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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #540 on: February 04, 2022, 04:49:43 am »


"...I have disagreements with you..." or "...I disagree with you..."
or "to" between "I have" and "disagree"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #541 on: February 04, 2022, 07:26:37 am »
(1) [<Narrative> Herve mentions that he made a deal with the Protectorate some time ago, according to which they were to deliver Rail Crossing military supplies. But there is no mention of a train delivery.]

(2) [...] I'm... I'm sorry it turned out this way.

(3) [...] Okay, so the best way to reach South Railroad Outpost is by following the tracks south, which is exactly the same route that the train had to take to reach us. [...]

(4) Will measures character's mental determination to see to their actions regardless of various mental difficulties, such as pain, suggestion and overwhelming odds, as well as to force their will onto others and the environment. [...]
[Gender neutral description.]

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« Reply #542 on: February 04, 2022, 07:27:02 am »
(5) It's some sort of an electronic device that is currently in the possession of some guy named Cornell, leader of a gang called the Acid Hunters from Core City.

(6) [...] It is also known that much of the controversy that surrounded the 'Hollow Earth Incident' is related to this project.

(7) As the voice gets louder, it starts to make sense.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #543 on: February 05, 2022, 09:01:29 pm »
These are all from refurbishing dialogue. I didn't have all the guns, there may be more.

First one is the black arrow:  "needed", "I'll have need", "that and I'll"
Second one is the NF r90:  "thought", and the quality is 134; probably should be 135
Third on is the syg mpx: the "With" has a capitalized "I"
*eurobeat intensifies*

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #544 on: February 06, 2022, 01:06:09 am »
(1) You're up against Bull's Eye. [...]

(2) [...] I expected something far more sophisticated than this. [...]

(3) I feel this: The Praetorians are going to wipe the floor with the Faceless if they dare to try to move into the city. There's a lot of bad stuff I can say about Praetorian Security, but in these type of situations I have good faith in their enforcers' abilities.

(4) [...] I'm sure you don't care about the details - so I was ordered to go there and get it powered back online.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #545 on: February 06, 2022, 01:23:31 am »
(1) Check Sector 1 security status

(2) [...] But, if something seems broken, then our best bet is to try to find a replacement before anything else.

(3) [Conversation with Vivian] I'll meet you back at JKK after I get some rest; [...]

(4) [...] He disapproved of my career choice and... that's that, sadly.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #546 on: February 06, 2022, 05:24:29 pm »

Weird, not wierd

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« Reply #547 on: February 06, 2022, 11:04:41 pm »
(1) [...] Get it? Cause our last name is 'Young'... Never mind.
     [...] A sound of something metal hitting the ground is heard.

(2) [...] I mean, you and two other challengers, [...]

[3, Conversation with Jack Quicksilver in Core City] (player), I can't say much that will help you. [...]

(4) The strange thing about that place is that there was this room in there, [...]
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #548 on: February 07, 2022, 09:09:24 am »


The large green spores tingle your palm. Ready to take off at the slightest breeze, it is as if they have the will of their own. --> the should be a

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #549 on: February 08, 2022, 09:19:17 pm »

Dialogue with Phyllis, possess not possesses

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #550 on: February 08, 2022, 09:46:54 pm »

Dialogue with Synesthete, opportunity not opporunity

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #551 on: February 10, 2022, 03:28:28 am »

Conversation with Phreak, competent not competant

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #552 on: February 10, 2022, 04:33:37 pm »

Dialogue with Garry, brutality not brutallity

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #553 on: February 10, 2022, 10:13:22 pm »

Dialogue with Doctor Zilch, judgement not judgment

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #554 on: February 11, 2022, 01:18:17 am »


Improper/awkward phrasing. Following orders of magnitude, it would be "...hundreds of thousands, if not millions..." or, assuming the error is on the other side, "...thousands, if not tens of thousands..." etcetera.