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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #570 on: February 27, 2022, 01:30:40 am »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #571 on: March 01, 2022, 02:28:13 pm »
Ferryman dialogue has 'percieve' instead of 'perceive' in one instance

Dess has unnecessary 'the' in her dialogue at the end of the cau quest

Rista should have 'Just so you know' here
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #572 on: March 02, 2022, 01:14:06 am »
[1] is a not a bad indicator by all means.
[2] Then he finishes the brew, grabs his spade, then walks away.
[3] on the inside he's probably a turning into a ball of plasma.
[4] located in the the Upper Underrail;
[5] agree with your assessment completely.
[6] The better question is: Will you?
[7] waiting for you
[8, If intended, leave it alone.] I'm Sophie Tallowski,
[9, She is referring to Bernard.]
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« Reply #573 on: March 02, 2022, 03:11:41 am »

Free Drones intercom, "your" not "you"

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« Reply #574 on: March 03, 2022, 03:11:36 pm »

Conversation with Ezra, the sentence is kind of mangled. Should remove "I ask"

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« Reply #575 on: March 03, 2022, 03:26:04 pm »

Conversation with Garry, brutality not brutallity

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« Reply #576 on: March 09, 2022, 10:03:09 pm »

Conversation with Phreak, rogue *

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« Reply #577 on: March 09, 2022, 10:03:34 pm »

Conversation with Phreak, ranges not range

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« Reply #578 on: March 09, 2022, 10:14:38 pm »

Dialogue with Phreak, awry not avry

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« Reply #579 on: March 09, 2022, 10:15:26 pm »

Dialogue with Phreak, I've not Ive

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« Reply #580 on: March 09, 2022, 10:16:17 pm »

Dialogue with Phreak, "Competing gizmos" sounds a lot better than "Gizmos competing"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #581 on: March 14, 2022, 06:36:57 am »
[1] I felt like another patient...
[2] beautiful
[3] You can get more coins
[4] If these things are not out of here by tomorrow.
[5] Two thousand two hundred charons.
[6] It'll be delivered it as fast as possible.
[7] cause it makes no sense to me either
[8] made gave me a small headache
[9] someone's
[10] Punctuation
[11] professor's ear

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« Reply #582 on: March 18, 2022, 01:15:31 pm »
[1] I hate it when I don't have stuff.
[2] SGS has two exits, one at the upper level and the other at the lower level. Therefore...
      No one saw him leave through any of the station's exits,
[3] Punctuation
[4] Questioning tone.
     So, does that sound acceptable to you?
[5] The Colonel's speech
     your ears discern
[6] worms
[7] Female player character
     the person she is bargaining for
[8] it is on it's way
[9] If I'm interpreting this correctly...
     Luben, just like most members with his clearance level, has an intradermal chip planted in his arm, so take this tracker;
[10] wouldn't
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #583 on: March 18, 2022, 01:36:51 pm »
[1] theirs
[2] technological
[3] Hand me my broken spear and I'll give you a tool worthy of a hunter.
[4] she closes her eyes and proceeds
     once again she's
     Leave me be, or face the fate of the rest of...
[5] Access
[6] Spacing.
[7] It's covered with...
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« Reply #584 on: March 19, 2022, 06:20:26 pm »
[1] I feel like another patient...
I think the past tense is correct in that instance, although the 'a' is indeed pointless here

There's a typo in convo with Luper: It should be 'He chucks the hacksaw away'
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