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Bruno

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #300 on: June 23, 2020, 07:57:04 pm »
When inspecting the dead body of the scavenger in SGS mortuary, at least one of the info texts refer to the deceased as a "he", even if the scavenger is a woman.

Also related, you can talk to the SGS guard at the entrance to mushroom cove about the dead scavenger, but ONLY if you select the dialogue option first. If you start by asking about Newton/mushroom cove in general, then the option to ask about the dead scavenger is lost.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #301 on: June 28, 2020, 09:37:19 pm »
Pictures highlight and show corrections.

1/5 (due to 192 KB restriction)
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #302 on: June 28, 2020, 09:38:27 pm »
2/5
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #303 on: June 28, 2020, 09:39:49 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #304 on: June 28, 2020, 09:41:03 pm »
4/5

This one may be intentional

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #305 on: June 28, 2020, 09:42:38 pm »
5/5

This is just one huge run-on sentence. Needs to be cleaned up and refined.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #306 on: June 29, 2020, 02:12:21 pm »
Trinket, not trinker.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #307 on: July 04, 2020, 03:38:40 pm »
Queue should be instead of stare?

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #308 on: July 08, 2020, 01:54:41 am »
The description for the old diploma says "faded and thorn", I presume it's meant to say torn.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #309 on: July 08, 2020, 01:07:21 pm »
Didnt snag a screenshot, but for the "dead mushroom cove scavenger" quest if the scavenger is female, Pascal will correctly refer to her as "her". If you then go and inspect the body, the text descriptions refer to her as him.

There was also one on an Ending slide, I'll have to get a screenshot of it later.
« Last Edit: July 08, 2020, 01:09:32 pm by Elite »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #310 on: July 21, 2020, 05:56:24 pm »
Psycho-neural reconstructive agent

"that helps should help with"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #311 on: July 21, 2020, 07:24:16 pm »
Dialogue with Preatorian soldier on Matriuss's boat:
"could be reached by hand" - dot missing
"root of it's problems" - 'its'
"it's display starts" - 'its'
"required for it's mass production" - 'its'
"Sure, it that would help" - 'if'
"by it's own mechanism" - 'its'

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #312 on: July 22, 2020, 09:38:38 pm »
I don't know where in the game it is, but the "crubled rocks" should be "crumbled"

edit:  depot A west
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #313 on: July 24, 2020, 08:45:41 pm »
Talking to the foundry sheriff after killing evelyn in the bunker "I had to kill her in self defence!" should be "defense"

also, the cactus plant in her bunker overlaps the player; figured that wasn't worth a thread to report
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #314 on: July 28, 2020, 10:09:08 am »
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Furthermore, Roche points out that the structures of the brain in which innervation that allows psionic activity takes place were never studied in such depth.

Should be to take place.

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Even though we know plenty about how brain as a whole works, ...

Should be how the brain.