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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #345 on: November 30, 2019, 04:26:45 am »
Azif, when you first enter oculus
"This is Oculus, the eye of underrail, yes.  All important information find their way here sooner or later."
should be "information finds it's way"

Abrams
"Free drones movement has been around for a long up north"
a long time up north

Abrams, about the faceless
"...perpetuate tell tales"
should be "tall tales" I think

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #346 on: December 05, 2019, 08:06:27 am »
Captain Grimm when you ask him about his creepy statue: "I find that it when I am in certain moods", unnecessary "it"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #347 on: December 08, 2019, 06:31:01 am »
Razor, when he finally tells you what happened to his eye, in the paragraph that starts with "It was immediately obvious that the cap'n was a jettin' swordsman", at some point says "legitimatelly" which should be "legitimately"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #348 on: December 15, 2019, 06:48:43 pm »
Iris' dialogue should probably be reword to something like:

You thought it (the famine) was due to bad management from the apex technocrats, as well as to other recent environmental and geopolitical changes. Your predictions for the future of Biocorp and Underrail were negative in general, this only further attributing to it.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #349 on: December 18, 2019, 05:16:32 pm »
Pirates questline, when you bring Grim the acorn and go see the professor, not long into the conversation Grimm says:
"I admit, I was surprised, if a bit disappointed by it after you've told me."
should be "after all you've" I think

Also, shortly after this he tells D'flinga to leave, and he does in the dialogue, but he's still there on the screen during the conversation.

Later on, he says:
"As my...armies grew, so could I was given a chance to employ the other skills I was taught."
I'm not sure what he's trying to say there, but something is wrong. 
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #350 on: December 23, 2019, 01:19:21 am »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #351 on: January 12, 2020, 01:15:06 am »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #352 on: January 17, 2020, 09:27:57 am »
Fixed everything. Keep 'em coming.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #353 on: February 10, 2020, 04:51:21 am »


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #354 on: March 10, 2020, 01:35:19 am »
In the early quest with the mystery body in the medical ward the body was a man's, but one of the doctor's lines of dialogue referred to it as "her".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #355 on: March 25, 2020, 07:27:29 am »
Jetski turbo; the description states "Instantly consume 50 vehicle eneregy"

"energy"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #356 on: April 19, 2020, 08:02:26 pm »
Talking to the rathound king, the intimidate check at the beginning still says "you have another think coming".  Unless it's a joke I don't get, it should be "thing"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #357 on: April 27, 2020, 09:27:19 pm »
If you talk to Leonie at Foundry and ask her what she sells, at the end of the paragraph she says "the selection is large, so take your pick.  Take, not break.  Local lingo."

Is she supposed to say "..., so break your pick.  Take, not break." ?
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #358 on: April 29, 2020, 02:27:12 am »
Jack Quicksilver, in core city, if you say you want to know more about his organization, will say "Tough.  Abram or I would have told you by now more if we though you should know at this point in time."  "though" should be "thought" 
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #359 on: May 02, 2020, 04:46:47 pm »
Ola, if you ask him about JKK, will talk about how he likes the work, "Expect for when I'm sent to..." should be "Except"
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