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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« on: December 20, 2015, 10:18:59 am »
What is

"Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"

supposed to mean anyway? The last half of this sentence doesnt make any sense to me...

Shouldnt it be more something like this:

"Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor... unlike in leather armor" ?

That's not the whole sentence, of course. I'm just including the portions that should be changed.

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Bugs / Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« on: December 20, 2015, 07:31:48 am »
"Armor" is an irregular plural in English. It doesn't take an "s", so the plural of armor is just armor.

In the tutorial...

"Hey Vencel, what weapon should I use against bots?"

1. And what about armors?
Change to "what about armor"

"Well armors are good for ya..."
Change to "well armor is good for ya..."


Also, this is weird phrasing...

"Don't expect to be very mobile in a metal armor ... a leather armor".

No need for the article there.
Change to "Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"

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