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haze1103

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #405 on: July 26, 2021, 01:38:53 am »
When asking Eidein about his ability to communicate with Tchort, in his office:

"we are able to communicate on a very basic level through a... let's call it a telepathic link, but its far from such; it is difficult to describe to someone who has never experienced it."

Should be "it's" or "it is"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #406 on: July 27, 2021, 08:02:20 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #407 on: July 27, 2021, 09:36:16 pm »
I'm not done with my first playthrough, so there might be more stuff, but here's the first batch.

1. The Lennox Pierce quest: once the laptop is accessed, it says "Please select one of the followring options". It should of course be "following".
2. The Arena match with bugs. Quote: "(...)obliterated fourty bugs with his arm flames". Should be "forty".
3. Jyles dialogue line once the player asks to set up an electronic and mechanical workshop seems to have an error. "(...)either an electronic and mechanical bench." should have "or" instead of "and".
4. Grey Armor Spec Ops Helmet would most probably have to be renamed to Gray.
5. The building located to the right of player's house entrance, the one behind a tough hackable lock: one dialogue option in the console has "missmatched". Should be "mismatched".
6. The White Leporous Tongue Oddity. Shouldn't it be "Leprous"?

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #408 on: July 29, 2021, 08:56:49 pm »

Vencel dialogue, cocktails not coctails

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #409 on: July 31, 2021, 12:29:48 am »
Ion (at the rig) has floating text dialogue that says "My shift start soon."  Should be "starts".
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #410 on: August 01, 2021, 06:10:41 am »
The merc check;  "are can be"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #411 on: August 03, 2021, 12:43:42 pm »

Quite, not qutie

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #412 on: August 05, 2021, 02:06:41 pm »

I think it's supposed to be "led", not "lead"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #413 on: August 06, 2021, 01:33:06 pm »
When entering dialogue for the first time with Kokoschka after taking off a Gray Army suit his dialogue has "very thank you.Nice to meet you"
Kokoschka says "Camp Hathator" instead of "Camp Hathor". Intentional?

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« Reply #414 on: August 06, 2021, 01:52:38 pm »
Dialogue with Edgar from Camp Hathor has an extra space before a comma "...and if you say this isn't a trick , then I suppose..."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #415 on: August 09, 2021, 10:40:33 am »
Kokoschka says "Camp Hathator" instead of "Camp Hathor". Intentional?

Oh, yes! :D

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #416 on: August 09, 2021, 05:01:02 pm »
Kokoschka says "Camp Hathator" instead of "Camp Hathor". Intentional?

Oh, yes! :D
Huh, that's good to know!

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #417 on: August 09, 2021, 05:01:31 pm »

Several instead of severeal

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #418 on: August 09, 2021, 07:38:21 pm »

Double space between "are" and "as"
"Intensely focused on" sounds a bit weird, I think it should be "intensely focused on you"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #419 on: August 12, 2021, 12:47:58 pm »
I think this should be a single message