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[fubaxqr]

Matriuss

Have you made your decission, Enforcer?

Have you made your decission, Senior Enforcer?

decission -> decision

My sincerest appologies Senior Enforcer. I'm surprised by your arrival here, I'm sure I havent ordered any additional personel out here. Be that as it may though, your presence here seems to have brought a great result. He nods.

appologies -> apologies,
havent -> haven't
personel -> personnel

The device you held is a custom made digital news tracker. It was developed by Coretech and as far as I know it is only available per personal request. The technology and the goods required for its mass production are just simply not yet available for Core City. I'm someone who lives and thrives off of all available information and as such this device was a pefect match for me. He smirks.

pefect -> perfect

Your directive strikes him like a lightning. Several seconds pass by as he tries to absorb what he just heard. That's illicit. You cannot just break the contract I've signed with the Preatorians! I've already paid for all of this. His shock turns into a sudden anger. This is a huge breach of trust! You can't just show up like that and cancel everything! Argh! I can't believe that this is happening to me! He slams the desk.

Preatorians -> Praetorians

Before you leave. :He pauses as he pulls out a keycard from of his well-hidden coin pouch. The wallet itself is made from unusual synthetic material, matching his suit perfectly. Take this keycard. It will allow you the access to the building itself. The device should be located in main storage room on the storage floor. Once there, you will have to figure out on your own how to get inside the said room. Security systems should ignore your pressence if you have this keycard in your possession. I will be eagerly awaiting for your return. He hands you over the keycard.

pressence -> presence

Let us not play like this in future, $(#sir/miss). This is a very precious item of mine and in this situation is has quite a sagnificant value to me. Now leave.

sagnificant -> significant

Fine, fine! All I can afford right now is 450 charons. Im completely isolated over here and I'm not getting back to shores until I recieve a confirmation from a reliable source that it's absolutely safe out there.

Im -> I'm
recieve -> receive


Player response

My pressence here was issued by the Praetorian high command. As a Senior Enforcer, I'm here to inform you that I will be recalling all the guards and by that extent, we are aborting this entire escort mission, effective immediately.

pressence -> presence

Okay, here yo go.

you

[harperfan7]

When talking to Knight about the acid hunters:

::He sighs.:: I want you to find them and bring them to me. I want to find out what happened. Find these Acid Hunters and... Cornell. If he is the killer, I want his head brought to me. But if he is not, I want find out what in bloody hell happened there and who pulled the trigger that blew my Edmund's brains all over the pavement!

"I want find out what in bloody"
should be "I want to find out what the bloody" or "I want to find out what in the bloody"
could also say "I want you to"

[fubaxqr]

Amelia:

So how did you manage to abtain the stolen figurine from the Lunatics, hmm?

abtain -> obtain

[fubaxqr]

GMS compound
borrowers -> burrowers

[PaposikG6]

"Hundered" should be "hundred"

[PaposikG6]

Sec-trooper misgenders herself

[DS_Vlad]

1st pic:
- Add 'The' before 'nauseating'
- Remove 'a' before 'literal sewage'
- 'a livable area' may be better as 'a living space'

2nd pic:
- Remove the comma between 'decrepit mugger look' and 'is his clenched right fist'

3rd pic:
- 'disinsection' is a typo, should be 'disinfection'
- The persuasion check has the player speak in 3rd person - should say "It's in neither of our interests" rather than "It's in neither's interest"
- The intimidation check is technically correct but the wording makes it seem like someone making fun of archaic English literature

[DS_Vlad]

1st pic:
- The last option should say 'the face of another' instead of 'a face of another'

2nd pic:
- It is strange to use 'rotates around' for living things, it would be better as 'turns'
- "subsistence here for the likes of you, one could only dream of." Considering the usage of caveat in the next line I think he's suggesting there are valuables here and warning the player to back off. If this is just Phreak's way of talking then 'subsistence' should at least start with a capital S, otherwise I would change the line to something more easily understood like "This place is the scavenging opportunity of your dreams."
- Option 4 has a typo 'attraced' should be 'attracted'
- Option 5 should say "you've" instead of 'you'

3rd pic:
- Option 1 should say 'either' instead of 'neither'

[DS_Vlad]

1st Pic:
- 'Out of a sudden' should be 'All of a sudden' or 'Out of nowhere'
- "Y'all" might just be Phreak speak but for anyone who has heard the slang in real life "Is Yapping y'all" do these days?" sounds completely wrong, I would change it to "Is yapping all you people do these days?"
- Option 1 sounds more like sarcastic dismissal than genuine shock, I suggest replacing the period with an exclamation point
- Option 2 'tags along' is odd terminology, I have only ever heard it used in reference to travelling somewhere together, 'reciprocates' or 'joins in' would make more sense here

2nd pic:
- Add 'here' after 'burst in'
- Add a comma after 'interrogate me'
- I have no idea what the second half of this sentence is supposed to convey and I'm not sure if that's intentional or not

3rd pic:
- This could also use a rewrite, though I'm not sure what it's trying to say

[DS_Vlad]

1st pic:
- More Phreak speak, a more understandable line would be "Do I look like I need medical assistance?"
- Option 3 "could've stumbled onto the ground" is unnecessarily long phrasing, "could've taken a tumble" or "could've fallen over" or just "could've collapsed" would all be better

2nd pic:
- Remove the 'a' before 'deep thought'
- 'non existent' should be 'nonexistent'

3rd pic:
- 'tangled with' should be 'tangled up in' or 'dealing with' unless the goal is to have Phreak be as incomprehensible as possible
- Option 2 is also incomprehensible

[DS_Vlad]

1st pic:
- Remove 'of' before 'meaningless'

2nd pic:
- change 'ran' to 'run'
- change ' to make' to 'of making'

[DS_Vlad]

talking to Marcos after killing the beast

missing 'can' between 'as you' and 'probably tell'

[fubaxqr]

Missing space

[DS_Vlad]

the last word 'though' is redundant

[DS_Vlad]

'discharge' should say 'discharges'