?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on April 29, 2020, 02:27:12 am
Jack Quicksilver, in core city, if you say you want to know more about his organization, will say "Tough.  Abram or I would have told you by now more if we though you should know at this point in time."  "though" should be "thought" 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 02, 2020, 04:46:47 pm
Ola, if you ask him about JKK, will talk about how he likes the work, "Expect for when I'm sent to..." should be "Except"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 03, 2020, 06:36:33 pm
Whelp, I forgot to post it and now I can't go back, but Vivian says "you" twice in a sentence when she should only say it once.  I *think* this was in the abandoned biocorp place right before you leave; it was during or right before that quest anyway.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 15, 2020, 12:03:17 am
When you go to negotiate with grimm for aegis, when the majority of the dialogue options open up, if you have 7 or 8 int, there's one at the top.  Following that one, at one point grimm says "Go on." and you can say "Which could also to apply to all...", the first "to" is an error
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 22, 2020, 05:19:19 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/jXBgSQI.png)

"matters"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 24, 2020, 04:27:50 am
The "Old Diploma" oddity:

"Though now faded and thorn, it probably once hanged in..."

"thorn" should be "torn" and "hanged" should be "hung"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 24, 2020, 05:31:15 am
At Talos outpost, when you tell Lora Baker that you killed the Acid Hunters, in the green text of her reaction, the word "smugde" should be "smudge"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: nosaM on May 24, 2020, 10:53:14 pm
When buying Limited Temporal Increment from Ethan he will say. "Whichever you have.Or you could use that freebie." There is no space between the sentences.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 25, 2020, 03:34:11 am
(https://i.imgur.com/epL9hgl.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: nosaM on June 07, 2020, 02:44:49 pm
Should be His instead of Her.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crows on June 12, 2020, 03:28:34 pm
When you talk to the Ferryman about the natives, your dialogue option is "About the Sourmerbaren..." - shouldn't be a U there.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on June 22, 2020, 11:43:39 pm
There is an ":" in the beggining of the two intruduction dialog boxes for Heidi
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on June 22, 2020, 11:46:13 pm
Vivian's last words.  :-[

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Bruno on June 23, 2020, 07:57:04 pm
When inspecting the dead body of the scavenger in SGS mortuary, at least one of the info texts refer to the deceased as a "he", even if the scavenger is a woman.

Also related, you can talk to the SGS guard at the entrance to mushroom cove about the dead scavenger, but ONLY if you select the dialogue option first. If you start by asking about Newton/mushroom cove in general, then the option to ask about the dead scavenger is lost.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on June 27, 2020, 01:50:40 am
"Everything but the.... "
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on June 28, 2020, 09:37:19 pm
Pictures highlight and show corrections.

1/5 (due to 192 KB restriction)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on June 28, 2020, 09:38:27 pm
2/5
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on June 28, 2020, 09:39:49 pm
3/5
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on June 28, 2020, 09:41:03 pm
4/5

This one may be intentional
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on June 28, 2020, 09:42:38 pm
5/5

This is just one huge run-on sentence. Needs to be cleaned up and refined.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on June 29, 2020, 02:12:21 pm
Trinket, not trinker.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on July 04, 2020, 03:38:40 pm
Queue should be instead of stare?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Shardnax on July 08, 2020, 01:54:41 am
The description for the old diploma says "faded and thorn", I presume it's meant to say torn.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Elite on July 08, 2020, 01:07:21 pm
Didnt snag a screenshot, but for the "dead mushroom cove scavenger" quest if the scavenger is female, Pascal will correctly refer to her as "her". If you then go and inspect the body, the text descriptions refer to her as him.

There was also one on an Ending slide, I'll have to get a screenshot of it later.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on July 20, 2020, 02:16:00 am
On Luka's dialog about Dreadnoughts
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 21, 2020, 05:56:24 pm
Psycho-neural reconstructive agent

"that helps should help with"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on July 21, 2020, 07:24:16 pm
Dialogue with Preatorian soldier on Matriuss's boat:
"could be reached by hand" - dot missing
"root of it's problems" - 'its'
"it's display starts" - 'its'
"required for it's mass production" - 'its'
"Sure, it that would help" - 'if'
"by it's own mechanism" - 'its'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 22, 2020, 09:38:38 pm
I don't know where in the game it is, but the "crubled rocks" should be "crumbled"

edit:  depot A west
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 24, 2020, 08:45:41 pm
Talking to the foundry sheriff after killing evelyn in the bunker "I had to kill her in self defence!" should be "defense"

also, the cactus plant in her bunker overlaps the player; figured that wasn't worth a thread to report
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Pruvan on July 28, 2020, 10:09:08 am
Quote
Furthermore, Roche points out that the structures of the brain in which innervation that allows psionic activity takes place were never studied in such depth.

Should be to take place.

Quote
Even though we know plenty about how brain as a whole works, ...

Should be how the brain.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Pruvan on July 28, 2020, 10:12:01 am
Quote
We assume it was designed to prevent the infants from unwittingly harming themselves or those around them.

Should be just infants. Saying "the infants" makes it sound like we're talking about something that isn't human.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Pruvan on July 28, 2020, 10:18:04 am
A lot of the dialogue involving the multiple variations of the mushroom scavenger questline has both double spaces and lack of spaces in a lot of lines. As well as some gender confusion with the victim being referred to as both he and she on some occasions, if I recall correctly. I think doing a once-over might be in order for all lines used in this quest.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 30, 2020, 10:40:17 pm
BArm nexus 1700 engine

"difficuly" of installation
missing the "t"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 31, 2020, 01:35:22 am
When talking to archibald knight about the acid hunters, before you hunt them down, the paragraph that starts with "He sighs." says this around the middle of the paragraph "I want find out what in bloody hell...", it should be "I want to find out what in the bloody hell"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Lestat on July 31, 2020, 05:34:01 am
Can't tell if this one is a mistake. His dudes don't seem to be religious so this "faith" was possibly meant to be "fate".

From the new waterways quest completed journal text:
(https://i.imgur.com/8NkbIyg.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Lestat on July 31, 2020, 09:20:10 am
Pretty sure this is a new waterway event. Near Core City. u instead of you.

(https://i.imgur.com/hjXHMdE.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 01, 2020, 04:36:43 pm
When greeting Matriuss, one of the options is "My pleasure aswel, sir."  Unless that's an advatongue joke, it should be "as well"

Next paragraph, he says "Be as it may", should be "Be that as it may"

Next paragraph, "The device you hold a custom...", forgot the "is"
also, he says "custom mode digital tracker", should that be "custom made"?

later, "Indeed you have proven capable of  repairing sofisticated devices", there is an extra space between "of" and "repairing", and "sofisticated" should be "sophisticated"
"If you deliever, I will reward you handsomely", should be "deliver"

In the last paragraph, he says "bind my time", should be "bide my time", I think.

