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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #780 on: June 22, 2024, 03:53:45 pm »
"The Talloski family is a trading giant here in Core City. My father, Vlatko, started the business - and I'm  his heir, you know.[...]" - Maxim

double space between "I'm" and "his heir"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #781 on: June 25, 2024, 12:30:39 pm »
Hollow earth E.mali and T.cox Log about teaching brawlin

The ending message should be by T.cox and not E.mali

With E.mali saying "send me his contact" and T.cox saying "Good I will"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #782 on: June 30, 2024, 03:10:40 pm »
Double space between "Thought" and 'Control" on the description of the Tchortist Noble Robe

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #783 on: July 03, 2024, 08:27:16 pm »
A bloated, sightless, nebulous abortion feeds on the bystander's thoughs. - Void Battle, should have been thoughts
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #784 on: July 07, 2024, 06:08:36 am »
Sure I'll take > Sure, I'll take

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #785 on: July 19, 2024, 10:59:19 am »
"this godmen technology is strange thing, yes" should be technology is a strange thing

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #786 on: July 30, 2024, 06:00:48 pm »
"Sally forth now to topple the their foul foundations" - DomiNation revelation, redundant 'the'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #787 on: August 04, 2024, 02:04:02 pm »
#IO000345/10:15 - Vessel #CC019E arrives with a shipment of exoskeleton power packs, which are thankfully ligher, safer and less volatile than the...

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #788 on: August 08, 2024, 02:45:17 pm »
Should be "descend"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #789 on: August 16, 2024, 12:58:43 pm »
unnecessary "eye"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #790 on: August 17, 2024, 07:42:03 pm »
Pretty sure it's missing 'the' between 'through' and 'communicator'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #791 on: August 18, 2024, 10:34:25 am »
The first time you talk to Gorge in the hardcore city bar, if you pick the bottom option to leave the conversation, its this.  I'm assuming its supposed to be "Nothing" rather than "No one"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #792 on: August 19, 2024, 07:20:44 am »
Last dialogue option should be in green color just like *Shrug* option
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #793 on: September 08, 2024, 06:44:24 pm »
Administering supersoldier drug to hopperdrome hopper text says as if the drug is a pill when it is not
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #794 on: October 20, 2024, 02:02:02 am »
This zoner seems to be fiddling with an "electronic look"...

Pretty sure this zoner is fiddling with an "electronic lock" however.
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