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Jamolotl

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #75 on: August 16, 2014, 08:10:18 pm »
Just after Doctor Pasquale unlocks your psionic abilities he says "The inherit potential is there", which I assume should be "The inherent potential is there".

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mwnn

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #77 on: October 10, 2014, 08:42:38 am »
Two small dialog bugs I've noticed when talking with Dockmaster Silas @ Junkyard.

One just needs an extra space after the full stop.

For the other I'd suggest changing it to:

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Besides this, how many more favors do I need to do before I'll get access to the wormhole?


Great game btw. From the Dev Log it looks to be getting better and better.

It's substantially improved over an older version I tried; it really does deserve all the praise it gets @ RPG Codex.

Love the oddity XP system, combat encounters feel fairer (no longer need that early grenade against the bandits etc), limited skill points forces specialization.

Not completely sold on the merchant limits but I can understand the rationale.

A few more skill points for crafting? Not much fun seeing all this cool stuff I can't craft - requirements are very strict; I can't even recycle objects without a hefty investment.

Folding Evasion/Dodge into one skill? By the same logic - I suppose Pursuade/Intimidate could be folded into Speech?

Yet to try all the character types but I'm sure they'll all be very interesting/different. (Heavy) melee characters look to have an easier time  - not needing to invest in half as many stats/skills.
« Last Edit: October 12, 2014, 10:20:24 am by mwnn »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #78 on: October 12, 2014, 10:15:56 am »
Another small one with Quinton.

I'd suggest simply changing it to:
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I've brought your tissue sample"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #79 on: November 15, 2014, 09:58:18 am »
Expose Weakness ability description:

Preform a special melee attack
-> Perform a special melee attack

I also see a grammar problem in description:
"Perform a special melee attack that deals normal damage and reduces target's mechanical resistance and threshold by 50% if it lands for 2 turns."

Should be:
"Perform a special melee attack that deals normal damage and, if it lands, reduces target's mechanical resistance and threshold by 50% for 2 turns."

or:
"Perform a special melee attack that deals normal damage and reduces target's mechanical resistance and threshold by 50% for 2 turns, if it lands."

PhrygianDominant

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #80 on: December 17, 2014, 09:56:59 am »
And a small selection of dialog stuff...

Small? :D

Anyway, fixed everything. Thank you very much!

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #81 on: April 09, 2015, 02:34:22 am »
Constantine

It is followed by a sound of something, probably a dead boy, hitting the wall as it tumbles down. Constantine just laughs.

->body


Marcus

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #82 on: April 30, 2015, 12:39:10 pm »
I'm solving Jack Quicksilver's Hercules quest:
When Pasquale tests the drug he says:
"act upon different OGRANS"
instead of "organs".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #83 on: May 21, 2015, 05:15:38 am »

Daniel Arda small typo, says the instead of they.





Bisson Says died in sleep. Died in his sleep or many other options available.
« Last Edit: May 21, 2015, 11:50:27 pm by Agitated »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #84 on: July 19, 2015, 08:49:50 am »
I picked up some Toxic Sludge just outside SGS, the description reads: "A canister of toxic sludge. You should definitively be carrying this around." Should be 'definitely'.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #85 on: July 20, 2015, 07:00:42 pm »
In dialogue with Ezra i can say:
"a creature similar to what i desribed"
should be "described".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #86 on: July 22, 2015, 10:54:15 am »
In the conversation with Ambassador Athanas where he offers you a spot in the Protectorate: "I have already contacted the consul and explained him the whole situation. He is expecting you arrival, charname.' Should be 'explained to him' and 'your'.

Mykola in Core City: "My was doing honest work, my business used to flourish." Aside from the typo the sentence is a bit off, perhaps "I was doing honest work and my business was flourishing."

Meeting Gorsky in Core City: "With Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make a presence when the time comes." Should be "With the Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make our presence felt/known when the time comes."

More Gorsky: "After you cleared (should be clear)the location, you must find a way to get the tunneler operational again. Look around the city and see if anyone got (should be has) the expertise, but be discreet about it."

All the dialogue with Gorsky and Sneaky here is a bit off, really.
« Last Edit: July 23, 2015, 09:28:53 am by a bear named spigot »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #87 on: November 06, 2015, 09:39:23 pm »
As is:

Captain Blackwall: "The situation is as follows ... regular patrols around the perimiter..."

Needs to be "perimeter"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #88 on: December 14, 2015, 05:57:35 pm »
Gangster that is near the tunneler, when we try to persuade him, says:" (...) Yo, Mud, Trashman, Gravel and you Little Garbage, we is moving out!"

It should be "we are" I think :)

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #89 on: December 14, 2015, 06:52:16 pm »
 This seems intentional to me.
But the problem is, indeed, it zlots at Vlurxtrznbnaxl.