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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #405 on: August 08, 2020, 09:50:23 pm »


"your"
"tinkering with the device"
"around with the"
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« Reply #406 on: August 08, 2020, 09:55:15 pm »


"with an intimidating"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #407 on: August 10, 2020, 01:21:46 am »


"Things have been rough"

"Tunnelers"
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« Reply #408 on: August 14, 2020, 10:40:55 pm »


"desire to use"
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« Reply #409 on: August 14, 2020, 10:41:53 pm »


"thrown me out will."
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« Reply #410 on: August 14, 2020, 10:42:28 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #411 on: August 14, 2020, 10:43:28 pm »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #412 on: August 14, 2020, 11:49:03 pm »
Dot is missing, in talk with Edgar about Rathound King.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #413 on: August 15, 2020, 01:41:25 am »
When talking to katya, you can ask if she ever felt anything coming from the health center.  You say it's to the west, but it's east from port ceto. 
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« Reply #414 on: August 15, 2020, 02:20:22 am »
When you bring Todd to Grimm, at one point Grimm tells you to "go far a walk", should be "for"



Grimm repeats himself there, and then "him.Give" should have a space
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« Reply #415 on: August 15, 2020, 02:52:00 am »
In the ceto logs, when the navy is inspecting the collapsed entrance to the black sea, they talk about using drones to scout past the collapse, and mention "areal" vehicles which I assume is supposed to be "aerial"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #416 on: August 15, 2020, 08:24:35 pm »


Seems like it should be Cruzer saying this.



Right after returning to grim after the second raid.



Should be "jetters" I think, unless its just how he talks
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« Reply #417 on: August 15, 2020, 09:23:30 pm »


Says this when you mention you did work for the eels, even if you never talked to anybody from aegis. 
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« Reply #418 on: August 16, 2020, 12:48:35 am »


Should be "gravelly" I think
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #419 on: August 21, 2020, 09:54:15 am »
When speaking to Doctor Stevenson in the Foundry the green text reads:

"It is as if the coat reflects its owner, for he too invokes a clear image of someone who used to be young and full of spirit but has now shriveling up as the hardships of life..."

Should probably be "is" or "has shrivelled".