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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #720 on: December 06, 2023, 10:00:33 pm »
unnecessary second dot in Ferryman Acorn dialogue
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #721 on: December 06, 2023, 10:03:29 pm »
missing space between "irrelevant" and "He looks at the Acorn"

missing space between "after all" and "I'll look into"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #722 on: December 07, 2023, 04:24:57 pm »
Tchortist Acolyte dialogue has 'Judator' instead of 'Judicator'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #723 on: December 07, 2023, 04:59:53 pm »
Double space between "going" and "to" in the first sentence
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #724 on: December 11, 2023, 11:40:50 am »
"They are a solid community, at became after their problems with the Omegas." - this sentence doesn't make sense
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #725 on: December 11, 2023, 07:02:34 pm »
"You did excellent. There's only one thing left for me to do: You did so much for us, helped us get rid of the bugs and the Rathound King as well, therefore making our lives much easier. First, take this. ::Hands you 300 charons.::This is not your only reward, of course. You are one of us now. Come see me when you have the time and I'll teach you a few things that a *hunter* like you might find useful. Not many get the opportunity."

Missing space between "::Hands you 300 charons.::" and "This"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #726 on: December 12, 2023, 08:39:34 am »
missing space between "alive...!" and "D-docks"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #727 on: December 12, 2023, 10:33:18 am »
Dan suddenly has no dialogue at the end of convo if Gorsky died
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #728 on: December 12, 2023, 04:27:20 pm »
"::She gives you a long look.:: Yes...::After a moment of hesitation she pulls in the makeshift stool behind her and sits on it, resting her hands in her lap.:: Oh... ::Then she looks at you.::

Dreams, they are a means of communication. It is our inner self trying to tells us the truths we don't accept or understand. These truths come in form of ideas, images, emotions and intuitions, because that is the language the inner self speaks, and in our foolishness we often dismiss them because they depart from what we think is real; but dreams do not distort reality - they reveal it. They reveal it."

Missing space between "Yes..." and "::After a moment"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #729 on: December 12, 2023, 07:32:55 pm »
complanies
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #730 on: December 13, 2023, 12:48:40 pm »
Sidle to the other side
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #731 on: December 15, 2023, 07:56:00 pm »
You ugly,*repulsive*, *pathetic* excuse for a human being! I'll rip your heart out if you even think about touchin' me with your filthy fingers!

ARGH! ::She kicks her cell's door with all her might but to no effect.::

missing space between ugly and repulsive
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #732 on: December 19, 2023, 05:11:52 pm »
"reduces percetion by 1" (noticed in Blinding Poison effect description on Trident)

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #733 on: December 19, 2023, 07:57:29 pm »
"We'd be much safer from those Eel clods. Shame it's got trouble sailin' horizontally, from what I heard. Real shame.::He turns toward Todd, who just made himself comfortable in the sofa.::

Hey, whacha doin'? Whatcha *doin'*? There's two more ammo crates to go through. C'mon, c'mon, no deucin' till the job's done."

Missing space between 'space' and 'He turns'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #734 on: December 26, 2023, 03:33:53 pm »
"Yer one of us, banga.::He takes a gulp of cold mushroom brew.:: Let's talk..."

missing space between 'banga' and 'He takes'; Cruzer dialogue
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