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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #765 on: May 05, 2024, 06:14:59 pm »
yer yer

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #766 on: May 13, 2024, 02:46:36 pm »
[1] coming -> going
[2] After a while he responds.
[3] Incorrect Green Text/Dialogue
[4] the girl
[5]
[6] Neither -> None
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #767 on: May 13, 2024, 02:54:28 pm »
[1] message
[2] brought
[3] Tell me about the sinking ship metaphor again.
[4] They're
[5] What just happened?
[6]
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #768 on: May 13, 2024, 05:28:48 pm »
[2] had; his -> this
[3] qualifications; . -> ?
[4] ? -> .
[5] to eliminate
[6] thought
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #769 on: May 14, 2024, 02:01:12 pm »
[1] *This description can be a bit misleading for potential buyers of the Torpedo, as it with stock parts only has one engine equipped. It has two engine slots...
[2] (Female player character) she
[3] *I think this is a female sec trooper.
[4] *If he's referring to the overcharged facility, it's below. This part should have been: I've seen it from up here.; coveres -> covers
[5] controler -> controller
[6] Underraill -> Underrail
« Last Edit: May 14, 2024, 02:04:23 pm by WeiJayTan »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #770 on: May 15, 2024, 03:36:56 am »
[1]
[2] rathound -> the rathound barbecue
[3] to -> too
[4] in -> through
[5] I'm -> I
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #771 on: May 15, 2024, 05:03:54 pm »
[1] (spacing); sa -> as
[2] treversable -> traversable
[4] has -> is
[5] thin -> thinning
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #772 on: May 18, 2024, 04:40:29 pm »
[1] Gotta -> Got
[2] to sewers -> to the city sewers; In the slums I've met -> There I met
[3] vigilantie -> vigilante
[4] definitelly -> definitely; smg -> SMG
[5] Statford -> Stratford
[6] Copy -> Copying
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #773 on: May 23, 2024, 11:40:31 pm »
"I though he'd pay."

Meant to be "thought he'd pay"


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #774 on: June 03, 2024, 01:22:30 am »
It's acting like I chose the "how much are you offering?" option.  I figure he's supposed to call my bullshit and say "if you're supposed to give it to oldfield, why do you have it here?"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #775 on: June 07, 2024, 11:13:51 pm »
::He gestures the bald Zone Rat to check the locker. The aforementioned and shows that there are not enough shields inside.::

I said ten energy shields. *Ten*. Can't you count?

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Something is missing after "aforementioned"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #776 on: June 08, 2024, 03:32:34 am »
should be "didn't leave something important behind" not left

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #777 on: June 17, 2024, 02:18:16 am »
When you ask Eidein about moving tchort to the institute he says the institutes means would "provide insufficient" I think its meant to be "Prove insufficient"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #778 on: June 17, 2024, 02:38:45 am »
When you warn Eidein about the invasion the dialogue line is "they are planning an invasion on Institute of Tchort soon" it should be "they are planning an invasion on the Institute of Tchort soon"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #779 on: June 17, 2024, 03:51:01 am »
"Fully conscious and part of real world" should be "Fully conscious and part of the real world" Faceless cmdr mindreader dialogue
« Last Edit: June 17, 2024, 03:57:55 am by Eidein »