If you ask him about himself, "My hunders of cases", should be "hundreds"
two paragraphs later, "But my prevoious experiences", should be "previous"

Asking about the task:
"I want you to go to my office building on the nothen side of the residential area", should be "northern"

When you return, your third dialogue option is "Hmm, Iet me check", should be 'let"

The next paragraph "has the access to that place" could just be "has access to that place",
and the next line "In addition, I'll give you few special items", should be "you a few"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 01, 2020, 08:50:51 pm
The ruined jetski next to the jump in the sharp rocks says "...suffered a cruel faith for sure", should be "fate" I think

in the next area, after the jump, in the NW corner there is a shack with a toilet with flavor text about how the smell is unbearable, says "mushroom sallad", should be 'salad".

same area, using an advanced electric repair kit on the crane, the green text says "toolking" instead of "toolkit"
Title: Foundry, talking to Dan
Post by: Kyle McTexas on August 02, 2020, 12:35:01 am
(https://i.ibb.co/2sKB9VS/Spelling-Error.png) (https://ibb.co/jW4FN0z)

"--my pals and me would take take on anything!" is the double 'take' intentional?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 02, 2020, 02:25:34 am
(https://i.imgur.com/kyJALvG.png)

operation shouldn't have a g at the end
occurred should have two r's
"a specific code" or "specific codes"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Kyle McTexas on August 02, 2020, 08:10:14 am
(https://i.ibb.co/tspq3z4/spellingerror2.png) (https://ibb.co/Wyvks06)

I am asking to join the gauntlet for the first time in Core City Arena. Should be "then".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 02, 2020, 02:28:46 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/hKrZZXM.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 02, 2020, 04:27:07 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/Y18RZE6.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 02, 2020, 10:53:42 pm
The map in the 2nd area of the waterway facility:

"Fainted out headline" should be "Faded" I think

"Different marker colors and handwritings were emplyed" should be "employed"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Kyle McTexas on August 03, 2020, 06:03:13 am
(https://i.ibb.co/VLQmcgg/error.png) (https://ibb.co/cyCLS66)

Spacing and 'place' should be 'places' :^)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Kyle McTexas on August 03, 2020, 06:29:34 am
(https://i.ibb.co/829VF28/error.png) (https://ibb.co/Mp7LqpN)

That is grammatically wrong. I get what he's trying to say, but it doesn't make sense grammatically wise with the rest of the sentence.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Kyle McTexas on August 03, 2020, 06:33:24 am
(https://i.ibb.co/n8XVYkc/error.png) (https://ibb.co/G3Z18P2)

Misspelling.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 03, 2020, 11:10:58 pm
When Dude asked you rethorical question about best bar in Underrail.
Spase was lost.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 04, 2020, 02:47:49 am
(https://i.imgur.com/wNgq09q.png)
*looters
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on August 04, 2020, 09:28:46 pm
i think there is a "the" missing at for cold-blooded
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on August 04, 2020, 09:29:58 pm
but reduces "reslove"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 08, 2020, 09:42:34 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/3NyxluJ.png)
"you..." should be "your..." I think
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 08, 2020, 09:50:23 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/6m2rBS2.png)

"your"
"tinkering with the device"
"around with the"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 08, 2020, 09:55:15 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/JlYeMKP.png)

"with an intimidating"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 10, 2020, 01:21:46 am
(https://i.imgur.com/M22ksqw.png)

"Things have been rough"

"Tunnelers"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on August 11, 2020, 07:07:26 pm
"Pickpoocketing"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 14, 2020, 10:40:55 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/tZ74RZe.png)

"desire to use"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 14, 2020, 10:41:53 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/RJXpKKT.png)

"thrown me out will."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 14, 2020, 10:42:28 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/tmI78pl.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 14, 2020, 10:43:28 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/jowYyTE.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Fenix on August 14, 2020, 11:49:03 pm
Dot is missing, in talk with Edgar about Rathound King.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 15, 2020, 01:41:25 am
When talking to katya, you can ask if she ever felt anything coming from the health center.  You say it's to the west, but it's east from port ceto. 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 15, 2020, 02:20:22 am
When you bring Todd to Grimm, at one point Grimm tells you to "go far a walk", should be "for"

(https://i.imgur.com/C45SgPc.png)

Grimm repeats himself there, and then "him.Give" should have a space
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 15, 2020, 02:52:00 am
In the ceto logs, when the navy is inspecting the collapsed entrance to the black sea, they talk about using drones to scout past the collapse, and mention "areal" vehicles which I assume is supposed to be "aerial"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 15, 2020, 08:24:35 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/4h3LYIl.png)

Seems like it should be Cruzer saying this.

(https://i.imgur.com/NfKMwBH.png)

Right after returning to grim after the second raid.

(https://i.imgur.com/tD0C5hm.png)

Should be "jetters" I think, unless its just how he talks
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 15, 2020, 09:23:30 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/tVpMy77.png)

Says this when you mention you did work for the eels, even if you never talked to anybody from aegis. 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 16, 2020, 12:48:35 am
(https://i.imgur.com/D1aLWlN.png)

Should be "gravelly" I think
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: boi on August 21, 2020, 09:54:15 am
When speaking to Doctor Stevenson in the Foundry the green text reads:

"It is as if the coat reflects its owner, for he too invokes a clear image of someone who used to be young and full of spirit but has now shriveling up as the hardships of life..."

Should probably be "is" or "has shrivelled".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: boi on August 21, 2020, 10:38:13 am
When speaking to Dan in the Foundry the green text reads:

"...picks up his rifle which was also placed against the fance and offers..."

Should probably be "fence".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 01, 2020, 01:46:34 am
(https://i.imgur.com/LdLZ3JF.jpg)

"thatF"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on September 03, 2020, 04:05:57 am
(https://imgur.com/a/Xfu2GbE)


determining "he"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on September 05, 2020, 05:18:04 pm
"incapacitates"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 06, 2020, 10:25:27 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/3mpK7by.jpg)
"expect" should be "except"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 07, 2020, 08:05:38 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/jAaFc7X.png)

breath

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on September 08, 2020, 04:08:46 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/gRS6yAd.png)

"payng"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on September 09, 2020, 04:16:32 am
(https://i.imgur.com/PB5P3wO.png)

"dare"

and "my" x5, though that's probably intentional
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Leilu on September 11, 2020, 05:52:01 pm
Where the cursor is. ;)
(https://i.imgur.com/t1t8xlx.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Anka on September 12, 2020, 12:23:36 am
"luck and."

When showing the fixed Rust Maxer to Otto but deciding not to give it back.


(https://i.imgur.com/IQxQ3Hd.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: bushwhacker2k on January 04, 2021, 08:14:41 am
After handling the Beast, Olivia in the Foundry mine says "helped helped", she should only be saying it once.

