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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #585 on: March 20, 2022, 01:08:08 am »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #586 on: March 20, 2022, 02:04:55 am »
[1] I feel like another patient...
I think the past tense is correct in that instance, although the 'a' is indeed pointless here



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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #587 on: March 21, 2022, 10:18:06 am »
Female Sec Trooper has dialogue line using the same pronoun as for male.
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« Reply #588 on: March 21, 2022, 02:39:11 pm »
During Hopperdrome commentator says about x hopper:
"Did x is feeling bad?"
It should be "Is x feeling bad?"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #589 on: March 21, 2022, 06:41:12 pm »
There is small inconsistency regarding Acorn in dialogue with Professor:
Description of item says it is inscribed with ACoNR text, but when giving it to Oldfield, it reads that it is Acorn(from capital A to capital N)
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #590 on: March 27, 2022, 06:53:55 pm »
Dialogue with Kharon - should probably be 'Greatest', not Greanesst.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #591 on: March 28, 2022, 04:16:48 pm »
Intelligence check in dialogue with Geezer Ford should start with upper case letter
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #592 on: March 29, 2022, 12:15:25 pm »
Some dialogue in game that I think could use a little change.

[1] I think a better wording would be:
"Gene told me you are an Underrail Express train operator."
As it is consistent with how Gene had told the player.


[2] If I remember correctly, even after the player has been assigned by either the Preservation Forces or the Department of Physics to do some work in the West Wing, the only response the player has to end the conversation with after asking why the West Wing is dangerous, is:

"I'll go where it's safe. Goodbye, sister."

Could use some additional dialogue if the player has already been assigned to do some work in the West Wing.


[3] I found this part a little odd. Since this is the first time that the player has visited the Free Drones Base after being recruited, I think that the way Hutch would say it, would be:

[...] you'll run straight into Becket, our supplier. You can get a lot of good stuff from him, but more about that later. A bit further to the left is our medical office. [...]

[4] If I recall correctly, this is the first time that Todor Sallywatch's name is mentioned. But even without hearing his full name, when the player inquires about him to Everard, the player says: "About Todor Sallywatch..."

Mentioning Todor Sallywatch's full name in the spot shown in [4] should do the trick.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #593 on: March 29, 2022, 12:26:59 pm »
[1] AND [2]:
Sorry to keep you waiting.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #594 on: March 29, 2022, 12:38:31 pm »
[1] up to the highest standards
[2] slowing
[3] extinct
[4] Double Bass
[5] three disjointed Subislander families
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #595 on: March 29, 2022, 01:10:21 pm »
[2] The things I hear from you have stopped sounding strange a long time ago; what is strange is that we've actually reached that point.
Regarding 'that point', I believe it is referring to 'the point that the player finds that the things Dude says have stopped sounding strange'.
[3] deeper into the mine
[4] greatly pleased by your performance so far to the point of arranging for you to become the owner of
[5] since his disappearance
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #596 on: April 01, 2022, 01:42:27 am »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #597 on: April 04, 2022, 10:50:50 am »
Computer logs at Caerus Residential  - Gunter Vasilica computer
In second conversation with Maria Hope there is a missing letter 't' in commitee.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #598 on: April 04, 2022, 02:17:42 pm »
1. Should be 'Distraught with fear'
2. Missing space between 'is' and 'east'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #599 on: April 06, 2022, 09:38:38 am »
Katya dialogue about dreams: should be 'apparent', not 'aparent'
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