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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #660 on: October 24, 2022, 04:05:37 am »
Another in the Oculus files, in the Old Biocorp info

goals - goal

pursuing increasingly isolationist attitude - pursuing an increasingly isolationist attitude
or just change attitude to policies
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #661 on: October 24, 2022, 04:46:10 am »
Tunnel hatch key is missing key in its name

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #662 on: October 24, 2022, 08:49:40 am »
Abram's info on the institute of tchort - should say their

also missing 'it' between achieved and through
and 'the' or 'a' after through
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #663 on: October 26, 2022, 07:53:58 am »
typo in wolo & shoogi random event dialog, when you say "How about no?" and the dog barks

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #664 on: November 06, 2022, 05:09:34 am »
typo in the second jkk mission where you have to meet ola in the sewers. previous dialogue option was about asking him to leave behind a trail of bread crumbs. "The" should be "They"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #665 on: November 08, 2022, 04:43:57 pm »
Anticolagulant newest ability has error in the description and it says '2 turns turns' instead of '2 turns' and is missing info that it applies 10 stacks of anticolagulant to a weapon.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #666 on: November 08, 2022, 05:50:23 pm »
Yahota dialogue about Briggs - I think the gap between text is a bit too large here
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #667 on: November 08, 2022, 06:00:03 pm »
Harmost dialogue - should be 'now i know' rather than 'know i know'
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #668 on: December 14, 2022, 11:54:54 am »
Sidle to the other side
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #669 on: January 01, 2023, 03:02:12 pm »
Formatting in dialogue with Zack in Camera Problems quest is incorrect
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #670 on: January 30, 2023, 01:48:30 pm »
Many spelling/grammar issues in Phreak's questline. It definitely stands out compared to the rest of Underrail's excellent dialogue.

Some highlights from the first conversation:
- "He calms his beard"
- "The sorrow on his face faints"
- "the same thought buzzes my mind"
- "prefered"                         -> preferred
- "beggining"                       -> beginning
- "a literal sewage"               -> literal sewage
- "an vigorous old man"        -> a vigorous old man
- "much more resembles"     -> more closely resembles
- "out of place furniture"       -> out-of-place furniture
- "you've picked him up"       -> you heard him
- "he once again mentioned" -> he mentioned
- "... maybe, you could be an exception to that rule." His rule is not always mentioned
- Unnecessary prepositions like "Firstly"
- Many, many commas lol
- Run-on sentences
- Hanging spaces and double-spaces between some words
- Tone varies wildly throughout the conversation

Longer examples with fixes:
"... What stands apart from the usual decrepit mugger look, is his clenched right fist, or rather, the glove he's wearing. ..." ->

The old man steps towards you. His decrepit silhouette glows in the pulsing blue light of his clenched right fist. Wires coil from the joints of his fingers up his arm, disappearing into the sleeve of his ragged overcoat.

"This predicament is completely avoidable. It's in neither's interest to escalate this non-existing conflict any further. On the other hand, I'm much more interested in having a conversation. After all, we should act like humans, not insects." ->

This predicament is completely avoidable; I'm much more interested in having a conversation. We're people, not insects.

If possible, it might be worth just running a Microsoft Word spelling/grammar-check on his whole dialogue tree rather than hunting for individual changes.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #671 on: May 10, 2023, 01:01:50 pm »
Missing space between 'I'll stay here.' and the next sentence.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #672 on: May 30, 2023, 03:37:32 am »
The protectorate marine armor says it has a "tactical west"; should be "vest"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #673 on: June 05, 2023, 01:54:30 pm »
"no. matter. what!" at the end looks odd, I think the dots should be removed between these words
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #674 on: June 28, 2023, 12:46:24 am »
Kaya:

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It would seem that this is the woman, mentioned by the person you've talked to on the other side of the cave called: Kaya. From time to time, the hand which she's using to hold the shotgun, jitters slightly. It is obvious to you that she is drained completly, as her grip on the gun is weak.

completly -> completely


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Walking up the stairs, your pressence briefly interupts an ongoing conversation. However as you keep approaching, they continue where they've left off.

There's no way we're going back in there again. The place was a bloody nightmare, I'm telling you. Both of them turn towards you, and for a moment, the rigmaster seems surprised to see you.

pressence -> presence
interupts -> interrupts

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Jetters? She raises her weapon. I... I can't belive it. Soon after she lowers her shotgun as her hands start shaking. Leave me be. She points to the exit of the cave.

belive -> believe


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Darling and I shared simmilar fates. Both of our families are gone now.

simmilar -> similar


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In the end he was regretfull for everything that has transpired here. I didn't catch much more than that.

regretfull -> regretful