(https://i.imgur.com/b1wXe3h.png)

When speaking to some Faceless not far West of Foundry, one sentence doesn't have a space after it. My cursor is pointing at the spot (copying Leilu's style here, lol).

(https://i.imgur.com/9FThujO.png)

Another space missing after a sentence. This one happens quite early in the game, when speaking to Lucas about Harland.

(https://i.imgur.com/LQLm8tJ.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on March 03, 2021, 10:46:21 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/OipH4PV.png)

"and"

and then she has that blank dialogue at the end
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: boi on March 12, 2021, 10:34:54 pm
When speaking to Olivia at the Foundry mines after killing the Beast her response to "How do you feel now that the mine has reopened?" reads:

"[...]I heard you helped helped in some way[...]"



Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on March 13, 2021, 05:01:45 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/vA9WzJz.png)
"are finished"
"is holding"
"my ass off with"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on March 14, 2021, 09:41:41 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/F7kdhGc.png)
"This is widely"
"lubricants and will"
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Post by: Execlectic on March 15, 2021, 11:14:52 am
In the council meeting for determining whether to help (I chose Black Eels, not sure if Scrapper has the same issue) the gang at Junkyard, Gorsky says in reply to Vera "Then there isn't any gangs between us and them" or something to that effect. Should be "aren't".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Sharpypens on March 21, 2021, 05:38:55 pm
(https://puu.sh/HracB/bf45fc868d.png)

Likely should be "that pathetic rotten brain of yours

(https://puu.sh/HqYtn/00e669f909.png)

Dogs don't have pawns usually, should be a "paw".
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Post by: Hammer on March 22, 2021, 02:16:34 am
(https://i.imgur.com/cG0PMgo.png)

Should be "decide" and "less-civilized", since that's a compound adjective before the described noun.

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Hammer on March 22, 2021, 12:27:31 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/DbAJpSU.png)

"has a hard, rigid surface"

Article "A".
Comma for coordinate adjectives.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Hammer on March 24, 2021, 02:54:50 am
(https://i.imgur.com/HvpF36h.png)

"turn away"
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Post by: Hammer on March 24, 2021, 10:32:19 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/6dK8nRM.png)

"had seen the whole thing happen."
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Post by: Hammer on March 24, 2021, 10:34:32 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/aEEUlmA.png)

"I want to find out"
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Post by: Hammer on March 24, 2021, 10:37:05 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/oecMexu.png)

"the informant's mouth"
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Post by: Hammer on March 25, 2021, 11:09:02 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/M8wX4f3.png)

"for your actions."
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Post by: Hammer on March 25, 2021, 11:10:04 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/V1eLPid.png)

"closely related"
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Post by: Hammer on March 25, 2021, 11:12:22 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/kM1AELu.png)

"the Core HQ"

"HQ" is a generally accepted capitalization of headquarters, despite not technically being an acronym. Its use or non-use is not exactly a mistake per se and will be up to the author.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Hammer on March 25, 2021, 11:13:07 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/YbKHRqc.png)

"in the most violent ways possible,"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Hammer on March 25, 2021, 11:13:55 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/rpsEJNq.png)

"I want to know as much as possible"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 26, 2021, 07:35:31 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/g92fGNQ/Untitled.png) (https://imgbb.com/)
advanced*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 27, 2021, 07:07:30 am
(https://i.ibb.co/jvb0z98/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/hRLQcxg)
No, it doesn't* (response to option 2 failure)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 27, 2021, 07:25:09 am
(https://i.ibb.co/LhKvq7W/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/Z19NwDP)
Referred to as "The Ark" everywhere else.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 27, 2021, 05:57:32 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/0jGkBvT/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/wNzTJjV)
Extraneous 'and' should be removed
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 27, 2021, 06:18:33 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/CKTDc2Y/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/d4zxTgV)
breach*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 28, 2021, 03:09:06 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/cXwHL78/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/0VKStd9)
threaten*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 28, 2021, 03:54:47 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/wNsKt7s/Untitled.png) (https://imgbb.com/)
rotted*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 28, 2021, 04:21:48 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/5L20d36/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/M79vbHs)
"Why didn't anyone go there?"

Not sure if this is supposed to be stylistically broken English for some reason.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Hammer Wizard on March 29, 2021, 01:18:45 am
Unlucky*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on March 29, 2021, 04:17:30 am
(https://i.ibb.co/k2q0GCS/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/8gP2mZ7)
Remove redundant 'all'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on April 04, 2021, 11:40:04 pm
Shock Shurikens say "micro electroshock discharges", should be "dischargers"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: TheSidewalkSLAM on April 07, 2021, 06:48:40 pm
For Six: "There is on other option" should be 'no'
For Seeger: missing space between period following "it" and "Part"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on April 08, 2021, 05:42:44 pm
(https://i.ibb.co/L0fb7Zj/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/tH5krJj)
incense*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on April 09, 2021, 12:11:10 am
(https://i.ibb.co/vXH9zCB/Untitled.png) (https://ibb.co/y4X2smR)
stomachs* (no apostrophe)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on April 10, 2021, 06:00:16 am
it's east of port ceto
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Post by: Fenix on April 10, 2021, 11:53:21 am
If you pick this line, this nPC next dialogue line does not shown.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on April 14, 2021, 10:36:45 pm
I guess I will
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: sheepherder on May 11, 2021, 05:08:15 pm
Hopperdome, empty text box.
(https://i.imgur.com/UUQN4YJ.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: sheepherder on May 11, 2021, 05:09:41 pm
The Rig, missing a space between "Of course!" and "Meanwhile..."

(https://i.imgur.com/47fKXiB.jpg)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on May 13, 2021, 12:04:41 am
"intended" and "ground"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Richter on June 05, 2021, 07:28:54 am
In Olivia's dialogue at Foundry after getting a contract on her head, you can talk to her. There is an error here in the PC option. Currently it displays "I'm here kill you" rather than "I'm here TO kill you".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: johndxd on June 09, 2021, 08:45:28 pm
archibald knight after asking about cornell
should say I want "to" find out
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PanPannik on June 18, 2021, 07:52:36 pm
At the Jacob variation of the Harland missing camera quest in SGS.

