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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #345 on: August 14, 2020, 10:41:53 pm »


"thrown me out will."
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« Reply #346 on: August 14, 2020, 10:42:28 pm »
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« Reply #347 on: August 14, 2020, 10:43:28 pm »
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« Reply #348 on: August 14, 2020, 11:49:03 pm »
Dot is missing, in talk with Edgar about Rathound King.

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« Reply #349 on: August 15, 2020, 01:41:25 am »
When talking to katya, you can ask if she ever felt anything coming from the health center.  You say it's to the west, but it's east from port ceto. 
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« Reply #350 on: August 15, 2020, 02:20:22 am »
When you bring Todd to Grimm, at one point Grimm tells you to "go far a walk", should be "for"



Grimm repeats himself there, and then "him.Give" should have a space
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« Reply #351 on: August 15, 2020, 02:52:00 am »
In the ceto logs, when the navy is inspecting the collapsed entrance to the black sea, they talk about using drones to scout past the collapse, and mention "areal" vehicles which I assume is supposed to be "aerial"
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« Reply #352 on: August 15, 2020, 08:24:35 pm »


Seems like it should be Cruzer saying this.



Right after returning to grim after the second raid.



Should be "jetters" I think, unless its just how he talks
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« Reply #353 on: August 15, 2020, 09:23:30 pm »


Says this when you mention you did work for the eels, even if you never talked to anybody from aegis. 
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« Reply #354 on: August 16, 2020, 12:48:35 am »


Should be "gravelly" I think
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« Reply #355 on: August 21, 2020, 09:54:15 am »
When speaking to Doctor Stevenson in the Foundry the green text reads:

"It is as if the coat reflects its owner, for he too invokes a clear image of someone who used to be young and full of spirit but has now shriveling up as the hardships of life..."

Should probably be "is" or "has shrivelled".

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« Reply #356 on: August 21, 2020, 10:38:13 am »
When speaking to Dan in the Foundry the green text reads:

"...picks up his rifle which was also placed against the fance and offers..."

Should probably be "fence".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #357 on: September 01, 2020, 01:46:34 am »


"thatF"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #358 on: September 03, 2020, 04:05:57 am »



determining "he"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #359 on: September 05, 2020, 05:18:04 pm »
"incapacitates"