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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #210 on: April 01, 2018, 02:37:47 am »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #211 on: April 01, 2018, 02:38:25 am »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #212 on: September 29, 2018, 09:37:44 pm »
Missing comma after "You see".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #213 on: November 06, 2018, 01:30:57 am »
JKK Ola

This does not seem to be correct, not that im expert on the matter.  :-\


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #214 on: December 15, 2018, 06:42:09 am »


Should be "anyone", I think.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #215 on: December 29, 2018, 06:59:57 am »

Alas Sophie, we hardly knew ye.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #216 on: December 29, 2018, 09:53:05 am »


In the first one, I'd go with "I know how it may sound" or "I know what it sounds like".  Not a biggie.

In the second one, "their" should be "they".

In the third one, "though" should be "thought".
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #217 on: December 31, 2018, 03:38:41 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #218 on: January 21, 2019, 02:38:33 pm »


in oculus; tried not to spoil
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #219 on: June 10, 2019, 05:34:32 pm »
Juggernaut has two g's. 

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #220 on: June 11, 2019, 05:38:16 pm »


"I wasn't aware of where"
"One single bit of information" or "One single fact"
"as can be possible"

I would actually break up that sentence with a few commas: 
"One single bit of information was necessary for me to realize that an object, that advanced, existing in Core City at the time of the Faceless invasion, was as far from a coincidence as can be possible."
I might even say "that technologically advanced" just for clarity.

2nd pic
"had been left largely intact"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #221 on: June 11, 2019, 05:44:31 pm »
Jumping back to the mysterious lady five posts ago, I realize the 2nd paragraph could use some further correction.

"The only good thing is that everyone knows they dwell in the passages, which makes them a good hiding place from the protectorate."  Added a comma and changed "makes it a good" to "makes them a good".
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #222 on: June 15, 2019, 10:35:35 pm »


"gonna need someone"
"help us get" (I would assume; not exactly sure where that sentence was going)



"or are you"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #223 on: June 16, 2019, 01:27:21 am »


Should be "thread", I think.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #224 on: June 18, 2019, 07:06:54 pm »
Threats?  Not sure it's wrong, but seems like an odd thing to say.  I would have thought "treads", like tank treads. 
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