"This place is finnaly in order" instead of "finally".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Cmdr. DuctTape on June 23, 2021, 09:15:53 pm
There's a double "and" during the conversation with Lt. Stratford, during the briefing for our second assignment. Picture attached.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: johndxd on July 10, 2021, 02:38:40 pm
there should be a "?" at the end here instead of a "."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: johndxd on July 13, 2021, 05:19:39 pm
foremedicator has a typo in "barter"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 18, 2021, 09:03:23 pm
Doctor Savage, when you give him a cigar and he's offering your choice of medicines, refers to hypercerebrix pills as "hypercerebrix shots". 
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on July 20, 2021, 07:22:31 pm
I think this is supposed to be "sides"
(https://i.imgur.com/964NuYZ.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on July 22, 2021, 04:08:22 pm
PI Schteff dialogue
(https://i.imgur.com/5SN9jE6.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on July 24, 2021, 05:11:55 pm
Not a spelling/grammar error, but not worth a thread of its own:  protectorate soldiers at junkyard docks say "Do not loiter at the gate, citizen." if you click on them, like the guards outside the embassy.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Raptor Moses on July 25, 2021, 09:55:41 am
Plasma Beam mentor description says: "This device can be used to automatically teach yourself Plasma Beam Aura psi ability through cerebral imprinting.".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: haze1103 on July 26, 2021, 01:38:53 am
When asking Eidein about his ability to communicate with Tchort, in his office:

"we are able to communicate on a very basic level through a... let's call it a telepathic link, but its far from such; it is difficult to describe to someone who has never experienced it."

Should be "it's" or "it is"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: RailKhan on July 27, 2021, 08:02:20 pm
"Kerry"
Oculus Database
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Auriga on July 27, 2021, 09:36:16 pm
I'm not done with my first playthrough, so there might be more stuff, but here's the first batch.

1. The Lennox Pierce quest: once the laptop is accessed, it says "Please select one of the followring options". It should of course be "following".
2. The Arena match with bugs. Quote: "(...)obliterated fourty bugs with his arm flames". Should be "forty".
3. Jyles dialogue line once the player asks to set up an electronic and mechanical workshop seems to have an error. "(...)either an electronic and mechanical bench." should have "or" instead of "and".
4. Grey Armor Spec Ops Helmet would most probably have to be renamed to Gray.
5. The building located to the right of player's house entrance, the one behind a tough hackable lock: one dialogue option in the console has "missmatched". Should be "mismatched".
6. The White Leporous Tongue Oddity. Shouldn't it be "Leprous"?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on July 29, 2021, 08:56:49 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/rV86o1z.png)
Vencel dialogue, cocktails not coctails
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Post by: harperfan7 on July 31, 2021, 12:29:48 am
Ion (at the rig) has floating text dialogue that says "My shift start soon."  Should be "starts".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on August 01, 2021, 06:10:41 am
The merc check;  "are can be"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 03, 2021, 12:43:42 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/7uf5fFP.png)
Quite, not qutie
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 05, 2021, 02:06:41 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/WMZpDfn.png)
I think it's supposed to be "led", not "lead"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 06, 2021, 01:33:06 pm
When entering dialogue for the first time with Kokoschka after taking off a Gray Army suit his dialogue has "very thank you.Nice to meet you"
Kokoschka says "Camp Hathator" instead of "Camp Hathor". Intentional?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 06, 2021, 01:52:38 pm
Dialogue with Edgar from Camp Hathor has an extra space before a comma "...and if you say this isn't a trick , then I suppose..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PhrygianDominant on August 09, 2021, 10:40:33 am
Kokoschka says "Camp Hathator" instead of "Camp Hathor". Intentional?

Oh, yes! :D
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 09, 2021, 05:01:02 pm
Kokoschka says "Camp Hathator" instead of "Camp Hathor". Intentional?

Oh, yes! :D
Huh, that's good to know!
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 09, 2021, 05:01:31 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/zpfUko6.png)
Several instead of severeal
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 09, 2021, 07:38:21 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/9k4pCQe.png)
Double space between "are" and "as"
"Intensely focused on" sounds a bit weird, I think it should be "intensely focused on you"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 12:47:58 pm
I think this should be a single message
(https://i.imgur.com/08WS5ja.png)
(https://i.imgur.com/iG5QwvT.png)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 04:38:51 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/d8jhe09.png)
Get rid of the "gets" in "gets fades"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 06:16:49 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/SFGUxqA.png)
Moment, not momnet
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 06:34:35 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/EwVDf0i.png)
Ladelman dialogue, needs space between "Invictus," and "you"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 06:36:53 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/QRdv7Wk.png)
Ladelman dialogue, needs space between "!" and "Tony"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 07:46:37 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/VidfngX.png)
Dialogue while trying to repair the Naga Protector, noticeable not noticable, "plasma core quality" should be reformatted to "the plasma core's quality"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 07:47:53 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/NNO6I8D.png)
Same Naga Protector dialogue, noticeable not noticable
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 12, 2021, 08:48:45 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/2vigkDj.png)
Ferryman dialogue, possess not possesse
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Post by: Barry on August 13, 2021, 04:10:28 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/cTSMnla.png)
Dialogue with Andrea from the Gauntlet, noticeable not noticable. At this point I recommend searching for every instance of "noticable" in the code
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 13, 2021, 04:12:29 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/BufUrMO.png)
Dialogue with Andrea from the Gauntlet, your status as the Invictus never goes away so it should be "who you actually are"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on August 19, 2021, 01:57:01 am
Ethan calls Cryokinetic Orb "Cryogenic Orb"
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Post by: Anka on September 06, 2021, 01:56:57 am
Should be Fate
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Post by: Merfix on October 12, 2021, 06:47:12 pm
it says machine in biby instead of body
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Nawj on October 26, 2021, 11:16:39 pm
(https://files.catbox.moe/fck7fk.png)
'thank' should be 'thanks' in this situation.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on October 28, 2021, 01:55:28 pm
"refuge"
either "become suspicious of" or "begin questioning"
"manner"
unless Kharon is a title, it should be "at Kharon's"
"losses"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 10, 2021, 02:29:13 pm
Oskar, when asked about JKK:

If it wasn't for them, people all over the Underrail wouldn't be able to watch the Arena broadcasts, which would be retarded, let's face it. ArenaNow brings Arena to the people unfortunate enough to not being able to watch it live.

ArenaNow brings Arena to the people unfortunate enough to not being able to watch it live.
should be
ArenaNow brings Arena to the people unfortunate enough to be unable to watch it live.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 10, 2021, 09:45:46 pm
Daniel Arda, when you ask how he lost his eye
"I was stupid, to be honest: I knew what was it like there,"

better wording: "I knew what it was like there,"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 12, 2021, 03:54:39 am
Camp Hathor guards

there's one too many t's in pity
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 13, 2021, 04:31:57 am
asking Jon the Beautiful about Wit Nosek/Thallo:

"Thallo, Thallo... That sound kinda like,"

sound is just missing an s at the end
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 13, 2021, 04:34:32 am
Sophie Talloski also introduces herself as Sophia when you ask where she lives:

"The Talloski Manor. ::She laughs.:: In case you didn't figure it out by now, I'm Sophia Talloski, daughter of Vlatko Talloski. I'm sure you've heard of us, unless you're a *real* zoner. ::She laughs.::"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 13, 2021, 08:11:27 pm
Jon the Beautiful, when telling you about Joe Pacino

"Anyway, about Joe: Just head north of here and you'll should see a guard to the right, on a platform."

