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harperfan7

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #390 on: July 30, 2020, 10:40:17 pm »
BArm nexus 1700 engine

"difficuly" of installation
missing the "t"
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« Reply #391 on: July 31, 2020, 01:35:22 am »
When talking to archibald knight about the acid hunters, before you hunt them down, the paragraph that starts with "He sighs." says this around the middle of the paragraph "I want find out what in bloody hell...", it should be "I want to find out what in the bloody hell"
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« Reply #392 on: July 31, 2020, 05:34:01 am »
Can't tell if this one is a mistake. His dudes don't seem to be religious so this "faith" was possibly meant to be "fate".

From the new waterways quest completed journal text:

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #393 on: July 31, 2020, 09:20:10 am »
Pretty sure this is a new waterway event. Near Core City. u instead of you.


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #394 on: August 01, 2020, 04:36:43 pm »
When greeting Matriuss, one of the options is "My pleasure aswel, sir."  Unless that's an advatongue joke, it should be "as well"

Next paragraph, he says "Be as it may", should be "Be that as it may"

Next paragraph, "The device you hold a custom...", forgot the "is"
also, he says "custom mode digital tracker", should that be "custom made"?

later, "Indeed you have proven capable of  repairing sofisticated devices", there is an extra space between "of" and "repairing", and "sofisticated" should be "sophisticated"
"If you deliever, I will reward you handsomely", should be "deliver"

In the last paragraph, he says "bind my time", should be "bide my time", I think.

If you ask him about himself, "My hunders of cases", should be "hundreds"
two paragraphs later, "But my prevoious experiences", should be "previous"

Asking about the task:
"I want you to go to my office building on the nothen side of the residential area", should be "northern"

When you return, your third dialogue option is "Hmm, Iet me check", should be 'let"

The next paragraph "has the access to that place" could just be "has access to that place",
and the next line "In addition, I'll give you few special items", should be "you a few"
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« Reply #395 on: August 01, 2020, 08:50:51 pm »
The ruined jetski next to the jump in the sharp rocks says "...suffered a cruel faith for sure", should be "fate" I think

in the next area, after the jump, in the NW corner there is a shack with a toilet with flavor text about how the smell is unbearable, says "mushroom sallad", should be 'salad".

same area, using an advanced electric repair kit on the crane, the green text says "toolking" instead of "toolkit"
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« Reply #396 on: August 02, 2020, 12:35:01 am »


"--my pals and me would take take on anything!" is the double 'take' intentional?
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #397 on: August 02, 2020, 02:25:34 am »


operation shouldn't have a g at the end
occurred should have two r's
"a specific code" or "specific codes"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #398 on: August 02, 2020, 08:10:14 am »


I am asking to join the gauntlet for the first time in Core City Arena. Should be "then".

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« Reply #399 on: August 02, 2020, 02:28:46 pm »
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« Reply #400 on: August 02, 2020, 04:27:07 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #401 on: August 02, 2020, 10:53:42 pm »
The map in the 2nd area of the waterway facility:

"Fainted out headline" should be "Faded" I think

"Different marker colors and handwritings were emplyed" should be "employed"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #402 on: August 03, 2020, 06:03:13 am »


Spacing and 'place' should be 'places' :^)

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #403 on: August 03, 2020, 06:29:34 am »


That is grammatically wrong. I get what he's trying to say, but it doesn't make sense grammatically wise with the rest of the sentence.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #404 on: August 03, 2020, 06:33:24 am »


Misspelling.