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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« on: January 16, 2026, 06:57:52 pm »
When meeting Archibald Knight, officer in the second dialogue option should be plural. "I'd say there are finer officers here than me, but thank you."

the dialogue a couple lines later could be smoother as, "It's horrible. I have all this! He gestures Look! Power, wealth, everything I want! Yet, I lost the most precious thing, and with it, everything."

Also, the Praetorian Caped Peacekeeper's description capitalizes zoner in "resident Zoner" when it shouldn't. The scapular version is uncapitalized.

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