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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #600 on: April 06, 2022, 08:03:32 pm »
Kimi's first dialogue sequence with the player in Junktown, the action text describing her replanting, says "Her stare is directed toward the plant, but is seems like her attention is not"

"is" should be "it".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #601 on: April 08, 2022, 09:34:04 am »
Phreak convo - bugged persuasion option
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« Reply #602 on: April 08, 2022, 12:49:10 pm »
Conversation with Archibald Knight, should be 'then', not 'they'
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« Reply #603 on: April 10, 2022, 11:18:56 am »
Doctor Savage convo during leaving the camp if you never gave him a cigarette - white and green text should be reversed
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« Reply #604 on: April 11, 2022, 12:15:29 pm »
Asking Tanner for too much money for acorn: 'you're your contribution in other ways' makes little sense, should be changed to something else like 'you'll be rewarded for your contribution in other ways' for example
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #605 on: April 13, 2022, 02:27:04 am »

Rogue space between "," and "he"


There needs to be a space between "," and "brother"


Features, not feautres


Versa, not verse


I, not I'm


I'm not exactly sure what's supposed to mean here


Competitor, not compeditor


Perform, not preform


I forgot the context of this but you can probably search for where it is mentioned


Its, not it's


Flotsurmir's, not Flotsurmir.


Rogue space between "you" and "cannot"


Were lots, not was lots


Space needed between "Tchort." and "Her"


Official, not offical


Seriously, not seriosuly. And there's a rogue space between "eight" and "wrenches"


Whether the plasma core's, not whether plasma core's


Needs a " ' " at the end of Technologies


Broken text


What must've been, not must've been

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #606 on: April 13, 2022, 03:50:04 am »

She says nothing when you ask for sailing directions and say "Nowhere"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #607 on: April 14, 2022, 03:41:43 am »

Conversation with Todd, extinct not exctinct

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« Reply #608 on: April 14, 2022, 03:53:26 am »

Conversation with Todd, maintained not maintainted

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #609 on: April 14, 2022, 03:54:30 am »

Conversation with Todd, user's not users

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #610 on: April 14, 2022, 04:02:20 am »

Conversation with Todd, there's an extra space at the beginning

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #611 on: April 14, 2022, 04:22:04 am »

Its, not it's

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #612 on: April 14, 2022, 04:25:55 am »

I think houses is a far better term than homes, I don't think I've heard of homes as a verb

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #613 on: April 14, 2022, 04:48:02 am »

Is the text meant to be bold?

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #614 on: April 14, 2022, 05:05:47 am »

Needs a space between "away." and "Anything"