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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #630 on: July 09, 2022, 06:51:34 pm »
Antanatta uses male pronouns when using items but uses female portrait
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #631 on: July 13, 2022, 02:54:58 am »
Images are from Harland at the end of his camera quest:


First image:

"I found a some people there..."

Second image:

Should be "There is a lump in his throat" - it sounds unnatural to say "he swallows a lump in his throat"
"But It's all been taken care of. There's nothing to worry about."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #632 on: July 13, 2022, 02:56:14 am »
More Harland camera quest:


Third image:

"Sentries" is misspelled. Also, "Oooooh" isn't exactly wrong but it sounds very strange.

Fourth image:

"You deserved it" - should be deserve, present tense

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #633 on: July 19, 2022, 12:05:25 pm »
Some pirate dialogue is bugged
1. Captain Grim talk after giving him Todd: He says same sentence twice
2. Calamity talk after beating Flinger: text is not formatted correctly and the sentence is split after 'From'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #634 on: July 23, 2022, 08:44:37 am »
Waterways facility, New Home map image there's a typo
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #635 on: July 24, 2022, 04:55:44 pm »
A couple of spacing errors in some sad aegis dialogue
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #636 on: July 26, 2022, 01:35:12 am »
Typo in Booth's story: 'opnened up' should be 'opened up'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #637 on: July 29, 2022, 07:39:16 pm »
Waterways facility, New Home map image there's a typo


From the same dialogue:

In the first sentence, the word "fainted" should be "faded," and a title is written "at the top" of something rather than "on top."

"Fainted out headline "New home" is featured on top of the map"  ->  "A faded headline, "New home," is featured at the top of the map"


The second sentence is a little awkward. Also, "converge" already means to come together at the same spot.

"Converging lines seemingly from all directions, come together at the same spot, marked with large red circle."  -> Seemingly countless lines converge from all directions to a spot marked with a large red circle.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #638 on: August 01, 2022, 08:59:57 am »
Wolo mushroom cove hunter event: sventy should be seventy
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #639 on: August 09, 2022, 09:21:59 pm »
Talk with Tappy, text is formatted incorrectly
Also i think word 'embarassed' is better used in this context than 'ashamed'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #640 on: August 13, 2022, 08:24:11 pm »
Stratford discussion about sewer mission: should be 'forget', not 'foget'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #641 on: August 15, 2022, 10:34:33 am »
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"Teast" instead of "test".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #642 on: August 15, 2022, 12:45:15 pm »
Eidein in the elevator.

"Descent" instead of "descend".
Descent is a noun, descend is a verb.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #643 on: August 18, 2022, 04:09:31 pm »
In description of the High Voltage Penetrator Core item.

"seperate" instead of "separate".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #644 on: August 20, 2022, 12:21:28 pm »
Coral:

"She puts her right head on her temple and closes her eyes."

change to

"She puts her right hand on her temple and closes her eyes."