"you'll" used where "you" should be, or "should" can just be removed instead
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 16, 2021, 02:17:52 am
The psionic mentor for motor cognitive transference is missing a space in its name
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 16, 2021, 06:24:02 am
Vlatko when you tell him the borer was from Foundry: Fascinating! I've never seen anything like it, to be perfectly honest. Sophia seems very pleased; thank you, it is... very difficult to amuse her. Still, I'll have to keep an eye on the... creature, just in case.

Once again Sophie is named Sophia here, at this point I'm not sure if it's unintentional or not
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: DS_Vlad on November 16, 2021, 12:10:41 pm
Asking Terry at Drag n Drop if the almighty invictus can get in

::As he registers the word, Invictus, his eyes start to rapidly inspect your entire body. His jaw starts to drop and his entire body starts to quiver as he realizes he is talking to an actual Invictus. ::

W-what, can't be. It's you. Damn, I'm the biggest arena fan! ::His previous cold stare is completly absent and you feel like as if you are talking to a completely different person.::

2nd bit has a couple errors, completely is missing an e and like/as if are redundant
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on November 22, 2021, 04:08:32 pm
'googles' instead of 'goggles'.
Quote
::There's a heavy toolbox filled with bolts and screws, right next to the device he's working on, By grabbing it on its two handles, you lift it up quietly and immediately start moving it above his palm. As soon as you feel the tips of the fingers touching the bottom of the box, you release it. Suddenly his hand drops down, nearly getting squashed between the kit and the table. In ankle alone, he manages to stabilize the fall, preventing any injury in process. This causes him to drop the work, now fully focused on lowering the box on the table safely.:: Is this a new one you came up with to derail my work? I'll give it to you, no one did that to me before. Hmph, but I still got it, been through many of those in my time. Thought I was the only one around here able to move that thing like that. ::Sweat runs rampant on his face, heat mist clouding the glass of his googles. He lifts them up to get a better view of you. By the expression of his face, he's taken back a little.:: Oh, umm, have we met? Name's Brer, and I'm in charge of keeping the track rolling.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on December 03, 2021, 12:00:18 pm
When talking to the Exiled Mutie Guard at the entrance to the Mutie Refuge in the Black Sea as a female playable character, the dialogue still refers to the player character as 'he' in option 3: "What does one need to do to show that he comes with good intentions?"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: hilf on December 04, 2021, 09:45:15 am
"it's influence" instead of "its influence" in Sleight of the Night's description.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on December 25, 2021, 02:47:23 am
1- Option 2,
"Sir, I need to do some things outside of the Black Sea. Is there someone who can quickly drive me back and forth?"

2-
"Inside you're gonna find a trap door that'll lead you to "the wormhole". And "the wormhole" will lead you into Depot A. And when you're done with your business, boy/girl, come see me again. I might have some more work for you."

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on January 17, 2022, 10:54:26 am
1- Allow me to explain what psionic potential really is. It's a [...]

2- [...] The nails - where still present - are mostly broken, with bits of flesh and bloodied hair underneath them.
[It's either 'where they are still present', or 'while still present'.]

3- I found out what the Faceless are looking for. It's some sort of an electronic device that's currently in the hands of Cornell and the Acid Hunters.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on January 22, 2022, 11:33:53 pm
.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on January 28, 2022, 06:14:27 am
(https://i.imgur.com/yoI4GjU.png)

"...have the guts..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on January 29, 2022, 03:04:52 am
(https://i.imgur.com/DSQzcQM.png)

"...these are not..." > "...this is not..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on January 30, 2022, 03:08:58 pm
1- [...] security, catching beasts and transporting them to the Arena... [...]

And you, you fit that description. You've served JKK well so far, and now is the time to give you your reward.

2- [...] Remember when I told you back then that we were suspicious that she was doing some funny business? Well, she was! [...]

3- [...] I think it would be better to leave you home next time. [...]
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on January 31, 2022, 12:49:23 am
(https://i.imgur.com/0ER1wJ2.png)

Ground*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on January 31, 2022, 03:03:51 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/LK5NBv6.png)

finely*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Azura_04 on February 02, 2022, 11:37:51 am
I think it was supposed to be "her."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 02, 2022, 04:26:26 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/CeIDt51.png)

you've
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on February 02, 2022, 09:47:12 pm
brought
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 03, 2022, 10:35:45 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/e9stJsg.png)
Bulldoze, not buldoze.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 04, 2022, 12:00:04 am
(https://i.imgur.com/FB6wgLN.png)

"...I have disagreements with you..." or "...I disagree with you..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 04, 2022, 12:01:08 am
(https://i.imgur.com/6WVUbFk.png)

brethren*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 04, 2022, 04:49:43 am
(https://i.imgur.com/FB6wgLN.png)

"...I have disagreements with you..." or "...I disagree with you..."
or "to" between "I have" and "disagree"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 04, 2022, 07:26:37 am
(1) [<Narrative> Herve mentions that he made a deal with the Protectorate some time ago, according to which they were to deliver Rail Crossing military supplies. But there is no mention of a train delivery.]

(2) [...] I'm... I'm sorry it turned out this way.

(3) [...] Okay, so the best way to reach South Railroad Outpost is by following the tracks south, which is exactly the same route that the train had to take to reach us. [...]

(4) Will measures character's mental determination to see to their actions regardless of various mental difficulties, such as pain, suggestion and overwhelming odds, as well as to force their will onto others and the environment. [...]
[Gender neutral description.]

Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 04, 2022, 07:27:02 am
(5) It's some sort of an electronic device that is currently in the possession of some guy named Cornell, leader of a gang called the Acid Hunters from Core City.

(6) [...] It is also known that much of the controversy that surrounded the 'Hollow Earth Incident' is related to this project.

(7) As the voice gets louder, it starts to make sense.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: harperfan7 on February 05, 2022, 09:01:29 pm
These are all from refurbishing dialogue. I didn't have all the guns, there may be more.

First one is the black arrow:  "needed", "I'll have need", "that and I'll"
Second one is the NF r90:  "thought", and the quality is 134; probably should be 135
Third on is the syg mpx: the "With" has a capitalized "I"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 06, 2022, 01:06:09 am
(1) You're up against Bull's Eye. [...]

(2) [...] I expected something far more sophisticated than this. [...]

(3) I feel this: The Praetorians are going to wipe the floor with the Faceless if they dare to try to move into the city. There's a lot of bad stuff I can say about Praetorian Security, but in these type of situations I have good faith in their enforcers' abilities.

(4) [...] I'm sure you don't care about the details - so I was ordered to go there and get it powered back online.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 06, 2022, 01:23:31 am
(1) Check Sector 1 security status

(2) [...] But, if something seems broken, then our best bet is to try to find a replacement before anything else.

