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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #510 on: September 06, 2021, 01:56:57 am »
Should be Fate

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« Reply #511 on: October 12, 2021, 06:47:12 pm »
it says machine in biby instead of body

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« Reply #512 on: October 26, 2021, 11:16:39 pm »

'thank' should be 'thanks' in this situation.

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« Reply #513 on: October 28, 2021, 01:55:28 pm »
"refuge"
either "become suspicious of" or "begin questioning"
"manner"
unless Kharon is a title, it should be "at Kharon's"
"losses"
*eurobeat intensifies*

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #514 on: November 10, 2021, 02:29:13 pm »
Oskar, when asked about JKK:

If it wasn't for them, people all over the Underrail wouldn't be able to watch the Arena broadcasts, which would be retarded, let's face it. ArenaNow brings Arena to the people unfortunate enough to not being able to watch it live.

ArenaNow brings Arena to the people unfortunate enough to not being able to watch it live.
should be
ArenaNow brings Arena to the people unfortunate enough to be unable to watch it live.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #515 on: November 10, 2021, 09:45:46 pm »
Daniel Arda, when you ask how he lost his eye
"I was stupid, to be honest: I knew what was it like there,"

better wording: "I knew what it was like there,"

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« Reply #516 on: November 12, 2021, 03:54:39 am »
Camp Hathor guards

there's one too many t's in pity

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #517 on: November 13, 2021, 04:31:57 am »
asking Jon the Beautiful about Wit Nosek/Thallo:

"Thallo, Thallo... That sound kinda like,"

sound is just missing an s at the end

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« Reply #518 on: November 13, 2021, 04:34:32 am »
Sophie Talloski also introduces herself as Sophia when you ask where she lives:

"The Talloski Manor. ::She laughs.:: In case you didn't figure it out by now, I'm Sophia Talloski, daughter of Vlatko Talloski. I'm sure you've heard of us, unless you're a *real* zoner. ::She laughs.::"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #519 on: November 13, 2021, 08:11:27 pm »
Jon the Beautiful, when telling you about Joe Pacino

"Anyway, about Joe: Just head north of here and you'll should see a guard to the right, on a platform."

"you'll" used where "you" should be, or "should" can just be removed instead

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« Reply #520 on: November 16, 2021, 02:17:52 am »
The psionic mentor for motor cognitive transference is missing a space in its name

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« Reply #521 on: November 16, 2021, 06:24:02 am »
Vlatko when you tell him the borer was from Foundry: Fascinating! I've never seen anything like it, to be perfectly honest. Sophia seems very pleased; thank you, it is... very difficult to amuse her. Still, I'll have to keep an eye on the... creature, just in case.

Once again Sophie is named Sophia here, at this point I'm not sure if it's unintentional or not

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #522 on: November 16, 2021, 12:10:41 pm »
Asking Terry at Drag n Drop if the almighty invictus can get in

::As he registers the word, Invictus, his eyes start to rapidly inspect your entire body. His jaw starts to drop and his entire body starts to quiver as he realizes he is talking to an actual Invictus. ::

W-what, can't be. It's you. Damn, I'm the biggest arena fan! ::His previous cold stare is completly absent and you feel like as if you are talking to a completely different person.::

2nd bit has a couple errors, completely is missing an e and like/as if are redundant

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« Reply #523 on: November 22, 2021, 04:08:32 pm »
'googles' instead of 'goggles'.
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::There's a heavy toolbox filled with bolts and screws, right next to the device he's working on, By grabbing it on its two handles, you lift it up quietly and immediately start moving it above his palm. As soon as you feel the tips of the fingers touching the bottom of the box, you release it. Suddenly his hand drops down, nearly getting squashed between the kit and the table. In ankle alone, he manages to stabilize the fall, preventing any injury in process. This causes him to drop the work, now fully focused on lowering the box on the table safely.:: Is this a new one you came up with to derail my work? I'll give it to you, no one did that to me before. Hmph, but I still got it, been through many of those in my time. Thought I was the only one around here able to move that thing like that. ::Sweat runs rampant on his face, heat mist clouding the glass of his googles. He lifts them up to get a better view of you. By the expression of his face, he's taken back a little.:: Oh, umm, have we met? Name's Brer, and I'm in charge of keeping the track rolling.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #524 on: December 03, 2021, 12:00:18 pm »
When talking to the Exiled Mutie Guard at the entrance to the Mutie Refuge in the Black Sea as a female playable character, the dialogue still refers to the player character as 'he' in option 3: "What does one need to do to show that he comes with good intentions?"
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