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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #600 on: March 21, 2022, 06:41:12 pm »
There is small inconsistency regarding Acorn in dialogue with Professor:
Description of item says it is inscribed with ACoNR text, but when giving it to Oldfield, it reads that it is Acorn(from capital A to capital N)

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #601 on: March 27, 2022, 06:53:55 pm »
Dialogue with Kharon - should probably be 'Greatest', not Greanesst.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #602 on: March 28, 2022, 04:16:48 pm »
Intelligence check in dialogue with Geezer Ford should start with upper case letter

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #603 on: March 29, 2022, 12:15:25 pm »
Some dialogue in game that I think could use a little change.

[1] I think a better wording would be:
"Gene told me you are an Underrail Express train operator."
As it is consistent with how Gene had told the player.


[2] If I remember correctly, even after the player has been assigned by either the Preservation Forces or the Department of Physics to do some work in the West Wing, the only response the player has to end the conversation with after asking why the West Wing is dangerous, is:

"I'll go where it's safe. Goodbye, sister."

Could use some additional dialogue if the player has already been assigned to do some work in the West Wing.


[3] I found this part a little odd. Since this is the first time that the player has visited the Free Drones Base after being recruited, I think that the way Hutch would say it, would be:

[...] you'll run straight into Becket, our supplier. You can get a lot of good stuff from him, but more about that later. A bit further to the left is our medical office. [...]

[4] If I recall correctly, this is the first time that Todor Sallywatch's name is mentioned. But even without hearing his full name, when the player inquires about him to Everard, the player says: "About Todor Sallywatch..."

Mentioning Todor Sallywatch's full name in the spot shown in [4] should do the trick.
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« Reply #604 on: March 29, 2022, 12:26:59 pm »
[1] AND [2]:
Sorry to keep you waiting.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #605 on: March 29, 2022, 12:38:31 pm »
[1] up to the highest standards
[2] slowing
[3] extinct
[4] Double Bass
[5] three disjointed Subislander families
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« Reply #606 on: March 29, 2022, 01:10:21 pm »
[2] The things I hear from you have stopped sounding strange a long time ago; what is strange is that we've actually reached that point.
Regarding 'that point', I believe it is referring to 'the point that the player finds that the things Dude says have stopped sounding strange'.
[3] deeper into the mine
[4] greatly pleased by your performance so far to the point of arranging for you to become the owner of
[5] since his disappearance
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #607 on: April 01, 2022, 01:42:27 am »
Georgis places his hand on his heart and downs the drink

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #608 on: April 04, 2022, 10:50:50 am »
Computer logs at Caerus Residential  - Gunter Vasilica computer
In second conversation with Maria Hope there is a missing letter 't' in commitee.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #609 on: April 04, 2022, 02:17:42 pm »
1. Should be 'Distraught with fear'
2. Missing space between 'is' and 'east'

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #610 on: April 06, 2022, 09:38:38 am »
Katya dialogue about dreams: should be 'apparent', not 'aparent'

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #611 on: April 06, 2022, 08:03:32 pm »
Kimi's first dialogue sequence with the player in Junktown, the action text describing her replanting, says "Her stare is directed toward the plant, but is seems like her attention is not"

"is" should be "it".

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« Reply #612 on: April 08, 2022, 09:34:04 am »
Phreak convo - bugged persuasion option

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« Reply #613 on: April 08, 2022, 12:49:10 pm »
Conversation with Archibald Knight, should be 'then', not 'they'

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #614 on: April 10, 2022, 11:18:56 am »
Doctor Savage convo during leaving the camp if you never gave him a cigarette - white and green text should be reversed