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Suggestions / Re: some suggestions after about 5 hrs

« on: April 18, 2013, 01:48:02 pm »

Saving/loading takes a bit too long atm and I'm aware of that.

The reason it probably takes long for you to transition is because you have 'save on transition' turned on.

Could you check if that's the case?

Amazing!  Almost instant transition with 'autosave on transition' turned off.
Thanks Styg.

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Suggestions / Re: A map

« on: April 18, 2013, 04:14:09 am »

Yes please. A map would be the icing on the cake for me.

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Suggestions / Re: some suggestions after about 5 hrs

« on: April 18, 2013, 04:04:16 am »

bought the game and love it, finally beat it so far and the only downside i found at all was the time it took to quicksave took over 20 seconds....um is it just me or is that too long...?

I find it takes 10 seconds to save and also 10 seconds on transition of maps.  Is this the norm?

Windows 8 64bit
intel i5 3.4ghz
8gb mem
GTX660
500gb 7200rpm AHCI mode.

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 11:33:19 pm »

Roman: We're not sure.  it might be that the tunnel just caved in couple of places.......

'We're not sure.  It might be that the tunnel just caved in 'in a' couple of places.

Bisson: Hello, friend.  I don't believe we met. Name's Bisson.

'Hello, friend.  I don't believe 'we've' met.  Name's Bisson.'

Bisson: It's when you focus your mind to create a telekinetic ball and launch it at your target.  Impact is often so strong that if you hit a living target with it you'll likely to daze it for a short while.

'if you hit a living target with it 'you're' likely to daze if for a short while. or 'if you hit a living target with it you'll likely daze it for a short while.

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 11:04:34 pm »

Vera Hale: Certainly. United Stations, also called Union by some, is a confederacy of stations in north and central Underrail.  it's an attempt to unify the entirety of Underrail so that we could all work together towards a better future of the human race.

'towards a better future 'for' the human race.

Vera Hale: We currently have good trading relations with the union and I personally think it would be a good idea to be among the first to join it here in the south.  We are arguably the most powerful faction in these parts so we could position ourselves advantageously in their organization and also retain high degree of independence.

'in their organization and also retain 'a' high degree of independence.'

Vera Hale:  But let me ask you what is your opinion on the matter?  Would you like to see your station become a member of the United Stations?
option 2. response: 'I'm not sure. I'm reserving judgment until I learn out more about all this.'

remove 'out'

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 10:48:31 pm »

Big Bret: You'll going to love it here then.

'You're going to love it here then.'

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 10:43:39 pm »

Quinton:  Well, I never really had appropriate place to keep the rathounds,

'Well, I never really had 'an' appropriate place to keep the rathounds,'

Quinton: I have prepared the final version of concoction and filled a set of crossbow bolts with it.

'I have prepared the final version of 'the' concoction....'

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 10:00:37 pm »

First Mission.

Hadrian Tanner:  I think there are total of five outposts plus the one with the generator.

'I think there are 'a' total of five'

Engineering.

Ezra: He speaks with calm and even voice.

'He speaks with 'a' calm and even voice.'

After mind control. Description says.  'You find yourself on a small isle in a middle of lake with no recollection of how you got here.'

Should be more like ' You find yourself on a small isle in the middle of a lake with no recollection of how you got here.'

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 09:29:26 pm »

Medical

Pasquale: Furthermore, Roche points out that the areas of the brain where the activity takes place were never even properly charted, let alone decoded.

I'd get rid of 'even'

Pasquale: There are ways to do this by extended meditation, but this can take years.  We have more efficient method nowadays.

'We have more efficient methods nowadays.'

Pasquale: Quinton is well versed in Metathermics, which is the area of psionic development that deals with instigating rapid temperature changes and chemical reactions.  He used to be one of Biotech researchers working on new applications of psionics.

'He used to be one of 'the' Biotech researchers'

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 08:47:07 pm »

Cantina

Arlene: You've met Arlene during your testing period.

'You met'

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 08:32:12 pm »

Opening sequence:

Vera Hale: Almost everyone is working shifts up there now that administration level is stabilized.

maybe try: now that 'the' administration level is stabilized.

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors

« on: April 17, 2013, 08:18:37 pm »

Engineering.

Harold : After that you should be able to reactivate all the outposts. I'm afraid you'll have to do that manually though.  You see, each of them has a switch that cuts off the power in a case of a hazard.

should be : cuts off the power in case of a hazard.

get rid of the 'a'