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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #585 on: March 03, 2022, 03:11:36 pm »

Conversation with Ezra, the sentence is kind of mangled. Should remove "I ask"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #586 on: March 03, 2022, 03:26:04 pm »

Conversation with Garry, brutality not brutallity

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #587 on: March 09, 2022, 10:03:09 pm »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #588 on: March 09, 2022, 10:03:34 pm »

Conversation with Phreak, ranges not range

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #589 on: March 09, 2022, 10:14:38 pm »

Dialogue with Phreak, awry not avry

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #590 on: March 09, 2022, 10:15:26 pm »

Dialogue with Phreak, I've not Ive

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #591 on: March 09, 2022, 10:16:17 pm »

Dialogue with Phreak, "Competing gizmos" sounds a lot better than "Gizmos competing"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #592 on: March 14, 2022, 06:36:57 am »
[1] I felt like another patient...
[2] beautiful
[3] You can get more coins
[4] If these things are not out of here by tomorrow.
[5] Two thousand two hundred charons.
[6] It'll be delivered it as fast as possible.
[7] cause it makes no sense to me either
[8] made gave me a small headache
[9] someone's
[10] Punctuation
[11] professor's ear

Edit: Corrected [1]
« Last Edit: March 19, 2022, 07:15:27 pm by WeiJayTan »
“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #593 on: March 18, 2022, 01:15:31 pm »
[1] I hate it when I don't have stuff.
[2] SGS has two exits, one at the upper level and the other at the lower level. Therefore...
      No one saw him leave through any of the station's exits,
[3] Punctuation
[4] Questioning tone.
     So, does that sound acceptable to you?
[5] The Colonel's speech
     your ears discern
[6] worms
[7] Female player character
     the person she is bargaining for
[8] it is on it's way
[9] If I'm interpreting this correctly...
     Luben, just like most members with his clearance level, has an intradermal chip planted in his arm, so take this tracker;
[10] wouldn't
« Last Edit: March 22, 2022, 02:35:55 am by WeiJayTan »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #594 on: March 18, 2022, 01:36:51 pm »
[1] theirs
[2] technological
[3] Hand me my broken spear and I'll give you a tool worthy of a hunter.
[4] she closes her eyes and proceeds
     once again she's
     Leave me be, or face the fate of the rest of...
[5] Access
[6] Spacing.
[7] It's covered with...
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #595 on: March 19, 2022, 06:20:26 pm »
[1] I feel like another patient...
I think the past tense is correct in that instance, although the 'a' is indeed pointless here

There's a typo in convo with Luper: It should be 'He chucks the hacksaw away'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #596 on: March 20, 2022, 01:08:08 am »

Conversation with Abram, interrupted not interupted

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #597 on: March 20, 2022, 02:04:55 am »
[1] I feel like another patient...
I think the past tense is correct in that instance, although the 'a' is indeed pointless here



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“有趣之事皆是好事。” - Twitter Artist @ALumizky
”All interesting things are good things."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #598 on: March 21, 2022, 10:18:06 am »
Female Sec Trooper has dialogue line using the same pronoun as for male.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #599 on: March 21, 2022, 02:39:11 pm »
During Hopperdrome commentator says about x hopper:
"Did x is feeling bad?"
It should be "Is x feeling bad?"
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