(3) [Conversation with Vivian] I'll meet you back at JKK after I get some rest; [...]

(4) [...] He disapproved of my career choice and... that's that, sadly.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 06, 2022, 05:24:29 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/7g6RV1v.png)
Weird, not wierd
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 06, 2022, 11:04:41 pm
(1) [...] Get it? Cause our last name is 'Young'... Never mind.
     [...] A sound of something metal hitting the ground is heard.

(2) [...] I mean, you and two other challengers, [...]

[3, Conversation with Jack Quicksilver in Core City] (player), I can't say much that will help you. [...]

(4) The strange thing about that place is that there was this room in there, [...]
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Lestat on February 07, 2022, 09:09:24 am
(https://i.imgur.com/rJedtas.png)

The large green spores tingle your palm. Ready to take off at the slightest breeze, it is as if they have the will of their own. --> the should be a
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 08, 2022, 09:19:17 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/iDFVkHQ.png)
Dialogue with Phyllis, possess not possesses
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 08, 2022, 09:46:54 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/P9oQmoF.png)
Dialogue with Synesthete, opportunity not opporunity
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 10, 2022, 03:28:28 am
(https://i.imgur.com/VwyVONF.png)
Conversation with Phreak, competent not competant
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 10, 2022, 04:33:37 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/nVFzw9N.png)
Dialogue with Garry, brutality not brutallity
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 10, 2022, 10:13:22 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/V8TvjhG.png)
Dialogue with Doctor Zilch, judgement not judgment
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 11, 2022, 01:18:17 am
(https://i.imgur.com/BiU1qgq.png)

Improper/awkward phrasing. Following orders of magnitude, it would be "...hundreds of thousands, if not millions..." or, assuming the error is on the other side, "...thousands, if not tens of thousands..." etcetera.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Hipsternity on February 11, 2022, 07:44:02 am
Missing space, should be "which is east".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 11, 2022, 12:06:04 pm
[1] to have
[2] Gorsky has led an expedition (Explanation: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/led-lead/)
[3] Go on - did he tell you anything about his research?
[4] All this has led me all the way to;
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 11, 2022, 12:14:49 pm
1. Take a seat
2. while he gets ready.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 11, 2022, 09:50:13 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/o1z7zmV.png)
Conversation with Edgar, "this land" or "these lands" instead of "these land".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 12, 2022, 07:56:25 am
[2, Missing Spacing]
[3, Female character referred to as 'brother'.]
[4, Female character referred to as 'he'.]
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 13, 2022, 09:36:24 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/3ochq6W.png)

"...still be heard."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 13, 2022, 10:08:07 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/5KpPPMh.png)

"You've seen it, haven't you?"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 13, 2022, 10:26:46 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/oMFmaS9.png)

this instant* (seems to be what was intended, but the guy is crazy, so maybe not)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 13, 2022, 10:37:14 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/RiurrAC.png)

Subislander?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 14, 2022, 12:34:29 am
[1] to keep their eyes peeled
[2, wording] We are not as strong in South Underrail as we are in North Underrail,
[3, wording] This man in a Protectorate spy, he's the one who revealed all our plans and is thus responsible for the deaths of many of our brothers and sisters!
[4] Listen, you don't say this to anyone or I get very mad, okay?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 14, 2022, 12:40:44 am
[1] your place
[2] what you are able to notice is how his body language
[3] in an attempt to further aid
[4] I am not sending anyone else there.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 14, 2022, 12:52:35 am
[1, wording] Want a cigar? OR Wanna smoke a cigar?
[2] You told me about that twice already.
[3] a friend or a foe.
[4] I thought I should make everyone's encryption keys public so that all of you
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 14, 2022, 06:06:48 am
(https://i.imgur.com/XkmO54D.png)

"This strange creature..." or "Some strange creature..." or "A strange creature..." etc.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 14, 2022, 06:16:43 am
(https://i.imgur.com/eUARvau.png)

"...enter a state of a unique type of regeneration cycles..." or "...enter a unique state of regeneration cycles..."
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 14, 2022, 09:36:49 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/ogkEHbd.png)

questions*
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Execlectic on February 14, 2022, 09:50:11 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/eqV1IiK.png)

No punctuation. If he's being cut off, "...find a problem-"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 15, 2022, 08:19:23 am
[1] The expression should be: "just so you know, we have eyes and ears everywhere."
[2] One unknown member, then: "dismissed from Arima by an unknown member of the First Circle."
[3] Little of what was left
[4] Along with a number of other high ranking technocrats,
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 15, 2022, 08:40:09 am
[1]
[2-1] (player), do you read me? (context of dialogue in [2-2])
[3] You're lying on the floor but you are alive and whole.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 15, 2022, 09:01:18 am
[1] privilege
[2] affairs
[3] in-laws.
[4] Double Bass at the opening.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 15, 2022, 09:14:12 am
[1] you and your husband's.
[2] His rumbly voice recovers, but it's a bit softer than earlier.
He clearly can. Heh...
[3]
[4] Missing spacing. Red light turns green and
not too dissimilar to his usual tenor.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Mark The Red on February 20, 2022, 01:04:53 am
Barbed net missing the % in text.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 21, 2022, 03:35:21 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/yOlcxvW.png)
Conversation with Zack, circles not cicrles, and "indicating a" instead of indicate, alternatively "indicate a" and removing the , before it
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 24, 2022, 01:44:18 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/NTjcLjk.png)
Conversation with Norman Hack, conscious not consious (unless consious is Advatongue)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 24, 2022, 07:54:27 pm
[1] Ambushed
[2] stabilization wings
[3] He hands them to you in a small box.
[4] wanna to know
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on February 26, 2022, 01:21:48 pm
[1] I need to know what you discovered working on the "The Ark".
[2] addressing
[3] held your promise.
[4] sight before I make the hunters around here turn you into prey.
[5] good for against poisoning
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Scrownger on February 26, 2022, 07:27:37 pm
During your first visit to Core city, near Hardcore bar, Tchortist Missionary dialogue... (missing t,   "an insitution" instead of "an institution")
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on February 27, 2022, 01:30:40 am
(https://i.imgur.com/ykyZ6AI.png)
Information on Gorsky, unknown not uknown
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 01, 2022, 02:28:13 pm
Ferryman dialogue has 'percieve' instead of 'perceive' in one instance

