Waterways facility, New Home map image there's a typo
From the same dialogue:
In the first sentence, the word "fainted" should be "faded," and a title is written "at the top" of something rather than "on top."
"Fainted out headline "New home" is featured on top of the map" -> "
A faded headline
, "New home
," is featured
at the top of the map"
The second sentence is a little awkward. Also, "converge" already means to come together at the same spot.
"Converging lines seemingly from all directions, come together at the same spot, marked with large red circle." ->
Seemingly countless lines converge from all directions to a spot marked with a large red circle.
