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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #705 on: October 31, 2023, 10:11:56 am »
dengerous -> dangerous
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #706 on: November 02, 2023, 02:10:44 pm »
Thermobaric grenades description:

"This is the much feared launcher grenade that causes a power thermobaric explosion"
should be "powerful"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #707 on: November 02, 2023, 08:02:56 pm »
should be 'slots' not 'slot' singular
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #708 on: November 03, 2023, 02:25:01 am »
different.To

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #709 on: November 03, 2023, 12:04:18 pm »
thumper description is missing a ENTER break betwen critical damage bonus and minimal skill required
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #710 on: November 05, 2023, 09:20:14 pm »
burried->buried
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #711 on: November 07, 2023, 01:47:50 pm »

It's, or (better) It was*

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #712 on: November 07, 2023, 01:57:51 pm »
Awkward. Should be "...what I want to call you."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #713 on: November 19, 2023, 11:50:53 pm »
When talking to gale in his basement, if you are protectorate, there is an option to insult him and start a fight.  That line has the word "protectore" which should be "protectorate". 
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #714 on: November 22, 2023, 02:30:38 pm »
For Bullet Trance feat and status effect, it probably should say "Grants 5% bonus damage each time you kill an enemy using machine guns and miniguns." and "This character does 5% bonus damage when using machine guns and miniguns."
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #715 on: November 26, 2023, 06:34:18 am »
Says "weaerer's" and then the correct version "wearer's"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #716 on: December 02, 2023, 04:30:18 pm »
"::He chuckles.::

The jetter yer lookin' for is right in front of ye.Someone's gotta teach all these dryfoots comin' 'ere how to fight, so that's somethin' I often do. After all, whether I like it or not I gotta rely on my mates to have my back, right? Unless I say a banga's good enough they ain' goin' on a raid wit' me."

Missing space between first two sentences - Razor dialogue
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #717 on: December 02, 2023, 10:37:58 pm »
When talking to cathcart, the first word should be "Hephaestus":

"Hephestus Research was a large and advanced research center dedicated purely to robotics. To elaborate, as you say - they developed robots intended for different roles. Military, industrial, medical... I was told significant progress was made there, but it was all forgotten when Biocorp fell apart. If we could get some of that tech, Corporal, it could prove to become a significant advantage. Maybe we could stand toe to toe with the Faceless. Imagine that."
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #718 on: December 03, 2023, 05:01:28 am »
You are really enjoying all of this, aren't you?
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #719 on: December 06, 2023, 04:47:36 am »
making the operation
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