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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #375 on: June 28, 2020, 09:39:49 pm »
3/5

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #376 on: June 28, 2020, 09:41:03 pm »
4/5

This one may be intentional

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #377 on: June 28, 2020, 09:42:38 pm »
5/5

This is just one huge run-on sentence. Needs to be cleaned up and refined.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #378 on: June 29, 2020, 02:12:21 pm »
Trinket, not trinker.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #379 on: July 04, 2020, 03:38:40 pm »
Queue should be instead of stare?

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #380 on: July 08, 2020, 01:54:41 am »
The description for the old diploma says "faded and thorn", I presume it's meant to say torn.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #381 on: July 08, 2020, 01:07:21 pm »
Didnt snag a screenshot, but for the "dead mushroom cove scavenger" quest if the scavenger is female, Pascal will correctly refer to her as "her". If you then go and inspect the body, the text descriptions refer to her as him.

There was also one on an Ending slide, I'll have to get a screenshot of it later.
« Last Edit: July 08, 2020, 01:09:32 pm by Elite »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #382 on: July 20, 2020, 02:16:00 am »
On Luka's dialog about Dreadnoughts

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #383 on: July 21, 2020, 05:56:24 pm »
Psycho-neural reconstructive agent

"that helps should help with"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #384 on: July 21, 2020, 07:24:16 pm »
Dialogue with Preatorian soldier on Matriuss's boat:
"could be reached by hand" - dot missing
"root of it's problems" - 'its'
"it's display starts" - 'its'
"required for it's mass production" - 'its'
"Sure, it that would help" - 'if'
"by it's own mechanism" - 'its'

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #385 on: July 22, 2020, 09:38:38 pm »
I don't know where in the game it is, but the "crubled rocks" should be "crumbled"

edit:  depot A west
« Last Edit: July 24, 2020, 03:51:30 pm by harperfan7 »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #386 on: July 24, 2020, 08:45:41 pm »
Talking to the foundry sheriff after killing evelyn in the bunker "I had to kill her in self defence!" should be "defense"

also, the cactus plant in her bunker overlaps the player; figured that wasn't worth a thread to report
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #387 on: July 28, 2020, 10:09:08 am »
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Furthermore, Roche points out that the structures of the brain in which innervation that allows psionic activity takes place were never studied in such depth.

Should be to take place.

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Even though we know plenty about how brain as a whole works, ...

Should be how the brain.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #388 on: July 28, 2020, 10:12:01 am »
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We assume it was designed to prevent the infants from unwittingly harming themselves or those around them.

Should be just infants. Saying "the infants" makes it sound like we're talking about something that isn't human.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #389 on: July 28, 2020, 10:18:04 am »
A lot of the dialogue involving the multiple variations of the mushroom scavenger questline has both double spaces and lack of spaces in a lot of lines. As well as some gender confusion with the victim being referred to as both he and she on some occasions, if I recall correctly. I think doing a once-over might be in order for all lines used in this quest.
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