Author Topic: Report spelling/grammar errors  (Read 249355 times)

PaposikG6

  • Oculite
  • Faceless
  • **
  • Posts: 567
  • Karma: +138/-1025
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #750 on: February 05, 2024, 01:27:40 pm »
blank text screen in the last dialogue window when you remove steel bars in port crag lighthouse as a mutant
Valor's favorite poster

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #751 on: February 17, 2024, 05:33:48 pm »
should've
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #752 on: February 19, 2024, 05:33:00 pm »
[1] that what he is

[2] I think this part is meant to convey the player going around saying "Mr. Ford is the best fisherman in whole South Underrail!", while Geezer Ford laughs at the player. So, I think the quotation marks are incorrect. When I read it, it made little sense to me...

I think that part should be like this:
 "Mr. Ford is the best fisherman in the whole South Underrail!" while I blow harder than two pufferfishes matin'.

[3] shyly

[4] I
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #753 on: February 19, 2024, 06:01:05 pm »
[1] expedition's
[2] for something more on on the device
proceed with a little less info.
[3] assassinating an envoy
[4] Pillar is -> The Pillar has miraculously
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #754 on: February 19, 2024, 06:02:27 pm »
[5] in the possession of a man named Cornell.
* This is important, as the mistake makes it sound like 'The Cube has Cornell' instead of the other way round.
** I would suggest adding a brief description of the device in this dialogue. Because how will the Faceless know that the information is correct?
*** I remember Six's Deep Caverns encounter dialogue having the same error. Might want to fix that as well.
[6] How did they look? -> What did they look like?
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #755 on: February 22, 2024, 03:01:19 pm »
[1] It
[2] an
[3] hear
[4] crossbow (he wields a crossbow, not a gun)
[5] an
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

PaposikG6

  • Oculite
  • Faceless
  • **
  • Posts: 567
  • Karma: +138/-1025
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #756 on: March 05, 2024, 12:27:39 pm »
TiChrome Crowbar description: 'fency' -> should be 'fancy'
Valor's favorite poster

PaposikG6

  • Oculite
  • Faceless
  • **
  • Posts: 567
  • Karma: +138/-1025
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #757 on: March 10, 2024, 10:35:27 am »
derrailed -> derailed
Valor's favorite poster

PaposikG6

  • Oculite
  • Faceless
  • **
  • Posts: 567
  • Karma: +138/-1025
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #758 on: March 12, 2024, 12:37:41 pm »
"::His head turns sideways, eyes open wide.::

The mind would smell it, you'd hear its heat, and if not, then the truth will not be revealed.



::Oculus should be right below the northern rock cliff that this man seems to be constantly turning towards. Though looking at his face, it seems that he's only looking at the structure's general direction, unaware of its actual existence.::"

unnecessary double enter here
Valor's favorite poster

PaposikG6

  • Oculite
  • Faceless
  • **
  • Posts: 567
  • Karma: +138/-1025
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #759 on: March 14, 2024, 09:31:02 am »
"Yes... he is... We were desperate, sir. We had the tools to cut the pipe over there... and it was big enough for a slim man like him to enter. We though he could get help, or at least reach the lobby... and the Dreadnought there..."

though -> thought
Valor's favorite poster

harperfan7

  • Oculite
  • Godman
  • **
  • Posts: 1388
  • Karma: +210/-746
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #760 on: March 28, 2024, 02:42:18 am »
When you return from gassing the drones and talk to mareth, and you tell him you are the invictus, he says:

"Oh, it must be a some southern thing I don't understand. Oh wait... you're talking about... the Arena? ::He laughs.::"

the "be a some"; should be "be some"
*eurobeat intensifies*

harperfan7

  • Oculite
  • Godman
  • **
  • Posts: 1388
  • Karma: +210/-746
    • View Profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #761 on: April 07, 2024, 11:44:34 am »
Investigator Vuk:

Listen, I am-- ::He pauses for a second.:: You know what, bro... you might have a good point there. Magnificent Tchort, yes! The pacification procedure we performed on these creatures could have caused them to view us ways we haven't really expected. Hmmm, perhaps in her mind I'm one of her young or a distressed unit.

should be "view us in ways"

also "unit" is a strange choice there, not sure its wrong though
*eurobeat intensifies*

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #762 on: April 08, 2024, 03:39:11 pm »
[1]
[2] a Free Drone
[3] a mention of [...] seem to find it
[4] moments
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #763 on: April 10, 2024, 03:27:49 pm »
[1] evoked
[2] her
[3] the earthquake prevented the Bakers from returning to SGS, and a gang which called themselves the Acid Hunters ambushed them at Rail Crossing Station.
* or something similar, depending on how much the player knows about what happened to the Bakers.
[4] it is the only
[5] in a position to make me angry
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

WeiJayTan

  • Scavenger
  • ***
  • Posts: 126
  • Karma: +13/-2
    • View Profile
    • IMDb profile
Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #764 on: April 10, 2024, 03:41:53 pm »
[1] type
[2] led
[3] it's
[4] interested in
[5] XAL-001
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."