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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #675 on: November 06, 2022, 05:09:34 am »
typo in the second jkk mission where you have to meet ola in the sewers. previous dialogue option was about asking him to leave behind a trail of bread crumbs. "The" should be "They"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #676 on: November 08, 2022, 04:43:57 pm »
Anticolagulant newest ability has error in the description and it says '2 turns turns' instead of '2 turns' and is missing info that it applies 10 stacks of anticolagulant to a weapon.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #677 on: November 08, 2022, 05:50:23 pm »
Yahota dialogue about Briggs - I think the gap between text is a bit too large here
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #678 on: November 08, 2022, 06:00:03 pm »
Harmost dialogue - should be 'now i know' rather than 'know i know'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #679 on: December 14, 2022, 11:54:54 am »
Sidle to the other side
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #680 on: January 01, 2023, 03:02:12 pm »
Formatting in dialogue with Zack in Camera Problems quest is incorrect
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #681 on: January 30, 2023, 01:48:30 pm »
Many spelling/grammar issues in Phreak's questline. It definitely stands out compared to the rest of Underrail's excellent dialogue.

Some highlights from the first conversation:
- "He calms his beard"
- "The sorrow on his face faints"
- "the same thought buzzes my mind"
- "prefered"                         -> preferred
- "beggining"                       -> beginning
- "a literal sewage"               -> literal sewage
- "an vigorous old man"        -> a vigorous old man
- "much more resembles"     -> more closely resembles
- "out of place furniture"       -> out-of-place furniture
- "you've picked him up"       -> you heard him
- "he once again mentioned" -> he mentioned
- "... maybe, you could be an exception to that rule." His rule is not always mentioned
- Unnecessary prepositions like "Firstly"
- Many, many commas lol
- Run-on sentences
- Hanging spaces and double-spaces between some words
- Tone varies wildly throughout the conversation

Longer examples with fixes:
"... What stands apart from the usual decrepit mugger look, is his clenched right fist, or rather, the glove he's wearing. ..." ->

The old man steps towards you. His decrepit silhouette glows in the pulsing blue light of his clenched right fist. Wires coil from the joints of his fingers up his arm, disappearing into the sleeve of his ragged overcoat.

"This predicament is completely avoidable. It's in neither's interest to escalate this non-existing conflict any further. On the other hand, I'm much more interested in having a conversation. After all, we should act like humans, not insects." ->

This predicament is completely avoidable; I'm much more interested in having a conversation. We're people, not insects.

If possible, it might be worth just running a Microsoft Word spelling/grammar-check on his whole dialogue tree rather than hunting for individual changes.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #682 on: February 16, 2023, 01:46:21 pm »


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #683 on: May 10, 2023, 01:01:50 pm »
Missing space between 'I'll stay here.' and the next sentence.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #684 on: May 30, 2023, 03:37:32 am »
The protectorate marine armor says it has a "tactical west"; should be "vest"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #685 on: June 05, 2023, 01:54:30 pm »
"no. matter. what!" at the end looks odd, I think the dots should be removed between these words
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #686 on: June 28, 2023, 12:46:24 am »
Kaya:

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It would seem that this is the woman, mentioned by the person you've talked to on the other side of the cave called: Kaya. From time to time, the hand which she's using to hold the shotgun, jitters slightly. It is obvious to you that she is drained completly, as her grip on the gun is weak.

completly -> completely


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Walking up the stairs, your pressence briefly interupts an ongoing conversation. However as you keep approaching, they continue where they've left off.

There's no way we're going back in there again. The place was a bloody nightmare, I'm telling you. Both of them turn towards you, and for a moment, the rigmaster seems surprised to see you.

pressence -> presence
interupts -> interrupts

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Jetters? She raises her weapon. I... I can't belive it. Soon after she lowers her shotgun as her hands start shaking. Leave me be. She points to the exit of the cave.

belive -> believe


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Darling and I shared simmilar fates. Both of our families are gone now.

simmilar -> similar


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In the end he was regretfull for everything that has transpired here. I didn't catch much more than that.

regretfull -> regretful

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #687 on: June 30, 2023, 03:50:33 pm »
Matriuss

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Have you made your decission, Enforcer?
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Have you made your decission, Senior Enforcer?

decission -> decision

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My sincerest appologies Senior Enforcer. I'm surprised by your arrival here, I'm sure I havent ordered any additional personel out here. Be that as it may though, your presence here seems to have brought a great result. He nods.


appologies -> apologies,
havent -> haven't
personel -> personnel

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The device you held is a custom made digital news tracker. It was developed by Coretech and as far as I know it is only available per personal request. The technology and the goods required for its mass production are just simply not yet available for Core City. I'm someone who lives and thrives off of all available information and as such this device was a pefect match for me. He smirks.

pefect -> perfect

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Your directive strikes him like a lightning. Several seconds pass by as he tries to absorb what he just heard. That's illicit. You cannot just break the contract I've signed with the Preatorians! I've already paid for all of this. His shock turns into a sudden anger. This is a huge breach of trust! You can't just show up like that and cancel everything! Argh! I can't believe that this is happening to me! He slams the desk.

Preatorians -> Praetorians

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Before you leave. :He pauses as he pulls out a keycard from of his well-hidden coin pouch. The wallet itself is made from unusual synthetic material, matching his suit perfectly. Take this keycard. It will allow you the access to the building itself. The device should be located in main storage room on the storage floor. Once there, you will have to figure out on your own how to get inside the said room. Security systems should ignore your pressence if you have this keycard in your possession. I will be eagerly awaiting for your return. He hands you over the keycard.

pressence -> presence

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Let us not play like this in future, $(#sir/miss). This is a very precious item of mine and in this situation is has quite a sagnificant value to me. Now leave.

sagnificant -> significant

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Fine, fine! All I can afford right now is 450 charons. Im completely isolated over here and I'm not getting back to shores until I recieve a confirmation from a reliable source that it's absolutely safe out there.

Im -> I'm
recieve -> receive


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My pressence here was issued by the Praetorian high command. As a Senior Enforcer, I'm here to inform you that I will be recalling all the guards and by that extent, we are aborting this entire escort mission, effective immediately.

pressence -> presence

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Okay, here yo go.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #688 on: July 01, 2023, 10:47:56 pm »
When talking to Knight about the acid hunters:

::He sighs.:: I want you to find them and bring them to me. I want to find out what happened. Find these Acid Hunters and... Cornell. If he is the killer, I want his head brought to me. But if he is not, I want find out what in bloody hell happened there and who pulled the trigger that blew my Edmund's brains all over the pavement!

"I want find out what in bloody"
should be "I want to find out what the bloody" or "I want to find out what in the bloody"
could also say "I want you to"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #689 on: July 06, 2023, 01:02:27 pm »
Amelia:

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So how did you manage to abtain the stolen figurine from the Lunatics, hmm?
abtain -> obtain