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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #630 on: April 21, 2022, 11:06:52 pm »
JKK receptionist - should be Man, not Van

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #631 on: April 30, 2022, 07:35:52 pm »
Should be east, not west.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #632 on: May 01, 2022, 02:44:32 pm »
Missing part of the text

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #633 on: May 06, 2022, 03:21:46 am »

"Specimens that are", not "specimen are"

Rogue space between "G." and "Vasilica"

I recall that this one has one extra space before "G." but I cannot remember, or maybe it's missing a space between "G." and "Vasilica".


Technically chatlogs have a valid reason to contain typos but double-spacing is rare

Needs space between "it." and "A"
« Last Edit: May 08, 2022, 02:25:17 pm by Barry »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #634 on: May 07, 2022, 01:34:32 pm »
Talk with Brer at Hopperdrome
Should be similar, not simmilar

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #635 on: May 07, 2022, 02:39:40 pm »
[1] As I remember, the player has to find their own way through the sewers. This part should be: I'll explain everything when we get there.

[2] Oh, we did relieve some poor wimp of his little toy.

[3] To avoid confusion, it should be 'stun', as there is a 'daze' status effect as well.

[4] universally, missing an 'L'

[5] Odd dialogue response.
« Last Edit: May 08, 2022, 09:34:06 am by WeiJayTan »
Take your time.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #636 on: May 10, 2022, 10:40:06 am »
All-In description status effect is not updated to include the -3 intelligence debuff

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #637 on: May 14, 2022, 07:01:28 pm »
Mushroom Cove Hunter Wolo random event.
3. 'Throwing' shouldn't start with capital letter
4. Missing space between each and other
7. Should be 'your tomb' and 'unleash'

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #638 on: May 16, 2022, 05:49:14 pm »
The mutie corpse in the Core City trash disposal/crane area (that can be recovered by crane) - "Mutie" is misspelled.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #639 on: May 29, 2022, 01:37:52 am »
From one of the emergency phones:

::It doesn't take a keen eye not to notice that this emergency phone seems to be quite outdated, both when it comes to its technology and current condition, or rather, lack of the two.::

::The relative proximity of the railroads, and the phone station's overall design, undoubtedly point to its purpose; they are to be used in situations which involve undesired circumstances when it comes to the functionality of the railroad traffic.::


Also, this isn't a spelling error, but the first line is also a little strange - to say something has an "outdated condition" doesn't sound quite right. Something like:

"... quite old, considering its technological composition as well as its current condition."

might work better.

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« Reply #640 on: May 29, 2022, 04:00:42 am »
::The insides of the box resemble a crime scene, it was shown no mercy. Furious pummeling has left little to work with.::

It should either be "The inside of the box" or "they were shown no mercy."

The second part could be kept the same if it was moved to the end of the sentence: "Furious pummeling has left little to work with; it was shown no mercy."


::The knowledge and skill required to find the correct place to start fixing this device , exceeds your own.::