Dess has unnecessary 'the' in her dialogue at the end of the cau quest

Rista should have 'Just so you know' here
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 02, 2022, 01:14:06 am
[1] is a not a bad indicator by all means.
[2] Then he finishes the brew, grabs his spade, then walks away.
[3] on the inside he's probably a turning into a ball of plasma.
[4] located in the the Upper Underrail;
[5] agree with your assessment completely.
[6] The better question is: Will you?
[7] waiting for you
[8, If intended, leave it alone.] I'm Sophie Tallowski,
[9, She is referring to Bernard.]
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 02, 2022, 03:11:41 am
(https://i.imgur.com/fqc6JSv.png)
Free Drones intercom, "your" not "you"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 03, 2022, 03:11:36 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/iTGwHk5.png)
Conversation with Ezra, the sentence is kind of mangled. Should remove "I ask"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 03, 2022, 03:26:04 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/j373sYZ.png)
Conversation with Garry, brutality not brutallity
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 09, 2022, 10:03:09 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/Zxld7nY.png)
Conversation with Phreak, rogue *
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 09, 2022, 10:03:34 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/pKfFBvb.png)
Conversation with Phreak, ranges not range
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 09, 2022, 10:14:38 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/OJWCzCk.png)
Dialogue with Phreak, awry not avry
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 09, 2022, 10:15:26 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/T7L877G.png)
Dialogue with Phreak, I've not Ive
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 09, 2022, 10:16:17 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/DQqv41o.png)
Dialogue with Phreak, "Competing gizmos" sounds a lot better than "Gizmos competing"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 14, 2022, 06:36:57 am
[1] I felt like another patient...
[2] beautiful
[3] You can get more coins
[4] If these things are not out of here by tomorrow.
[5] Two thousand two hundred charons.
[6] It'll be delivered it as fast as possible.
[7] cause it makes no sense to me either
[8] made gave me a small headache
[9] someone's
[10] Punctuation
[11] professor's ear

Edit: Corrected [1]
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 18, 2022, 01:15:31 pm
[1] I hate it when I don't have stuff.
[2] SGS has two exits, one at the upper level and the other at the lower level. Therefore...
      No one saw him leave through any of the station's exits,
[3] Punctuation
[4] Questioning tone.
     So, does that sound acceptable to you?
[5] The Colonel's speech
     your ears discern
[6] worms
[7] Female player character
     the person she is bargaining for
[8] it is on it's way
[9] If I'm interpreting this correctly...
     Luben, just like most members with his clearance level, has an intradermal chip planted in his arm, so take this tracker;
[10] wouldn't
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 18, 2022, 01:36:51 pm
[1] theirs
[2] technological
[3] Hand me my broken spear and I'll give you a tool worthy of a hunter.
[4] she closes her eyes and proceeds
     once again she's
     Leave me be, or face the fate of the rest of...
[5] Access
[6] Spacing.
[7] It's covered with...
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 19, 2022, 06:20:26 pm
[1] I feel like another patient...
I think the past tense is correct in that instance, although the 'a' is indeed pointless here

There's a typo in convo with Luper: It should be 'He chucks the hacksaw away'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on March 20, 2022, 01:08:08 am
(https://i.imgur.com/m21Hqxc.png)
Conversation with Abram, interrupted not interupted
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 20, 2022, 02:04:55 am
[1] I feel like another patient...
I think the past tense is correct in that instance, although the 'a' is indeed pointless here



Edited the original post.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 21, 2022, 10:18:06 am
Female Sec Trooper has dialogue line using the same pronoun as for male.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 21, 2022, 02:39:11 pm
During Hopperdrome commentator says about x hopper:
"Did x is feeling bad?"
It should be "Is x feeling bad?"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 21, 2022, 06:41:12 pm
There is small inconsistency regarding Acorn in dialogue with Professor:
Description of item says it is inscribed with ACoNR text, but when giving it to Oldfield, it reads that it is Acorn(from capital A to capital N)
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 27, 2022, 06:53:55 pm
Dialogue with Kharon - should probably be 'Greatest', not Greanesst.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on March 28, 2022, 04:16:48 pm
Intelligence check in dialogue with Geezer Ford should start with upper case letter
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 29, 2022, 12:15:25 pm
Some dialogue in game that I think could use a little change.

[1] I think a better wording would be:
"Gene told me you are an Underrail Express train operator."
As it is consistent with how Gene had told the player.


[2] If I remember correctly, even after the player has been assigned by either the Preservation Forces or the Department of Physics to do some work in the West Wing, the only response the player has to end the conversation with after asking why the West Wing is dangerous, is:

"I'll go where it's safe. Goodbye, sister."

Could use some additional dialogue if the player has already been assigned to do some work in the West Wing.


[3] I found this part a little odd. Since this is the first time that the player has visited the Free Drones Base after being recruited, I think that the way Hutch would say it, would be:

[...] you'll run straight into Becket, our supplier. You can get a lot of good stuff from him, but more about that later. A bit further to the left is our medical office. [...]

[4] If I recall correctly, this is the first time that Todor Sallywatch's name is mentioned. But even without hearing his full name, when the player inquires about him to Everard, the player says: "About Todor Sallywatch..."

Mentioning Todor Sallywatch's full name in the spot shown in [4] should do the trick.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 29, 2022, 12:26:59 pm
[1] AND [2]:
Sorry to keep you waiting.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 29, 2022, 12:38:31 pm
[1] up to the highest standards
[2] slowing
[3] extinct
[4] Double Bass
[5] three disjointed Subislander families
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on March 29, 2022, 01:10:21 pm
[2] The things I hear from you have stopped sounding strange a long time ago; what is strange is that we've actually reached that point.
Regarding 'that point', I believe it is referring to 'the point that the player finds that the things Dude says have stopped sounding strange'.
[3] deeper into the mine
[4] greatly pleased by your performance so far to the point of arranging for you to become the owner of
[5] since his disappearance
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Guehlfirf on April 01, 2022, 01:42:27 am
Georgis places his hand on his heart and downs the drink
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 04, 2022, 10:50:50 am
Computer logs at Caerus Residential  - Gunter Vasilica computer
In second conversation with Maria Hope there is a missing letter 't' in commitee.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 04, 2022, 02:17:42 pm
1. Should be 'Distraught with fear'
2. Missing space between 'is' and 'east'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 06, 2022, 09:38:38 am
Katya dialogue about dreams: should be 'apparent', not 'aparent'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: agris on April 06, 2022, 08:03:32 pm
Kimi's first dialogue sequence with the player in Junktown, the action text describing her replanting, says "Her stare is directed toward the plant, but is seems like her attention is not"

"is" should be "it".
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 08, 2022, 09:34:04 am
Phreak convo - bugged persuasion option
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 08, 2022, 12:49:10 pm
Conversation with Archibald Knight, should be 'then', not 'they'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 10, 2022, 11:18:56 am
Doctor Savage convo during leaving the camp if you never gave him a cigarette - white and green text should be reversed
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 11, 2022, 12:15:29 pm
Asking Tanner for too much money for acorn: 'you're your contribution in other ways' makes little sense, should be changed to something else like 'you'll be rewarded for your contribution in other ways' for example
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 13, 2022, 02:27:04 am
(https://i.imgur.com/VIqvycH.png)
Rogue space between "," and "he"

(https://i.imgur.com/Psrv3Nj.png)
There needs to be a space between "," and "brother"

(https://i.imgur.com/UgYpZLJ.png)
Features, not feautres

(https://i.imgur.com/u0HhFHL.png)
Versa, not verse

(https://i.imgur.com/9xXHgs2.png)
I, not I'm

(https://i.imgur.com/T88ynaw.png)
I'm not exactly sure what's supposed to mean here

(https://i.imgur.com/ZkhhowR.png)
Competitor, not compeditor

(https://i.imgur.com/KCNjFDS.png)
Perform, not preform

(https://i.imgur.com/ZqCpOGP.png)
I forgot the context of this but you can probably search for where it is mentioned

(https://i.imgur.com/0mGdQsw.png)
Its, not it's

(https://i.imgur.com/xgO8sUj.png)
Flotsurmir's, not Flotsurmir.

