Some dialogue in game that I think could use a little change.
[1] I think a better wording would be:
"Gene told me you are an Underrail Express train operator."
As it is consistent with how Gene had told the player.
[2] If I remember correctly, even after the player has been assigned by either the Preservation Forces or the Department of Physics to do some work in the West Wing, the only response the player has to end the conversation with after asking why the West Wing is dangerous, is:
"I'll go where it's safe. Goodbye, sister."
Could use some additional dialogue if the player has already been assigned to do some work in the West Wing.
[3] I found this part a little odd. Since this is the first time that the player has visited the Free Drones Base after being recruited, I think that the way Hutch would say it, would be:
[...] you'll run straight into Becket, our supplier. You can get a lot of good stuff from him, but more about that later. A bit further to the left is our medical office. [...]
[4] If I recall correctly, this is the first time that Todor Sallywatch's name is mentioned. But even without hearing his full name, when the player inquires about him to Everard, the player says: "About Todor Sallywatch..."
Mentioning Todor Sallywatch's full name in the spot shown in [4] should do the trick.