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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #345 on: August 15, 2020, 02:52:00 am »
In the ceto logs, when the navy is inspecting the collapsed entrance to the black sea, they talk about using drones to scout past the collapse, and mention "areal" vehicles which I assume is supposed to be "aerial"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #346 on: August 15, 2020, 08:24:35 pm »


Seems like it should be Cruzer saying this.



Right after returning to grim after the second raid.



Should be "jetters" I think, unless its just how he talks
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #347 on: August 15, 2020, 09:23:30 pm »


Says this when you mention you did work for the eels, even if you never talked to anybody from aegis. 
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #348 on: August 16, 2020, 12:48:35 am »


Should be "gravelly" I think
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #349 on: August 21, 2020, 09:54:15 am »
When speaking to Doctor Stevenson in the Foundry the green text reads:

"It is as if the coat reflects its owner, for he too invokes a clear image of someone who used to be young and full of spirit but has now shriveling up as the hardships of life..."

Should probably be "is" or "has shrivelled".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #350 on: August 21, 2020, 10:38:13 am »
When speaking to Dan in the Foundry the green text reads:

"...picks up his rifle which was also placed against the fance and offers..."

Should probably be "fence".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #351 on: September 01, 2020, 01:46:34 am »


"thatF"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #352 on: September 06, 2020, 10:25:27 pm »

"expect" should be "except"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #353 on: September 07, 2020, 08:05:38 pm »


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #354 on: September 09, 2020, 04:16:32 am »


"dare"

and "my" x5, though that's probably intentional
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #355 on: September 11, 2020, 05:52:01 pm »
Where the cursor is. ;)

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #356 on: January 04, 2021, 08:14:41 am »
After handling the Beast, Olivia in the Foundry mine says "helped helped", she should only be saying it once.



When speaking to some Faceless not far West of Foundry, one sentence doesn't have a space after it. My cursor is pointing at the spot (copying Leilu's style here, lol).



Another space missing after a sentence. This one happens quite early in the game, when speaking to Lucas about Harland.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #357 on: March 03, 2021, 10:46:21 pm »


"and"

and then she has that blank dialogue at the end
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #358 on: March 12, 2021, 10:34:54 pm »
When speaking to Olivia at the Foundry mines after killing the Beast her response to "How do you feel now that the mine has reopened?" reads:

"[...]I heard you helped helped in some way[...]"




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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #359 on: March 13, 2021, 05:01:45 pm »

"are finished"
"is holding"
"my ass off with"
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