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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #180 on: August 02, 2017, 10:33:30 pm »
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« Reply #181 on: August 02, 2017, 11:08:36 pm »
I previous line West told "less then five hundred", here he talk about 4 hundred.

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« Reply #182 on: August 03, 2017, 12:44:49 am »
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« Reply #183 on: August 03, 2017, 01:33:09 am »
Space is lost, or lost in space, whatever.

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« Reply #184 on: August 05, 2017, 12:26:22 pm »
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« Reply #185 on: August 05, 2017, 12:28:58 pm »
Bur-but?

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #186 on: August 05, 2017, 12:39:15 pm »
"Need really need" - one of two is excessive, or something like the hyphen or the dash was lost.

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« Reply #187 on: August 05, 2017, 12:44:44 pm »
The point at the end of the sentence missing.

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« Reply #188 on: August 05, 2017, 03:20:11 pm »
Looks like there should be lowercase letter?

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« Reply #189 on: September 27, 2017, 09:23:57 pm »
"Once we find him".
Peasanut might be not a typo, it is a Norman-gentleman after all.  :D
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« Reply #190 on: September 27, 2017, 09:27:53 pm »
First one might be my Engrussish or awkward construction, just in case.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #191 on: October 13, 2017, 09:06:12 pm »
The description for the AKX says it is "A reliable old world assault rifle with of modest appearance." I would suggest changing that to "...assault rifle of modest appearance". It would also be grammatically correct to say it is "with a modest appearance", but I personally prefer the former.
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« Reply #192 on: October 21, 2017, 09:51:50 pm »
I think I noticed a spelling error at the Gauntlet in the loudspeaker message you get at the exit from the burrower level. I think it was something like "not to the next level" where it was probably meant to be "on to the next level". Sorry to be so vague. The message went away before I could make notes or take a screenshot, and I didn't think to reload the autosave. And I don't have the patience to go through the Gauntlet multiple times until the random number generator falls into my favour.

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« Reply #193 on: October 23, 2017, 02:04:21 am »
When asking Eidein about Tchort after you have been invited into his office, he describes it as "a being worthy of fineste, beautiful, magnificent descriptions". I believe that should be "finest". "Finesse" wouldn't make sense in this context.

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« Reply #194 on: October 23, 2017, 07:40:31 am »
I think I noticed a spelling error at the Gauntlet in the loudspeaker message you get at the exit from the burrower level. I think it was something like "not to the next level" where it was probably meant to be "on to the next level". Sorry to be so vague. The message went away before I could make notes or take a screenshot, and I didn't think to reload the autosave. And I don't have the patience to go through the Gauntlet multiple times until the random number generator falls into my favour.

Found it. Fixed that and all other reported spelling/typos.