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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« on: July 22, 2015, 10:54:15 am »
In the conversation with Ambassador Athanas where he offers you a spot in the Protectorate: "I have already contacted the consul and explained him the whole situation. He is expecting you arrival, charname.' Should be 'explained to him' and 'your'.
Mykola in Core City: "My was doing honest work, my business used to flourish." Aside from the typo the sentence is a bit off, perhaps "I was doing honest work and my business was flourishing."
Meeting Gorsky in Core City: "With Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make a presence when the time comes." Should be "With the Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make our presence felt/known when the time comes."
More Gorsky: "After you cleared (should be clear)the location, you must find a way to get the tunneler operational again. Look around the city and see if anyone got (should be has) the expertise, but be discreet about it."
All the dialogue with Gorsky and Sneaky here is a bit off, really.
Mykola in Core City: "My was doing honest work, my business used to flourish." Aside from the typo the sentence is a bit off, perhaps "I was doing honest work and my business was flourishing."
Meeting Gorsky in Core City: "With Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make a presence when the time comes." Should be "With the Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make our presence felt/known when the time comes."
More Gorsky: "After you cleared (should be clear)the location, you must find a way to get the tunneler operational again. Look around the city and see if anyone got (should be has) the expertise, but be discreet about it."
All the dialogue with Gorsky and Sneaky here is a bit off, really.