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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #420 on: August 15, 2020, 02:20:22 am »
When you bring Todd to Grimm, at one point Grimm tells you to "go far a walk", should be "for"



Grimm repeats himself there, and then "him.Give" should have a space
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« Reply #421 on: August 15, 2020, 02:52:00 am »
In the ceto logs, when the navy is inspecting the collapsed entrance to the black sea, they talk about using drones to scout past the collapse, and mention "areal" vehicles which I assume is supposed to be "aerial"
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« Reply #422 on: August 15, 2020, 08:24:35 pm »


Seems like it should be Cruzer saying this.



Right after returning to grim after the second raid.



Should be "jetters" I think, unless its just how he talks
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #423 on: August 15, 2020, 09:23:30 pm »


Says this when you mention you did work for the eels, even if you never talked to anybody from aegis. 
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« Reply #424 on: August 16, 2020, 12:48:35 am »


Should be "gravelly" I think
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #425 on: August 21, 2020, 09:54:15 am »
When speaking to Doctor Stevenson in the Foundry the green text reads:

"It is as if the coat reflects its owner, for he too invokes a clear image of someone who used to be young and full of spirit but has now shriveling up as the hardships of life..."

Should probably be "is" or "has shrivelled".

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« Reply #426 on: August 21, 2020, 10:38:13 am »
When speaking to Dan in the Foundry the green text reads:

"...picks up his rifle which was also placed against the fance and offers..."

Should probably be "fence".

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #427 on: September 01, 2020, 01:46:34 am »


"thatF"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #428 on: September 03, 2020, 04:05:57 am »



determining "he"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #429 on: September 05, 2020, 05:18:04 pm »
"incapacitates"

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« Reply #430 on: September 06, 2020, 10:25:27 pm »

"expect" should be "except"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #431 on: September 07, 2020, 08:05:38 pm »


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #432 on: September 08, 2020, 04:08:46 pm »


"payng"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #433 on: September 09, 2020, 04:16:32 am »


"dare"

and "my" x5, though that's probably intentional
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #434 on: September 11, 2020, 05:52:01 pm »
Where the cursor is. ;)