(https://i.imgur.com/TSAjikk.png)
Rogue space between "you" and "cannot"

(https://i.imgur.com/0HSdSbZ.png)
Were lots, not was lots

(https://i.imgur.com/FaGPAiP.png)
Space needed between "Tchort." and "Her"

(https://i.imgur.com/Dutagiz.png)
Official, not offical

(https://i.imgur.com/4TqNFqG.png)
Seriously, not seriosuly. And there's a rogue space between "eight" and "wrenches"

(https://i.imgur.com/pWl6joP.png)
Whether the plasma core's, not whether plasma core's

(https://i.imgur.com/BHOCt7K.png)
Needs a " ' " at the end of Technologies

(https://i.imgur.com/qctLcN9.png)
Broken text

(https://i.imgur.com/JVQrx1q.png)
What must've been, not must've been
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 13, 2022, 03:50:04 am
(https://i.imgur.com/I66q3NB.png)
She says nothing when you ask for sailing directions and say "Nowhere"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 03:41:43 am
(https://i.imgur.com/q2obTty.png)
Conversation with Todd, extinct not exctinct
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 03:53:26 am
(https://i.imgur.com/7HmtEHk.png)
Conversation with Todd, maintained not maintainted
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 03:54:30 am
(https://i.imgur.com/inDPxt8.png)
Conversation with Todd, user's not users
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 04:02:20 am
(https://i.imgur.com/YtFsFl6.png)
Conversation with Todd, there's an extra space at the beginning
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 04:22:04 am
(https://i.imgur.com/eMwYdGB.png)
Its, not it's
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 04:25:55 am
(https://i.imgur.com/o29x1EL.png)
I think houses is a far better term than homes, I don't think I've heard of homes as a verb
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 04:48:02 am
(https://i.imgur.com/lw9anGr.png)
Is the text meant to be bold?
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 05:05:47 am
(https://i.imgur.com/FCN1UCp.png)
Needs a space between "away." and "Anything"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 14, 2022, 05:17:31 am
(https://i.imgur.com/7LMGhRK.png)
Conversation with Azif, "are" not "is"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on April 15, 2022, 07:52:28 pm
(https://i.imgur.com/xR2rnEL.png)
Conversation with Eidein, needs a space between "Acorn." and "While"

(https://i.imgur.com/fM2g2jH.png)
Conversation with Lora Baker, rogue space between "felt" and "even colder"

(https://i.imgur.com/WnPHZaE.png)
Conversation with Harmost Stavros, needs a "the" between "sure" and "outside"

(https://i.imgur.com/kW9M7oS.png)
"the physical form has undergone" or "the physical form underwent"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 16, 2022, 11:23:33 am
Coagulation Shot has no description of 'Use' in stark contrast to every other medicine
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 20, 2022, 08:44:56 am
There is a typo in one of the lines of the Master Exploder Squad
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 21, 2022, 11:06:52 pm
JKK receptionist - should be Man, not Van
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on April 30, 2022, 07:35:52 pm
Should be east, not west.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on May 01, 2022, 02:44:32 pm
Missing part of the text
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Barry on May 06, 2022, 03:21:46 am
(https://i.imgur.com/IyRJDaf.png)
"Specimens that are", not "specimen are"
(https://i.imgur.com/3cqprWI.png)
Rogue space between "G." and "Vasilica"
(https://i.imgur.com/vuBLXnT.png)
I recall that this one has one extra space before "G." but I cannot remember, or maybe it's missing a space between "G." and "Vasilica".
(https://i.imgur.com/AUra7BR.png)
(https://i.imgur.com/Ze3wmyF.png)
Technically chatlogs have a valid reason to contain typos but double-spacing is rare
(https://i.imgur.com/FVMbrTY.png)
Needs space between "it." and "A"
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on May 07, 2022, 01:34:32 pm
Talk with Brer at Hopperdrome
Should be similar, not simmilar
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: WeiJayTan on May 07, 2022, 02:39:40 pm
[1] As I remember, the player has to find their own way through the sewers. This part should be: I'll explain everything when we get there.

[2] Oh, we did relieve some poor wimp of his little toy.

[3] To avoid confusion, it should be 'stun', as there is a 'daze' status effect as well.

[4] universally, missing an 'L'

[5] Odd dialogue response.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on May 10, 2022, 10:40:06 am
All-In description status effect is not updated to include the -3 intelligence debuff
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: PaposikG6 on May 14, 2022, 07:01:28 pm
Mushroom Cove Hunter Wolo random event.
3. 'Throwing' shouldn't start with capital letter
4. Missing space between each and other
7. Should be 'your tomb' and 'unleash'
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crows on May 16, 2022, 05:49:14 pm
The mutie corpse in the Core City trash disposal/crane area (that can be recovered by crane) - "Mutie" is misspelled.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crows on May 29, 2022, 01:37:52 am
From one of the emergency phones:

::It doesn't take a keen eye not to notice that this emergency phone seems to be quite outdated, both when it comes to its technology and current condition, or rather, lack of the two.::

::The relative proximity of the railroads, and the phone station's overall design, undoubtedly point to its purpose; they are to be used in situations which involve undesired circumstances when it comes to the functionality of the railroad traffic.::


Also, this isn't a spelling error, but the first line is also a little strange - to say something has an "outdated condition" doesn't sound quite right. Something like:

"... quite old, considering its technological composition as well as its current condition."

might work better.
Title: Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
Post by: Crows on May 29, 2022, 04:00:42 am
::The insides of the box resemble a crime scene, it was shown no mercy. Furious pummeling has left little to work with.::

It should either be "The inside of the box" or "they were shown no mercy."

The second part could be kept the same if it was moved to the end of the sentence: "Furious pummeling has left little to work with; it was shown no mercy."


::The knowledge and skill required to find the correct place to start fixing this device , exceeds your own.::