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DS_Vlad

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #510 on: November 16, 2021, 06:24:02 am »
Vlatko when you tell him the borer was from Foundry: Fascinating! I've never seen anything like it, to be perfectly honest. Sophia seems very pleased; thank you, it is... very difficult to amuse her. Still, I'll have to keep an eye on the... creature, just in case.

Once again Sophie is named Sophia here, at this point I'm not sure if it's unintentional or not

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #511 on: November 16, 2021, 12:10:41 pm »
Asking Terry at Drag n Drop if the almighty invictus can get in

::As he registers the word, Invictus, his eyes start to rapidly inspect your entire body. His jaw starts to drop and his entire body starts to quiver as he realizes he is talking to an actual Invictus. ::

W-what, can't be. It's you. Damn, I'm the biggest arena fan! ::His previous cold stare is completly absent and you feel like as if you are talking to a completely different person.::

2nd bit has a couple errors, completely is missing an e and like/as if are redundant

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #512 on: November 22, 2021, 04:08:32 pm »
'googles' instead of 'goggles'.
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::There's a heavy toolbox filled with bolts and screws, right next to the device he's working on, By grabbing it on its two handles, you lift it up quietly and immediately start moving it above his palm. As soon as you feel the tips of the fingers touching the bottom of the box, you release it. Suddenly his hand drops down, nearly getting squashed between the kit and the table. In ankle alone, he manages to stabilize the fall, preventing any injury in process. This causes him to drop the work, now fully focused on lowering the box on the table safely.:: Is this a new one you came up with to derail my work? I'll give it to you, no one did that to me before. Hmph, but I still got it, been through many of those in my time. Thought I was the only one around here able to move that thing like that. ::Sweat runs rampant on his face, heat mist clouding the glass of his googles. He lifts them up to get a better view of you. By the expression of his face, he's taken back a little.:: Oh, umm, have we met? Name's Brer, and I'm in charge of keeping the track rolling.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #513 on: December 03, 2021, 12:00:18 pm »
When talking to the Exiled Mutie Guard at the entrance to the Mutie Refuge in the Black Sea as a female playable character, the dialogue still refers to the player character as 'he' in option 3: "What does one need to do to show that he comes with good intentions?"
« Last Edit: January 18, 2022, 05:10:26 am by WeiJayTan »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #514 on: December 04, 2021, 09:45:15 am »
"it's influence" instead of "its influence" in Sleight of the Night's description.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #515 on: December 25, 2021, 02:47:23 am »
1- Option 2,
"Sir, I need to do some things outside of the Black Sea. Is there someone who can quickly drive me back and forth?"

2-
"Inside you're gonna find a trap door that'll lead you to "the wormhole". And "the wormhole" will lead you into Depot A. And when you're done with your business, boy/girl, come see me again. I might have some more work for you."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #516 on: January 17, 2022, 10:54:26 am »
1- Allow me to explain what psionic potential really is. It's a [...]

2- [...] The nails - where still present - are mostly broken, with bits of flesh and bloodied hair underneath them.
[It's either 'where they are still present', or 'while still present'.]

3- I found out what the Faceless are looking for. It's some sort of an electronic device that's currently in the hands of Cornell and the Acid Hunters.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #517 on: January 22, 2022, 11:33:53 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #518 on: January 28, 2022, 06:14:27 am »


"...have the guts..."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #519 on: January 29, 2022, 03:04:52 am »


"...these are not..." > "...this is not..."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #520 on: January 30, 2022, 03:08:58 pm »
1- [...] security, catching beasts and transporting them to the Arena... [...]

And you, you fit that description. You've served JKK well so far, and now is the time to give you your reward.

2- [...] Remember when I told you back then that we were suspicious that she was doing some funny business? Well, she was! [...]

3- [...] I think it would be better to leave you home next time. [...]
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #521 on: January 31, 2022, 12:49:23 am »


Ground*

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #522 on: January 31, 2022, 03:03:51 pm »


finely*

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #523 on: February 02, 2022, 11:37:51 am »
I think it was supposed to be "her."
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #524 on: February 02, 2022, 04:26:26 pm »


you've